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Kiran Fatima

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Posted: 10 years ago

#181

Chptr 36

Aaliya's own way to protect him her care their selfless always make my eyes wet

She wanted to share the blanket with him ...but wasn't she giving him more pain ...on Saturday when she would walk away ...he would be heartbroken...she decided not to share it...

And the line when Zain said:

Da..kya mai zindagi bhar aise hi rahunga ...kya tum mujhe kabhi pyaar nahi karogi...kabhi apni marzi se nahi chuogi ...kabhi pyaar se nahi dekhogi

Oh My it was like someone is punching my heart hard😭

SIM You have stolen my heart again here:

Har tarre ke saath ek ankahi noor simti hai ..mai bhi wahi hu ...

tum bhalle mujhe mehsoos na karo...mai har lamha tumhe apni bahon ki hifazat mai rakhunga ..

mera ...kareeb hona na hona ...ab koi mayne nahi rakhta hai...shayd isse pyaar kehte hai❤️

A new twist in story hopefull my ZAYA will be safe and sound

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Riya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#182

Mind blowing SIm!

Okay, i know, I just did not give a proper reply to your previous chapter, but i was dazed... I was just feeling so numb after reading it that I was shocked about how I could manage to read the whole chapter...

I was definitely in a daze, and i would like to call it your daze...

I was amazed at how much effect mere words could have on me, my whole heart...

Oh God, I just can't say anything Sim!!!

Aaliya, hopefully she is perfectly fine now...

But reading about her seeing Zain's pain was something that took me again over there...

Like I was supposed to know it, right? you had already written this earlier...

But then the feeling intensified knowing that it was Aaliya who was getting to know all this...

I literally saw this from her eyes...

And THAT took my breath away...

And obviously now, Aaliya's search is on...

hoping that she finds Zain soon...

But i personally wish that Zain just doesn't forgive her so soon... like its her chance now to repent for what she did to him... not like the sorry thing... But repent in the sense seeing Zain in deep shit and then repenting for all she has done to him... Okay, maybe I am not making any sense right now, I just can't explain properly hats going on in my heart...

And finally...

KitKit ...tayaar rehna ...tumhari Malika E Zain ...aa rahi hai ..tumhari Da ...tumahre paas .....

this line got me... Smiling again!

Love you SIM!!!!!!

Please continue soon...

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Zainedil

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Posted: 10 years ago

#183

U all make me rush home n upload right now, had I not been in the lab wud hve dashed off right now
Love u all
Sim

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AnnRosewood

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Posted: 10 years ago

#184

CHAPTER 32

"Da ..mai superman hu...aise choti kharoch koh toh fook marke theek kar sakta hu ..par accha laga ..tumne poocha ...soyi nahi na raat bhar ..."

This is what i felt after readin this chapter..this is what sums up Zain's condition..A broken heart is the worst...

broken heart is like broken ribs(and you'll know how it feels to have broken ribs)..you can't see them..but they hurt like hell every time you try to breathe...

You know when you're broken..every single moment is a living inferno of fear and anguish...it licks your skin like a flame..Aaliya is trying hard to cope with the newfound discovery..her realization that the venom of her hatred was beyond her control..that he would..infact no one would be able to cure her..and it would eventualy destroy him..the little bit of him that was still grovelling in the sand and gasping for breath...

This chapter spoke of the unsaid words..of realisations..and pain of forboding separation..helplessness of a someone who has come to love her as a daughter and his apprehensions that the man who was just the embers of a fire that once used to burn bright would turn into ashes...

Love

Ann

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Kiran Fatima

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Posted: 10 years ago

#185

Chptr 37

Oh girl what have you done to me i'm crying bitterly at this moment

though I liked the humorous one liners of Zain in the start of the chapter but after reading the whole I'm not able to mention those bcz the pain is immense don't know what to say

I was actually feeling frightened when Zain was describing the situation of rehabilitation center

Although I'm unable to pick one or two lines bcz the whole chapter was tremendous but these lines have done something to my heart

Haat kaape nahi tumhare mere naam waha likhte waqt ...mai 25 din se tumhare darvaze ke bahar tadap rah ahu ...taras rah ahu ...aur tumne mera naam lika waha ...jisse tum kabhi nahi milna chahti ...

