Adiya OS: Muskuraane ki wajah tum ho #Bepannaah_hits_century

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Posted: 6 years ago
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~~~~~Muskuraane ki wajah tum ho~~~~~

Zoya' pov
Ye gaana bhi na kitna ajeeb h.. Smjh nhi aata ke isse sunke hasen.. Ya phir ro den... Ya sch btaaye to humein ye gaana hi smjh nhi aata... Yash humare jeene ki wajah the.. Par vo kbhi humare muskuraane ki wajah nhi bn paaye... Hum yash se nhi blki unke diye hue gifts n pampering se khush hote the... Agr hum yash k hone na hone se khush hote to shayad unke jaane k baad hum has hi na paate... To phir ye gaana kyun kehta h k 'jiya jaaye na jaaye na jaaye na.. O re piya re...'
Ye gaana nhi ek paheli h...

"Kya aap humein ye btaane ka takalluf krengi appi k aap aakhir kya soch rhi h" said noor...

"ye gaana... Muskuraane ki wajah.. Iska matlab smjhne ki koshish kr rhe h..."

"ismein smjhne wala kya h appi... Aap apni aakhen bnd kriye aur iss gaane ko suniye.. Khud-ba-khud aapko sb smjh aa jaega"

Noor somewhere knew doing so would make zoya realize her feelings for aditya..
She left the room after playing the music... Leaving zoya all alone to ponder over the song.. Or to be correct... Ponder over aditya...


"" Muskurane ki wajah tum ho
Gungunane ki wajah tum ho
Jiya jaaye na, jaaye na, jaaye na..
O re piya re..
Jiya jaaye na, jaaye na, jaaye na..
O re piya re..""


Just as the song begun... She is taken back to the ice cream date she had with aditya... A smiled peeped through her lips... While smiling she focused on the other line... Jiya jaaye na jaaye na jaaye na... She remembered how she ran behind aditya to the airport... It seemed that her life was being snatched...
She spoke to herself " koi aisa insaan jiske saath hone se aapka khushi mile.. Jo dur jaane ki koshish bhi kare to aap sehem utho... Uss insaan ko vajah bola gya h... Yess... Yess... Yess... Humein ye para smjh aa gya..."

"" O re lamhe tu kahin mat jaa
Ho sake toh umr bhar tham jaa
Jiya jaaye na, jaaye na, jaaye naa..
O re piya re..
Jiya jaaye na, jaaye na, jaaye naa..
O re piya re.. piyaa re..""

The dance she had with aditya on teraa hone lgaa hun was now all over her mind... That proximity she shared with him... The ease they had that day..these lines brought that whole dance sequence back to her... It is a thing.. A time.. A moment she wished to relive.. Lost in her memories.. She spoke..
"kuch aise lamhe jo hum baar baar jina chaahen... Aisi yaadein jo humaare dil mein bs jaaye...ye lines unhi lamhon ke liye hain..."

"" Dhoop aaye toh, chhaanv tum laana
Khwahishon ki baarishon mein
Bheeg sang jaana (x2)

Jiya jaaye na jaaye na jaaye na
O re piya re..
Jiya jaaye na jaaye na jaaye na
O re piya re.. piya re..""

The numerous times aditya saved her... The times when he was her savior came back to her... The tank scene... The car scene... Everything returned...
"koi aisa jo aapki zindagi se saari mushkilon ko bhgaa de.. Dhoop ho to chaaon laa de... Uss insaan ke liye h ye lines..." speaking this she smiled to herself...

"" Jo mile usme kaat lenge hum
Thodi khushiyaan thode aansu baant lenge hum
Jo mile usme kaat lenge hum
Thodi khushiyaan thode aansu baant lenge hum
Jiya jaaye na jaaye na jaaye na
O re piya re..
Jiya jaaye na jaaye na jaaye na
O re piya re.. piya re..""

The numerous times aditya slept on the floor to let zoya be comfortable... The lock up scene.. When after being tortured.. Adi wanted zoya to breathe n try... Everything about him suited the song perfectly...
"jo ho jitna ho usmein adjust kr ske... Jiske saath hum hr sukh.. Hr dukh baant sken... Jiske saath hum hr mushkil meim jee sken..."



Speaking this.. Zoya started jumping on the bed... She ran up to noor...
" noor noor noor... Aap shi thi.. Humein aa gya ye gaana smjh... "
" kaise"
" jaise aapne btaya tha vse.. Aakhein bnd krke.."
" aur kuch smjh nhi aaya kya?"
" aur kuch kya smjh aana tha?"
"kuch nhi appi.."

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Though zoya understood the song... Still she could not understand herself... Her feelings... Her love... But one day... This golden moment will also come...



Thank you for bearing with me... Do tell me how this was... <3

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Maryam2 thumbnail
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Posted: 6 years ago
#2
beautifulll post
looveddd ittt❤️
great job dear👏
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Maryam2

beautifulll post

looveddd ittt❤️
great job dear👏


Thank you so much... Glad u liked it.. ❤️
Duskyylilac thumbnail
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Beautifully penned
Liked it dear
I hope she will understand it one day
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Posted: 6 years ago
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It's a beautiful OS
Loved it


Just a small suggestion plz make the font size bigger...it'll be easier to read😊
Hope I didn't offend you😳
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Zenab78

Beautifully penned

Liked it dear
I hope she will understand it one day


Yup aaega... Vo khoobsurat din bhi aaega... 😃.. Abhi to adi k confession se kaam chlana padega... Thanks for the appreciation zenab... 😳
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: eufara_naghm

It's a beautiful OS

Loved it


Just a small suggestion plz make the font size bigger...it'll be easier to read😊
Hope I didn't offend you😳


Even i realised it after posting... Actually i was so much fed up with this font color stuff... I forgot about the font size... Thanks for the comment n suggestion.. N no m not at all offended... 😳
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Thanks dear..
😳
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Very different take on OS writing. Beautiful😃
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Such a cute OS dear
Enjoyed it a lot

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