AdiYa FF ~The Hookup~ NEW CH UPDATED - Page 10

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Loved the way it is written Akshita 👏 Adi is burning with guilt, especially considering the fact that he made the same mistake that his father did for which he resents him to this day. To see himself in the same position must be infinitely worse. He has put Pooja in the same place his mother was in, a long time ago. He is not sure if he even deserves to be forgiven, given how strongly he feels about betrayal himself. And then the condom! I am guessing he will manage to hide it from Pooja in the nick of time but what if he doesn't? That would be the worse way of confessing to his wife of his infidelity act but even when he does will he able to say anything that can make it any better? Guess not 😳

Really interested to know where it goes from here and how Zoya is reacting to the whole situation. We already had a glimpse at it but there Zoya was more concerned about getting out. Want to know how she will react when she comes face to face with Yash. Good going 👍🏼
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Posted: 7 years ago
#92

Originally posted by: Aishu136


Its not fair on my part to Unres the comment sooner but I don't like give a short comment nor do I comment when Im in the middle of something hence the delay.
So sweet of you to say you would wait.

I can understand hindi to a certain extent with years of watching serials and hindi movies but can't talk and all.

Interestingly You know which was my hindi serial - Its Tere Liya - Our Harshad's but by the time I was watching it was already over and that time IPK was going on air - I joined IF because of IPK and no stopping from then but its Harshad who I first fell for!


Oh I didn't know were a fan of Harshad before this show😲 But he's such a cutie, who wouldn't like him
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Loving This story already. Thanks for PM
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Money_lover

Loving This story already. Thanks for PM

Aww thanks! ❤️
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: BeyondHorizon

Loved the way it is written Akshita 👏 Adi is burning with guilt, especially considering the fact that he made the same mistake that his father did for which he resents him to this day. To see himself in the same position must be infinitely worse. He has put Pooja in the same place his mother was in, a long time ago. He is not sure if he even deserves to be forgiven, given how strongly he feels about betrayal himself. And then the condom! I am guessing he will manage to hide it from Pooja in the nick of time but what if he doesn't? That would be the worse way of confessing to his wife of his infidelity act but even when he does will he able to say anything that can make it any better? Guess not 😳


Really interested to know where it goes from here and how Zoya is reacting to the whole situation. We already had a glimpse at it but there Zoya was more concerned about getting out. Want to know how she will react when she comes face to face with Yash. Good going 👍🏼


This is going to take a long while to respond to but I'm not complaining. This makes me so happy!🤗
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Grt chapter loved every bit of it...pls continue
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Posted: 7 years ago
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great start, looking forward as to how they both handle it from now on
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: AkshitaWrites.


This is going to take a long while to respond to but I'm not complaining. This makes me so happy!🤗


Please don't mind me 😆 When it comes to commenting I have a reputation of leaving long comments and sometimes they have been as long as the update itself, if not more 😛 If the story is engaging, I can't help but analyse it myself like we do with the TV shows or movies. Stories are no different for me 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: BeyondHorizon


Please don't mind me 😆 When it comes to commenting I have a reputation of leaving long comments and sometimes they have been as long as the update itself, if not more 😛 If the story is engaging, I can't help but analyse it myself like we do with the TV shows or movies. Stories are no different for me 😊

These comments make me happier than you would think! I take writing very seriously and even though I have tone it down just a little bit so it clicks with Indian readers(I used to write on fanfiction.net for international shows), genuine appreciation makes me very happy! It takes a lot of effort to write so when readers put effort in writing a comment, you know you're doing something right! 😳
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: AkshitaWrites.

These comments make me happier than you would think! I take writing very seriously and even though I have tone it down just a little bit so it clicks with Indian readers(I used to write on fanfiction.net for international shows), genuine appreciation makes me very happy! It takes a lot of effort to write so when readers put effort in writing a comment, you know you're doing something right! 😳


I totally get what ur saying 😊 I used to be a writer too once upon a time 😆 I know a writer puts their heart n soul into the story and the only gratification they seek is a meaningful comment from a reader that implies they are into the story, into the characters and feel what the characters feel 😳 Even a one liner that spoke about the update rather than simply just a comment like say 'Awesome', 'Loved it' made my day 😊

P. S - Reading stories such as yours inspire me and make me wanna write. I am penning an AdiYa SS but not sure of posting it in IF 😆 Eagerly waiting for ur next update 😳

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