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Posted: 14 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: desisweetheart9

great part. luved the shower scene.😳. ooh Guddu is going to help Runjhun wear her sari. luv the song Te Amo. update as soon as you can. 😊



same here...even i like te amo...!!! thank u so much for liking...
would try updating asap!!!😛

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Posted: 14 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: sur001

hey Sanju ...
Luvd it dear...
tip tip barsa shower
aur gunjhun ko bhigoya
gunjhun ko bhingakar
saabun se fislakar
bahon se girakar
runjhun ke kamar ki
guddu ne watt lagayi 😆
update soon



my sur dear turned sur shaayar???
thank you lotzz...😛
love ya...!!!🤗

Edited by MikanSakura - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: Julz06

Lovely update and precap waiting 4 the next update
plz pm me when ur updating



thank you, dear...would surely pm you...
thanx a lot...!!!!😛

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Posted: 14 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: Nidhsara

Absolutely loved it Sanju...

Hayye ye Mr and Mrs Shukla ka hum ka kare...
Saree pehnana what a romantic moment it will be...me waiting😊



thank you so much...u know, after coming to this forum, i kinda started understanding romance...😆😆😆...before toh, i was just an animax freak!!!😉
thanx for liking!!!😛
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: KriYa_life


Hey buddy.. Im new to ur ff.. & my my, im already in luv wid it.. Wow. Cud u pls pm me when u update next..



thanx kriya...would surely pm you, when i update...!! thanx a lot for liking...!!!😛
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Posted: 14 years ago
#36

😛Chapter 4😛



Runjhun thinks hard...n finally calls her mom by her cellphone...

Ragini: Dont u know to put a saree??? U r a designer..!!

Runjhun: designer maa, not model... please help, na!!

Ragini tells her...n finally explains how to make the folds of saree around the waist...suddenly her phone gets switched off...low battery!!

Runjhun throws the phone on the bed..!!

She had almost put the saree but the folds were not done...she wonders how to go out like that..!!

Guddu pops in...notices Runjhun's condition...struggling with her saree...

Guddu: may I help you..??

Runjhun frowns: saree pehni hai kya kabhi??? (have you ever worn a saree???)

Guddu: no...but i can try putting the folds...those are quite similar to that of Dhoti..!!

Runjhun: if u dare make me look dumb...u just wait n watch what i do to you..!!

Guddu smirks: chill...i wont make you look dumber...!!

Runjhun frowns...Guddu puts the folds for her...Runjhun stares at him...first angrily & then gets mesmerised looking at his innocent face...so close...yet, so far...!!

Guddu makes the folds n gives it to her: see, if it's alright...!!

She smiles...Guddu about to leave...turns back...hands Runjhun's phone over to her...

Guddu: "my husband helped me put on my saree...i m not good for even that..!! M so useless..!!"

Runjhun puzzled: shut up!! whats this??

Guddu grins: your facebook status!!

Runjhun stares angrily: my cellphone battery is low..!! (marches out)

Guddu smiles, as ever...

Downstairs...

All of them sit for the pooja...

Guddu doesnt believe on God...calls it a humbug...

Kukkan: Guru, paanch minute ki hi toh baat hai...kyun baal ki khaal nikaal rahe ho??? (its just a matter of 5 minutes, whats the need to make such a fuss outa it)...

Guddu agrees...

Runjhun in mind: how rude...even to God..!! Dunno what troubles him to behave this way to everyone...God is so gracious..!

Guddu: only to some...n madam, do i ever interfere in ur business?? So stay out of my personal matters...will you??

Runjhun closes her eyes n prays...Guddu still sitting with a pumpkin face...

Pooja over...

Reception party...

Kunal asks Runjhun for her favourite song...she says Te Amo...

Kukkan: u too like Guru's songs...

Runjhun: Guru??

Kunal gaining his senses: err... Guru??? Did I say that?? I am really sorry...I meant Guddu...Guddu, the singing superstar!!

Runjhun nods...

Kukkan plays the song...n starts dancing with Devi...then they go away n push Gunjhun to the dance floor...

...Gunjhun waltz...on Te Amo...of Dum maaro Dum...

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=U9GKHfgpH2o[/YOUTUBE]


LYRICS with TRANSLATION...only Gunjhun part!!:
(one of my achievements...OMG!! I did the translation...😉)


Kabhi lagey mili nahin, tumse main khwaabon mein bhi
sometimes i feel ive never met you even in my fantasies

Kabhi lagey kahin toh hai ristha koi
sometimes do i feel there is some relation between us

Kabhi lagey chhu tumhe, yunhi khayalon mein hi
sometimes i think of feeling you in my dreams

Kabhi lagey nahin nahin chori nahin
sometimes its like, no no i wont do a theft (??😆)

Te amo me te amo
i love you (in spanish)

Tu paas hai par door hai
you're so close...yet so far...

