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Posted: 7 years ago
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Ayeshaaa...this was sooo beautiful!!!
Pehle toh it took me forever to open this thread n read something that I was desperately waiting for and then kabse I m trying to comment on this n this IF bug was irritating so much yesterday!🤢

This was really so magical. The whole ambiance seemed so blissful. How beautifully u described it all. N AdiYa linked with KKHH was epic!! DREAMY is the word I have for it all😳
I wish if even 10% of this they show, I loved ur Zoya!!!😳 Red saree n movie date n noodles n dance n lip-syncing KKHH dialogues n all for her "best friend"...badi tez nikli yaar tumhari Zoya😆 N above it all, she stayed there throughout the night, giving a damn to Waseem😆 Wow I love that the most😆
After last episode, I feel, Zoya should really spend her night with Adi n Ullu uncle believes that she is spending every second of 20 days with that lambu n he sleeps at home peacefully😆bada aaya zamaane k sath badalne wala, hypocrite🥱
Lagta hai ab kuch din stories padhke hi guzaara karna padega. Show mujhse bardaash nahi hota ab. Arshad, Waseem, Sakshi n Anjana...such a headache they all r🤢

Btw, just fyi, ur theme is nowhere close to my theme😆 N I find my screenplay very juvenile now after reading ur story😆
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: jaditi346

One word for this OS: Awesome

Now i am thinking kaash yeh show me bi aisa hi dikhaye but i know this wish will never complete so not rising my hopes.
But well done👏

Thank you soo much my dear friend. I am sorry for the late reply to your comment... 😳 But your kind words mean a lot... 😊❤️
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: geet0910

Wowww.. I m speechless. Teary eyed after reading such a bful lovely heart touching os. Mind blowing. U have such a bful way of writing n imagination. I m totally blown😃 loved it so so much.

Thank you soo much buddy... 😳😊 Your words are soo motivating... 😳🤗
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Posted: 7 years ago
#24
Thank you soo much... 😳⭐️
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: AyraaMalik

Brilliant!
Loved this OS, it sounded so real as if am watching AdiYa, so bfully penned down the whole situation. Loved the KKHH part, AdiYa sweet convo confessing their feelings. End was hilarious :) In short Perfect
Good job dear


Thank you soo much dear... Your praise means a lot to me... 😊😳
Hahaha... yes... the end was kind of an improv that i made at the last moment! 😆😆 Cant imagine my write ups without our "beloved" Waseem na! 😉😆😆
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: SewwiVB

I could imagine every scene as if it was played in front of my eyes ayesha. So beautiful & I can relate to why Zoya isn't understanding her feelings in your story but yeah, the one in the show has to go through many deep & intense situations to realize her feelings for Adi 😆

This was so nice & specially the romantic scenarios were penned perfectly & tbh at first instance I was like, when Aditya was almost kissing Zoya's neck, didn't she feel a shiver or something different 🤣 Then I remembered Zoya is Zoya for a reason LOL I liked how Adi was willing to make Zoya speak her thoughts to assure herself & him about why he mattered to her the most like no other & how he made her feel the love they have for each other 😳 That emotional connection they had made me feel 'Aww...' ❤️ I have anyway usually liked emotionally connected romantic stories more than the typical hero meets heroine & falls in love at first sight kinda ones LOL Perhaps because that's just attraction & nothing mutual or serious 😆
I was smiling throughout the OS. Reading your previous work I can clearly say you know how to entangle perfect situations & grab the senses of a reader. Do write more & lastly, this is one of the nicest OS's on AdiYa I've read 😊


hiii buddy... Thank you soo much for your detailed analysis... 😃 It made me soo happy!😳
Haha yes...our Zoya's hormones dont work, i believe! 😛😛
You have read only sweet,emotional one shots from me... I have written a dark and very mature OS this time... I dont know how you would feel about it? 😕 Will post it in a bit.. Do let me know about your honest comments regarding that one also... 😳

Love you... ⭐️
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Posted: 7 years ago
#27

Originally posted by: sahibasharma

It was beautiful...

loved their emotions...and Zoya's apprehensions made sense...
loved their cute little moments...
and how they enacted KKHH dance was dreamy...
they are ready to fight the villains of their love story...hahah
Lovely OS yar
loved it to the core


Awww yar... Thank you soo much... Your comments made me soo happy... 😳😊😊 I wish we get to see AdiYa cute and romantic moments soon... I dont know why but I am kind of already tired with Arshad and sakshi and anjana track... I just want to fast forward the show... 😕
Love you buddy... ⭐️❤️
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nimshad

Your os are always awesome

I luvd all your 3 os
I kinda feel happy reading the os and imagining adiya cz this will surely nt happen in show n i want some parts to surely happen in show like from together forever(previous os) the initial part,plane crash idea is also nice & wht to say about this os i think end will not be like this bt zoya shud surely cum up with surprise for adi as she didn't remember that he isn't leaving for paris
Which i think cvs has forgotten

Heyyy buddy... Thank you for liking all my one shots... 😳🤗 Truly means a lot...
CVS have forgotten many things... 😕 Lets see how they begin and how they show AdiYa love story... Waiting anxiously for that to happen! 😆
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Posted: 7 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: .MooN.

Holy Crap! This Is AMAZING 👏

I have no words to describe how your story was ...like seriously if I'll use one word to describe this it would be too less to define your work.
You wrote it so Realistically.
You Truly are An AMAZING WRITER.
Fab Job ❤️

Awww yar... 😳 Thank you soo much for such generous praise... You are too sweet... 😳❤️
Love you buddy... ⭐️
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: diatoms82

This is just so beautiful 😊 loved it so much.


Heyy buddy... thanks a lot...😳😊
Love you... ⭐️

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