Zindagibhar ki sazaa ...mujhe jeete ji ghot gayi aaj tum...

bas bhar diya form ...saup dogi apne aapkoh aise rehabilitation center mai ...poor zindagi ek band kamre mai guzaran chahti ho ...taaki mujhe sazaa mile hai na ...he clapped ...Wah Aaliya ..isse kehte hai asli pyaar ...jab tumne mujhe zallil kiya ...ya who scale se maara tab bhi aisa mehsoos nahi hua ..joh aaj ho raha hai ...mai tumhare zindagi koh is tarah se dekhne ka nazariya ban gaya hu ...tumhari sazaa hu mai....sharam aati hai mujhe ab yeh soch kar bhi ..ki maine shayad apni koi bhi sazaa theek se nahi kati ...tab bhi tumhara dard woh ka woh hai ...nahi sukun de paya thumhe

mat karo aisa ...khuda ke vaaste ...Har sazaa manjoor hai ...par yeh nahi ...Tumhe mujhe vada karna hoga ...tum waha nahi jaoge ...as he sat there folding his hands again ...

Your writing skills are Blessing of God on you SIM what else I can say👏

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Zainedil

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Posted: 10 years ago

#186

Originally posted by: AnnRosewood
CHAPTER 32
"Da ..mai superman hu...aise choti kharoch koh toh fook marke theek kar sakta hu ..par accha laga ..tumne poocha ...soyi nahi na raat bhar ..."

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<div>This is what i felt after readin this chapter..this is what sums up Zain's condition..A broken heart is the worst...
broken heart is like broken ribs(and you'll know how it feels to have broken ribs)..you can't see them..but they hurt like hell every time you try to breathe...
You know when you're broken..every single moment is a living inferno of fear and anguish...it licks your skin like a flame..Aaliya is trying hard to cope with the newfound discovery..her realization that the venom of her hatred was beyond her control..that he would..infact no one would be able to cure her..and it would eventualy destroy him..the little bit of him that was still grovelling in the sand and gasping for breath...
This chapter spoke of the unsaid words..of realisations..and pain of forboding separation..helplessness of a someone who has come to love her as a daughter and his apprehensions that the man who was just the embers of a fire that once used to burn bright would turn into ashes...

Love
Ann

Do I need to be reminded of my broken ribs
They do the work all day 😆
Love you
Sim

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AnnRosewood

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Posted: 10 years ago

#187

Kya hua wish nah karoge ...

Jab qabool hi nahi karogi..toh wish karke fayada hai kya ...mujhe pata hai tumhe ghussa ayeega ...tumhara mood nahi kharab karna chahta

Try karo..ho sakta hai ...koi intezaar kar raha ho..she

Ummed mat jago ...khair ...khuda tumhe mefooz rakhe ...har buri nazar aur chhre se pare ...sukoon de ..

His silence spoke a thousand words in the trembling darkness of the night...the only regret was that she never heard them..never heard the sound of his heart breaking every time she metted out the same silence to him..every time he looked for that other half of him,floundering like a man on fire..drowing in the sludes of pain...and in that process losing him in a way..in that very silence...

Spiteful words can hurt your feelings..but SILENCE just breaks your heart...

"Kisiko Kya Bataye Ki Ye Saza Kya Hai,
Is Bechain Khamoshi Ki Wajah Kya Hai,
Har Koi Chod Jata Hai Tanha Hume,
Aur Hum Smajh Ni Pate Hamari Khata Kya Hai."

love

Ann

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AnnRosewood

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Posted: 10 years ago

#188

CHAPTER 34

In the name of friendship..unsaid words and feelings...and once again..Sim you defined the bond between Aalisha and Zain..and all that I want to say is..

I don't need words to express,

I don't need tears to shed

I don't need to ask for a smile

or a hand to hold me

All I need is to be your friend forever...

Love

Ann

Edited by AnnRosewood - 10 years ago

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Kiran Fatima

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Posted: 10 years ago

#189

Originally posted by: Zainedil

Kiran
Did I tell you " I love you "
Sim

I love you too dear😊

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Kiran Fatima

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Posted: 10 years ago

#190

Chptr 38

Restlessness of Aaliya about never seeing the love of her life again or I should say love hate every emotion of her life

And when she said:Chala gaya na who ...mujhe bola bhi nahi ...mujhe usse akhri bar milna tha ...dad please usse phone kijiye ...mujhe uski avaaz sunni hai ...please😭

And the line at the end

Zain ne jhoot bola ...jhooth bola mujhse ...usne sauda kiya ...apni jaan ka sauda ...meri hifazzat ke liye ...ya Allah ...mai kaha dhoondungi usse

Amazing SIM