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Madhura

@..Madhura..

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Posted: 11 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: RoshiniluvPrAja
its pretty gud...sumthng different..n yeah..PM me also..

thank you so much Rosh
yes u r added to my PM list

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Madhura

@..Madhura..

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Posted: 11 years ago

#32

I want to post the next part on the next page plz don't reply here

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Madhura

@..Madhura..

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Posted: 11 years ago

#33

Author's Note : Hey guys meeting you today at the beginning. I have edited the first part and turned all the English dialogue into hindi because I realised that real MP magic can be created in hindi , I wanted to post this in hindi first only but I posted it in English but because of my friend's insistence I edited the first part guys do read it and after that read this part .Buy for now meet you at the end

He let himself get lost in those eyes . Ajabde also sensed his eyes on her and looked straight into the eyes of the tall and impressive boy standing a little away from her near the edge . They looked into each other's eyes as if trying to read them . Beside Pratap , Yuvraj who was still searching turned and looked at his friend and followed his gaze . However instead of Ajabde his eyes fell on the ring the girl beside Ajabde was holding.
"Hamari unghuthi!! " Yuvraj shouted , which made Pratap and Ajabde come back to reality. Yuvraj ran to Phool and tried to snatch the ring from her hand . Phool didn't give it at first , but failed in front of his strength. Yuvraj took the ring and ran back to Pratap .
"Hame hamari unghuti mil gayi Pratap !!" He again shouted , Pratap smiled but instead of ring his eyes were looking at Ajabde secretly.

" Phool chaliye hame ab jana chahiye bohot der ho chuki he " said Ajabde pulling Phool's arm.
"Nahi Ajabde hame vo unghuti vapas leni hogi " said Phool looking at the boy who snatched the ring from her hand.
"Par kyu Phool vo unki unghuti he " said Ajabde confused
"Ajabde apko sachi lagta he ki vo unki unghuti he zara dekhiye unke taraf kisan ke bete lagte he ve , aur vo unghuti kisi mahan Raja ya Rajkumar ki lagti he" said Phool now looking at the boys suspiciously
"Kapdo se to han ve lagte he kisan ke bete par Phool unke chehere aur sharir ko dekhiye koi mahan yodha se kam nahi he " said Ajabde looking at Pratap from corner her eyes .Phool looked at the boys and thought on Ajabde's words ' they looked very impressive to be son's of farmers. '.She brushed off all her thoughts and went to the boys ignoring Ajabde.
"Suniye" she said in her princess tone
"Ji" Yuvraj turned still smiling looking at his ring
"Hume vo unghuti vapas kijiye" said Phool ordering them
"Kya???"asked Yuvraj thinking he heard something wrong.
"Vo unghuti hame vapas kijiye"said Phool again
"Par kyu ye hamari unghuti he"said Yuvraj looking at her confused
"Ji nahi hame pata he app jhut bol rahe he unghuti hame vapas kijiye"said Phool with full confidence. Pratap and Yuvraj shared confused looks.
"Hum nahi denge ye hamari he " said Yuvraj
"Ese kese nahi denge app ko deni padegi" said Phool and tried to snatch it from his hands but failed
"Hum nahi denge" said Yuvraj
"Dekhiye app jante nahi he hum kon he " said Phool trying again to snatch the ring
"Hame janana bhi nahi ,app hamari unghuti ko chodiye"said Yuvraj pulling the ring
"Hum...hum Raj..." Phool stopped as she felt her hand pressed by Ajabde who have came running to stop her from reveling her identity .Phool and Yuvraj again started arguing Ajabde and Pratap were trying their best to stop tyem but to no avail .Ajabde irritated turned her back facing the trio. That was when she realised where she was standing at the very edge of the hill she looked down her eyes horrified , she was facing her biggest fear of height. Looking down she called out "Ph...Ph...Phool" . Phool was too busy in snatching the ring and didn't heard Ajabde, Ajabde kept calling her. In Yuvraj and Phool's ring snatching game the ring fell down and down it went from the hill . Pratap , Yuvraj and Phool looked down, Ajabde kept calling Phool, Yuvraj looked down and then looked at Phool he quickly turned and ran down .Phool understood what was going on in his head and holding her lehenga up she ran behind him.

