Breaking the shackles! #Aditya

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Posted: 7 years ago
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His hands get tied the minute he sits in the car..
He looks in the rearview mirror in panic and as fate has it these days,he sees pooja and yash...
Adi watches his wife in another man's arms, hears the man assuring HIS wife that he is there for her..
he looks at the reflection that he can't erase,hears the voices he can't mute!!

Its tearing him to pieces yet again, and taking away his everything...even something as simple as his ability to drive..

He almost gives up when he hears another voice,another face entering his conscience!

"Zoya"! His heart speaks...

Its not like those voices which ripped his trust into bits, its her voice that entrusts him with her life...
Its not similar to the provoking words of Yash that ignites an inferno within him,
But Its her sound ,that calms his soul...
Its not Poosh's face as they cuddle up to mock him,
Its her face that looks upto him to save her...

The fear of losing zoya overtakes the pain of betrayal .
The demons of his past get defeated by his overwhelming need to protect her!!




and just like that, he breaks the shackles that had him restrained and drives..

Ah! Finally!He does not hear the whisper of poosh which bound him to his miseries,
He only hears her scream of trust that frees him..

And so he flies like the bird that he is meant to be!
to save the soul that is his mate!

Love,Sumi!

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Was waiting for your post. Will be back after reading!

Edited - read and posted my comment!
Edited by Prriyam - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Prriyam

Was waiting for your post. Will be back after reading!

Thanks😊
Will wait for your views
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Beautifully written..👏..it was an excelleny scene..portrayed splendidly by harshad chopda...⭐️..here is the reason we say he deserves best actor award
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Posted: 7 years ago
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gr8 post sumi🤗
today in true sense he is healed ...theek hgya adi🥳 ...finally...this is wat he was running away from n zoya cme as the light into his darkness today her voice wakes him up from the deep sleep..he gets alarmed n he jus rushed from there ..

zoya healed him with words that day n he feels the comfort today ❤️...hope to see zoya also getting normal ..wanna see that real zoya who will dance in the palace of adi's heart😳

ab bass zoya papa ki sacchai dikhade adi ko

aur bhi bahut kuch bolne ka mann hai but i save my words for future😆
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Posted: 7 years ago
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What a post! The simple sensibility of the scene is getting elevated by such posts!

It was like you have breathed the lines into an otherwise dialogue-less scene! HC was ⭐️

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Posted: 7 years ago
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😉 Great post your coolness 😉😉😉 Loved how you narrated the whole scene👏👏👏 very victorian 👏👏 Adi crossed one thing off his list of issue he gotta deal with due to his love for Zo and that is so beautiful 😭 I hope Zo crosses a few items off her list too and soon 😉
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Posted: 7 years ago
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I know I loved this part. Aditya got over his fear to save Zoya.
Showing her importance in his life.
They are made for each other.
Loved the way you wrote it out👏
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Posted: 7 years ago
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amazing post!!
he got over his fear.. that scene was too good!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: deeps07

Beautifully written..👏..it was an excelleny scene..portrayed splendidly by harshad chopda...⭐️..here is the reason we say he deserves best actor award

Thank you😊.
Yes, HC was brilliant,yet again! And yes, no doubt!
He deserves all the accolades possible!

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