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Shahnaz

@ShenzK

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 7 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: Prizi
Awesome

Thank You! :)

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Shahnaz

@ShenzK

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 7 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: sahibasharma
Oh that was amazing
Both are attracted to each other
Zoya does have sinful thoughts about him and he just fulfilled one of his desires
Loved the OS name too...goes well with the story
Loved it

Thank You! :)

Well, who can blame Zoya for the sinful thoughts? Aditya has the power to stir those thoughts 😉

I am glad you like the name. That is one of the reasons why I was so wanted to write this one. The name fits well.. :)

Thank You once again!

Originally posted by: sahibasharma
Would love to read the continuation for Interuption
Waiting

I think, I will be posting that soon enough. Mostly this week.. I just have to jot down the next half. :)

So, hopefully, you won't have to wait for long.

Originally posted by: sahibasharma
Thanks for notifying through PM

You are welcome :)

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saira

@sezo

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#13

That was amazing

You should write more.

I could just imagine this happening. You described it so well.

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Jai Shree Ram

@Aquabutterfly

Rocker

+ 18

Posted: 7 years ago

#14

Wow...just another out of the OS 👏

You have me speechless with your writings. It's so beautifully written and well-executed. You are an amazing writer and with each piece, you prove that statement. You are one of my favourite writers on this forum because your works are like a movie that I'm watching and I can imagine each scene clearly. Keep it up ⭐️

This ice cream date might prove to be the cupid between Aditya and Zoya.

It was so sweet to see Aditya bring out the naughty thoughts of Zoya with just one look. Zoya definitely is Aditya's favourite flavour. 😉

There was no kiss but it was sensual nonetheless and that is what makes this OS more perfect.

Thanks a lot for the pm

Please come up with more stories soon.

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Shahnaz

@ShenzK

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 7 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: sezo
That was amazing
You should write more.
I could just imagine this happening. You described it so well.

Thanks a ton!

Well, I am already into writing more than the spare time I get.. but yeah, there are more coming ;)

That's the point, to take you all on a joy ride with AdiYa. So mission accomplished. *Phew* 😆

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Shahnaz

@ShenzK

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 7 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: Aquabutterfly
Wow...just another out of the OS 👏
You have me speechless with your writings. It's so beautifully written and well-executed. You are an amazing writer and with each piece, you prove that statement. You are one of my favourite writers on this forum because your works are like a movie that I'm watching and I can imagine each scene clearly. Keep it up ⭐️
This ice cream date might prove to be the cupid between Aditya and Zoya.
It was so sweet to see Aditya bring out the naughty thoughts of Zoya with just one look. Zoya definitely is Aditya's favourite flavour. 😉
There was no kiss but it was sensual nonetheless and that is what makes this OS more perfect.
Thanks a lot for the pm
Please come up with more stories soon.

Thanks a lot. It's a pleasure to know that my random thoughts are well received. My writings are random but it's readers like you who keep me motivated to write more and keep going. But that's a compliment I will cherish for lifetime. Thank you so much for that. :)

You have praised me more than what I am worthy of. I can only hope that I live upto the expectations. *fingers crossed*

This was kind of my version of how their ice cream dates could be in the future. Or a recreation of the one we saw on screen. ;)

Well, Aditya masters the art of stirring naughty thoughts. I am sure there will be members on the forum to vouch for that as well 🤣

For Aditya, no other flavour can beat this one. Zoya Siddiqui . His Zoya.

The kiss could have been there but I felt just keeping it like this would play a perfect tease. I am glad it came out sensual even without the kiss. :)

PMs is the least I can do. I will try and come up with more stories.. I am already working on one that should be up this week, hopefully . So that is pretty soon, I say!

Thanks again :)

Edited by ShenzK - 7 years ago

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@Coffee_Chips

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#17

Whew.. Finally got the time to comment though I read the OS few hours ago LOL 😆

That was a bold move by Mr.Aditya Hooda 😃 & yeah, seeing how he's currently behavung around Zoya, this kind of a shock has the possibility of happening but then again this is ITV & though it's 10.30pm, expecting this kinda move is like a wish vanished in to thin air 😕

But totally adored their bond you've written & that romantic move 😉

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Shahnaz

@ShenzK

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 7 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: SewwiVB
Whew.. Finally got the time to comment though I read the OS few hours ago LOL 😆
That was a bold move by Mr.Aditya Hooda 😃 & yeah, seeing how he's currently behavung around Zoya, this kind of a shock has the possibility of happening but then again this is ITV & though it's 10.30pm, expecting this kinda move is like a wish vanished in to thin air 😕
But totally adored their bond you've written & that romantic move 😉

Thankfully this was worth enough to get you back and make you comment. That itself is an achievement. I am absolutely fine, as long as it brings a smile on the face of readers.. for reviews you can take your time.

Oh! When does he underplay? Mr. Aditya Hooda lives to play bold. 😉

I wouldn't want him to play something like this currently. He is behaving psychic enough. This would only make Zoya run away in the other direction. Not that any of his moves have been able to pull her yet.. also, she would barely go along with him with consent. I would love to have this played when things between them are straightened and they both behave like sane human beings. Otherwise, it's good enough to be here.

Thank you! I am glad you liked it.. and the romantic move as well. 😆