Pratap was about to follow them but he stopped as he heard Ajabde calling out for Phool . "Ph..ph..Phool" called out Ajabde in low voice. He went to her "Kya hua?" he asked , Ajabde who was expecting Phool's soft voice hearing Pratap's voice turned quickly her leg slipped and she closed her eyes tightly shouting. Pratap got hold of her hand and there she was leaning down her back facing the earth with his hand's support . He pulled her and she bumped into him still holding his hand tightly she opened her eyes slowly and looked up at him , in his eyes . They again started reading each other's eyes , he holding her hand tightly near his chest , the breeze , birds and the rustling of leaves making soft noise. She broke the silence and the song of the nature saying in a whisper " kya hum zinda he ?" Pratap remained silent for some time and softly said "haan".They again lost themselves in each other's eyes .This moment didn't last any longer , they heard a loud noise like something has fallen in water .They both quickly moved apart. Pratap avoided embarrassed Ajabde and looked down the hill to find out the source of noise, Ajabde was very shocked and afraid to look down. Without saying anything Pratap raced down the hill with a tense look , without having any other option Ajabde followed him. Reaching down Ajabde saw Yuvraj in lake cursing Phool and Phool laughing at him. Ajabde went to Phool while Pratap helped Yuvraj to come out .
"Kya ye apne kiya Phool ?"asked Ajabde
"Prashna puchna chodiye aur anand lijiye Ajabde "said Phool still laughing pointing at Yuvraj.
After coming out Yuvraj went to Phool , water dripping from his hair and cloths .
"Apki himat kaise hue hame talab me dhakelne ki" said Yuvraj , threatening Phool with his angry look.
"Jaisi apki himat hue hamse unghuti chine ki" said Phool
"Bus kijiye Yuvraj chaliye yahase "said Pratap pulling him
"Nahi Pratap aj to hum inhe sabak sikha kar hi shwas lege" said Yuvraj resisting , Pratap pulled him again.
"Haan kar lijiye apko jo karna he" said Phool , Ajabde tried to stop her but she was not ready to go without taking the ring. Pratap was finally successful, Yuvraj started walking with him still he had to pull him. Ajabde also pulled Phool and they walked on their opposite paths , Phool and Yuvraj turned and gave each other angry looks "Apko bugatna padega" shouted Yuvraj
"Haan Haan to hum bhi darte nahi he " Phool shouted back.Pratap and Ajabde didn't need to pull them anymore Phool and Yuvraj walked away Pratap stoped and turned on other side Ajabde did the same they looked at each other for sometime and then followed their friends.

The sky was dark and stars were twinkling . Phool was moving from one end of the room to another end , Ajabde was sitting on the bed her brother playing on her lap.
"Pata nahi kya samajte he apne apko"said Phool and walked to another end" Ajabde aj agar apne hame roka nahi hota na to hum unse vo unghuti le hi lete" she said stopping in front of the bed and looking at Ajabde.
"Unki himat dekhi vo hamse, Rajkumari Phoolkanwar se uchi awaz me bat kar rahe the " said Phool
"Phool unhe kaha pata tha ki aap Rajkumari he isliye "said Ajabde
"Han...to...ve ek ladki se bhi uchi awaz me bat nahi kar sakte ,unhe apni maryada me rehena chahiye tha"said Phool
"Phool Maryada to apne bhi lang di thi na , kitni uchi awaz me bat kar rahi thi ap, aur phir unhe talab me dhakelna vo bhi to thik nahi tha na"said Ajabde leaving Phool speechless
"Ajabde aap hamari dost he ya unki" asked Phool
"Apki Phool" said Ajabde
"Phir ap unki taraf dari kyu kar rahi "
"Phool Hum unki tarafdari kaha hum to bus..."
"rehene dijiye Ajabde apse to baat karna hi bekar he up ke pas har sawal ka utar hota he...par agar vo hamare samne vapas agaye na to hum unhe chodege nahi" said Phool

Yuvraj and Pratap were sharpening their swords in their Khema , Pratap was sharpening his sword but his mind was busy thinking something else.
"Kuch bhi sanskar nahi the unme " said Yuvraj talking about Phool
"Esa mat kahiye hame to ve bohot sanskari aur shant lagi "said Pratap, Yuvraj stoped his work and looked at Pratap shocked "kya kaha apne ?? Vo aur shant dekha nahi apne ve hampe kese unchi awaz me bat kar rahi thi " said Yuvraj
"Unhe apse bathi kab ki ve to shant bethi thi, ap kiski bat kar rahe he ?" asked Pratap
"Hum unki bat kar rahe jo humse hamari unghuti cheen rahi thi " siad Yuvraj
"Achaaa hame laga ki ap unke sath jo thi unki bat kar rahe he " said Pratap
" kya?? Hum unki bat kyu karege hum...chodiye " said Yuvraj and again started sharpening his Sword with a angry look "par jo bhi ham to unhe sabak sikhayge zarur "

