FF Beintehaa Ishq [Zaya story with a twist]last chapter -pg106 - Page 23

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Posted: 10 years ago
omg ...that was sooo intense sim ...really amazing ...I loved it ...oh no aaliya ne toh harr man li .:'(...bt I hope zain 's qubool hai will be only for aaliya 😆 eagerly waiting for the next chps ...
plz cont asap
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Posted: 10 years ago
I knew this was coming..but this wasn't expected ..I'm very furious about the last two chapters will they bring to lovers together...so coming to the chapter it was very heartbreaking ahh...but let's see what u have stored for us..and the ending shayri was awesome or I say amazing... Thanks for this wonderful story..I'll always miss it..
Edited by robsten_ - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Haye it was heart wrenching updates🥺
Again again aliya sobbing on last day of talaq was flashing and even hala nikha scene was playing in my mind 😭
Update lines are stongly heartfelt even the song and poem are in sync with story climax seem to be nail biting first part of climax was really very very emotional
Altogether its emotional and heart wrenching update
Hats of to u sim u👍🏼 have wonderfully portrayed pain of zaya sometime u leave me speech less😲
Do continue soon🤓
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Posted: 10 years ago
Chapter 46
These lines:

Ho sake toh mujhe maaf kar dena ...mera irada nahi tha ..

aapke dil mai pyaar bharkar aise chodne ka ..par Dad ke baad Mom ki duniya mere vajah se ulat gayi hai ...unhe aur nahi tod sakta ...

And when he said:

.Zain Abdullah ...naam toh yaad rahega na

It caused a burning sensation in my eyes

Where his innocent lines took my heart away then his intense words are no less

Amazing awesome wonderful splendid tremendous now I found all these words way more less to complement the real essence of Beintehaa Ishq SIM




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Posted: 10 years ago
"Halki si hasi chahiye,tumhare labon se maafi chahiye."
I could remember this while reading.
"Zain satao mat" "Mujhe pata hai tum mazak kar rahe ho" these lines made my heart experience a weird thing.
"Delicacy"
Handled the emotions so well,Sim!
You are really a very talented writer,you make me cry without tune.
Really really loved it!
"The course of true love never did run smooth."-William Shakepeare.
It seems so true here.
Probably Love is a wonderful,terrible thing.
I have no words to tell how much I am in love with this story.
I have no words to tell how amazing writer you are.
I have no words to tell how much I am gonna miss this.
I have no words to tell how I am feeling right now.
The only thing I can tell right now is...Thank you?Love you?Miss you?
Uh!! I don't know what can I tell...
I am pretty excited for the next chapters..
Sorry,I can't gather my thoughts.
Take care.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Finally read the last two chapters wow what a twist lol u r one of the best writers such a beautiful read. What a twist coz i was wondering how zaya would get back u know due to tht pesky techicality lol I kinda knew la was gonna hook up with altaf lol nice way to use their wedding to torture aliya. Finally got to know what was in the letter n glad suri got mad at them it was getting too much lol zaya needed a little knock on the head. Loved the flashbacks n zaya confessing . Finally they are back, cant wait for the next update aka the epilogue.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Ahh...its the end but a worth one..I couldn't read it one go ..it was so head turning..unpredictable and worth all the love that it has got from all the reader..its ur love for Beintehaa this was the best fan fiction I have ever read ..thanks so much for this ...I'll miss it so much..aur abhi bhi DA as a rahsya cheating I was waiting for it only..but it was awesome amazing.. Loved it..chat say much totally spellbound.
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Posted: 10 years ago
amazing and just amazing updates Sim...
talaq never happened...yeah...
it was so cute when zaya were talking...
hatts off to u Sim...
u r truly an amazing writer...
BT just one update left.. :(
will wait for it...
Pls cont soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Sorry sorry for not commenting on previous chaps I was on tour

And now the story is gonna end
This story had became my daily routine
Even I was on tour I have read the chaps
I will miss this story
I can't wait anymore update soon


Love u




Riya
Edited by nashfa - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Really speechless...
I have nothing to say...I cant tel you how.much beautiful it was...its realy awsome...
bt nw its gonna end..:(
I will miss this story very much...
cant wait for next chapter...
I knw I had not commented on your previous four chapters...it was Also amazing..an d beautiful...
I will miss this story very much...

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