Te amo me te amo
i love you

Jaata nahin yeh noor hai
(????)

Teri chori bhi yeh manzoor manzoor hai
your theft is also like okay for me(😆)

Falling so crazy in love
Te amo me te amo...



(hush...!!! 😆😆😆 i did the translation somehow...!! but its me, na so please...sorry for any faults...😆...anyone would like to assist, to make the translation sound a bit decent???😆)


anyhow, Superb dance...every1 applauds...!!

Runjhun makes a face at Guddu: only by moving their lips over Guddu's song, or by changing one's pet name to Guddu, one can not become like him...so dont try to impress upon me..!!

Guddu turns to Runjhun in annoy...

Runjhun smirks like a fool n makes her way out...Guddu frustrated...!!

Edited by MikanSakura - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#37

😆Chapter 5😆



Next day...sunday...

In the Living room...

Kabir n Daddy doin some office discussion...

Payal asks Runjhun to help Bunty (10yrs old...Payal n Kabir's son) with his hindi lessons...

Runjhun asks him his doubts...he says he doesnt understand epics... Runjhun starts telling him the story of Diwali festival...

Guddu: Bunty beta, pass hona hai toh jaldi se cut le...(if you really wanna pass, then better run away)

Bunty about to leave...Runjhun pulls his hand...

Runjhun to Bunty: oh, baith yahan chup chap se...bada aya cut-ne (sit here quitely)...😡

Runjhun to Guddu: as if you know a lot...then you only tell the story to him...😡

Guddu: its some crap from Ramayana, right???

The family members start giggling...

Runjhun: yeah...or else..."shame on me!! I could not speak a word in front of a 5th grade child...n my wife is great...she knows..."

Guddu: facebook status has a word limit...not more than 140 words...so, cut it!!😆

Runjhun frowns: okay fine...then explain...err...of course, if you have guts to!!😳

Guddu thinks a little then starts: heyy champ, i tell you something...the story is damn easy...


This dude Ram had like a big kingdom n a big palace...even bigger than Buckingham Palace...n the people there liked him a lot...but his step mom was kinda vamp...she forced her hubby to send Ram to some jungle or something...but dude, forest was real scary shit...really man!! N full of devil n shit like that...then some bad gansta jerk, Raavan kidnapped his babe, Sita, okay?...n boy!! dis Ram n his bro were really pissed...they got a big army of monkeys...now, dont ask how they trained damn monkeys in forest...n they rescue his wife...they get back home...the people there thought at least they deserve something...but there were no bar, no clubs to smoke stuff...so they lit lamps & this is how it ol started!! Understood??


Bunty: ekdum fit inside my head...i wonder why our teacher doesn't explain this way...

The rest of the family members sit open-mouthed...staring at Guddu...

😲😲😲😲😲
😲

Runjhun: are you sure, you're an aerospace engineer??

Guddu: why??😕

Runjhun: you didnt speak that way...what was this dude, shit, babe???

Guddu: did I ever say I am a priest??? It was all about making him understand the situation...thats what I tried to do...I explained him in simple language...n see, he got it really well...C'mon Bunty, write it 5 times & show it to your teacher...😎

Runjhun gulps...stunned...😲

Guddu walks out...wondering why were all of them staring at him as if he was some alien..!!


PRECAP: on road...Devi walking...A man seeming like some eloped prisoner (Jhabbu; here, his name is Karan)...knocks her down...!!

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Posted: 14 years ago
#38
Loved it sanju... What an update yaar ...I was like...wo kya ramaayan i wish i could have also got a teacvher like Guddu...Dude he is an awesome teacher...What I woud have got in class stick from teacher 😆 but would had given five minutes of fun moment in class😆 The story is going a way rocking babes guddu making Runjhun wear sari aww😳 update superfast...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#39
hey sanju ...
Wat an amazingg treat yaar ... 👍🏼
Dono prts bade hi mast the ...hi guddu ne RJ ki saree pehene main madad ki ...awww it was sooo cute ... Bechari RJ usse to pata hi nahi ki jiski wo deewani hai who usska pati hai ...

Tauba tauba ager guddu jesa teacher school me ho to pata nahi bachon ka kya hota ...per jis tarha se guddu ne ramayan xplain ki bada hi maza aya ...

Gosh d precap looks very scary n shockin jabbu a prisoner
D story is gettin damn interesting updt sooon suuuper duuuper sooon plezzz
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Ramayan ka kichdi bana dala Guddu ne...😆
Who cares Bunty ko samajh mein aaya na...
I am surprised ki Guddu ke Amma ko heart attack nahin aaya...Guddu's version of Ramayan sunkar😆
These too will give FB very good profit...so many statuses and all...
Te Amo was nice dear...
So Jhabbu is going to enter soon...
Enjoying it very much Sanju🤗

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