Next morning Ajabde and Phool got ready and went outside their room to see all the servants cleaning the mehel and doing work very fast all dasis were busy doing some or the other work .Hansa bai was scolding one dasi to work fast Ajabde and Phool went to her "Maa ye sab tayariya kisliye horahi he?" asked Ajabde
"Ajabde aj apke data ko Rana Uday Singh unke purane mitra ka sandesh mila ve Bijoliya padharne wale he unke putra aur Kunwar Yuv..." Said Hansabai and stopped in between as a Dasi came their "Rani sa apne jo pakwan bole the unki suchi mil nahi rahi " said the dasi
"Kya ?? Tum sab ka dhyan kaha reheta he chalo me phir se baneti hu...Ajabde hum apse bad me baat karte he" said Hansabai and went with the dasi
"Phool chaliye hum jate he "said Ajabde
"Kaha?"
"Vo Maa ki madat karne "said Ajabde
"Hame bhi Hansa masi ki madat karni he "said Phool excited. This didn't excited Phool at all , she knew Phool was not into doing work at all instead of helping she increases the work .Ajabde convinced her to do some other work . Phool went to her room and stood near the window , she knew why Ajabde didn't want her to work because sue was not good at doing this work and she was also not interested. She looked down and saw some soldiers doing sword practise . She went where Ajabde's father does sword practise there was nobody their she took a sword and started doing what the soldiers were doing , she didn't liked to get dirty but she liked doing this with the sword , she practiced their for a long time taking out her jewellery.

Ajabde was decorating the pooja thal for athithi . She noticed a small injury on her hand and she remembered it was caused due to the kada that boy who saved her was wearing .She remembered how they were just inches away and...Hansabai came there .
"Ajabde aap ja ke tayar hoke ayiye ye hum sambhal lege "said Hansa bai
"Tayar ? Kisliye maa?"
"Ajabde Rana uday Singh ane wale he unke swagat ke liye"
"Par maa... "
"Ajabde jaldi jaiye "

Ajabde went to her room and saw her friend in a condition she never expected her to see . Phool was not wearing any jewellery she was sweating badly and her hairs were in very bad condition she went to her and asked "Phool ap...apne ye kya haal bana rakha he aap kya kar rahi thi itni der "Phool looked at her for time and said "kuch nahi Ajabde hum vo bus...hum snan karke ate he " she said went from without answering Ajabde's question .

Ajabde got ready looking simple and beautiful Phool also came there , ready. A dasi came there and said "Ajabde bai sa , Phoolkanwar bai sa meheman aa chuke he app dono ko bulaya he " .Ajabde and Phool went to the main hall not knowing about the surprise waiting for them.

Author's Note : Hello guys me again here . About the banner I leave it to you all if like it or not because I think it is horrible but about Yuvraj in that banner. ...that also I leave it to you. Do comment and hit the like button if you like the chapter and if you don't like then also hit like 😆 😉

Edited by Madhuras_Rule - 11 years ago

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kiminonawa

@kiminonawa

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Posted: 11 years ago

#34

really nice start dear,,,

continue if possible :)

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Madhura

@..Madhura..

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: Rhea_13
really nice start dear,,,
continue if possible :)

Thank you
ya I will continue 😃

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CallmeCel

@CallmeCel

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#36

Madsss!!!!!!
Amazing dear...
Par sach mein yaar hadd ho gayi, bohot zyada jaldi nahin update kar di tune???
Superlate kahin ki...
Anyways, just loved it dear,
the way you are progressing with your story is impressive.
About the banner...
Rajat...god I loved him so much...he was really cute and charming when he did PRC. That show, until they changed Rajat I watched each an every episode of it...
I found him really cute.
What Flower got PRC as her Yuvraj... :/
Koi ni... Meri Ajab ko toh apna Pratu mil gaya...
Will be waiting for your update, now please
Itna late mat karna update karne mein...

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nerdndproud

@nerdndproud

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#37

awesome update...but plz update next part soon

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Madhura

@..Madhura..

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: AsYa_Celana
Madsss!!!!!!
Amazing dear...
Par sach mein yaar hadd ho gayi, bohot zyada jaldi nahin update kar di tune???
Superlate kahin ki...
Anyways, just loved it dear,
the way you are progressing with your story is impressive.
About the banner...
Rajat...god I loved him so much...he was really cute and charming when he did PRC. That show, until they changed Rajat I watched each an every episode of it...
I found him really cute.
What Flower got PRC as her Yuvraj... :/
Koi ni... Meri Ajab ko toh apna Pratu mil gaya...
Will be waiting for your update, now please
Itna late mat karna update karne mein...

Celiii *tight wala hug*
Kya karo oh Celi me hu adat se majbur huzur huzur me hu adat se majboor 😆 😆
Thank you celi this means a lot *bowing* 😃
yarrr apni choices kitni milti he me too liked him , he was cute
hmm I knw but jaise mene pehela kaha tha just forget that flower concentrate on My Phool
ye bohot different he use 😊
uska promise nahi kar sakti me exams ane wali he isliye shayad...ho sakta he late
thank you so much dear

love u
Madhura