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Posted: 11 years ago
Amazing update ...!
Continue soon :)
Waiting for aliya's birthday suprise
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Was gonna update this way back on Saturday...but doing it now...so here goes the last chapter...

CHAPTER 18- TOGETHER FOREVER...AFTER ALL...😳


In the night, as ALIYA leaves for dinner...she gets a call from an unknown number...she picks it up..
Ayesha : hello, Aliya remember me...
Aliya surprised : Ayesha, hey kaisi ho??
Ayesha : alhamdulliah I am fine...AUR tum...Jabse school chod ke gayi ho...humme yaad TAK NAHI Kiya...
Aliya : sorry yaar...bas...

Ayesha : HAAN HAAN jaanti hoon...THODA privacy toh chahiye na...2 mahine baad JO mil rahi ho zain se...
Aliya blushes : AREY...aisi koi baat nahi...waise time bhi kahan hai janab ke paas...Wo apne hi Kaam mein rehte hain...

Ayesha : ACCHA ek baat kahoongi, Tumhe maana padega...
Aliya : Kya???
Ayesha : kal tum tumhare pyaare Shouhar ko chodkar...yahan aana padega apna birthday manane..
Aliya surprised : tum jaanti ho??

Ayesha : 2 mahino mein kaafi jaan chuki hoon madam...AUR yahan par Baccho ne decide bhi kar Liya KI tumhe inke Saath yahan hona hi padega...
Aliya : par ek din mein...
Ayesha : dekh...I am sorry maine der se tumhe bataya...surprise rakhna chahti thi isliye...

ALIYAs happiness knew no bounds...she was excited...toh KYA socha?? Ayesha asked eagerly
Aliya : haan...haan...haan...of course...love you...
Ayesha : AREY tujhe kya Huwa??
Aliya : surprise hain Wahan par pata chalega!!!
Ayesha : par...
Aliya : AREY haan...Mami se Ijazat Leni padegi...kal Milti hoon...ok..bye love you...she keeps the call...

Aliya looks at zain's pic on the table...she picks it up...Lagta hai ALLAH ne meri khwaish poori kar hi diye...isse badi Khushi MUJHE AUR kya ho sakti hai...kal main tumhe surprise doongi...dekhna..ACCHA Pehle Mami ke paas Jaana padega...

She goes to SURAIYA who was preparing dinner...she was silent as she didnt want to hurt their happiness as well...but still tried to explain her a bit nervously...Mami woh...main cha rahi thi KI...
SURAIYA : kya huwa...itna Ghabra kar Kyun bol rahi ho..
Aliya : Mami kal main delhi jaana chahti hoon...she spills out all at once...

SURAIYA was surprised but smiles : ACCHA...toh tum zain ke Saath...
Aliya : nahi Mami zain ke liye nahi...she explains how she was invited for the party by the school...
Suraiya : JO bhi ho...ek bahana Dhoond rahi thi...zain ke paas JAANE...CHALO kuch toh mil gaya
Aliya : matlab main...

Suraiya : haan..haan...ja sakti ho...zain bhi toh yahi chahta HOGA na...she says caressing her face
Aliya : shukriya Mami..main ABHI aati hoon...she runs to pack her luggage...
Next day, Aliya leaves to delhi early morning...as excited as she was to celebrate her first birthday with zain...she requested SURAIYA not to inform about her visit...to which she agreed...

Zain who was unaware of the happenings...calls her later as he was getting ready for his meet...but it could not get connected to Aliya...worried a bit he calls SURAIYA...
Zain : MOM, Aliya kahan hai...phone hi nahi Utha rahi hai...
Suraiya : wo Bahar gayi hai zain...
Zain : itni subah main??

Suraiya : haan Shayad kuch zaroori Kaam HOGA...
Zain : teekh hai...agar wo aayegi toh usse Bata dena...
Suraiya : don't worry Woh tumhare Saath hi hogi...
Zain confused : kya??
Suraiya : I mean...tumhe fikr hone KI koi zaroorat nahi...Woh aa Jayegi..
Zain : teekh hai...bye mom...

Aliya reaches delhi around 10:30 and rushes off to the school so that she could surprise zain later...Zain reached the site of his project which was a playground next to the school...he was busy discussing with the engineers as Aliya reached the school...zain did not notice her...neither did Aliya...

Aliya enters the school and all the young children run to her and greet her...Aliya was really happy..
Zain near the site : yahan par??
Engineer : haan sir, hum ne baat KI...par un log samajte nahi...mana kar Rahe hai...kehte hai KI Baccho ko is maidan se bohot lagav ho gaya hai...AUR hum oppose karte Rahenge...
Zain : teekh hai main unse baat Karke aata hoon...he leaves to the school and notices that was the same place Aliya had spent her two months...

As he enters the hallway he was surprised to see it well decorated...and the notice boards were filled with HAPPY BIRTHDAY ALIYA MAAM cards...and some places WELCOME BACK ALIYA MAAM...he was happy to see the love which the kids have for Aliya...suddenly he hears...

HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO YOU...HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO YOU...
HAPPY BIRTHDAY DEAR ALIYA MAAM...
HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO YOU...yayyy...🥳

He followed the voice to the classroom...and was stunned to see Aliya with the students...
He enters the classroom not yet believing...he says...Aliya tum yahan???
Aliya was excited to see zain..ZAIN she says...runs to him and gives a bone crushing hug...

Aliya : I missed you so much...she speaks out with tears of happiness...
Zain kisses her hair : I missed you too...he cups her face...kisses her forehead..and says HAPPY BIRTHDAY MALLIKA E ZAIN..
Aliya : thanks..and agains hugs him tight...

Ayesha and the kids started giggling...they break their hug...
Ayesha : wah!! Maan Gaye dost...Shouhar ho toh AISA...JO peeche peeche bhaag kar AAYE...
Aliya : AREY Ayesha...ye toh Pehle se hi delhi mein they...

Zain : haan...par tum kab aayi??
Aliya : samjho meri khwaish poori ho GAYI...tumhare Saath birthday manane KI...she says giving him a side hug...par tum toh site dekhne AAYE they na...yahan kya kar Rahe ho??

Zain : woh bazoo mein JO maidan hai...wahin par hai...isliye yahan baat karne aaya tha..AUR mili Kaun...tum...he smiles...
Ayesha : accha wo tumhara project hai...hum toh har Shaam school ke baad uska Inkaar karte aa Rahe hai...wo kya hai na...Saalon se ye maidan Baccho ko bohot pyaara hai...par agar tum chaho toh apna project kar sakte ho...

Zain looks at Aliya...who was a bit disappointed but waiting for his reply...nahi...main is project ko cancel karta hoon...
Everyone were surprised... par zain??? Aliya asks...
Zain : JO cheez KISI ko bohot pyaara hota hai...uska Haq koi nahi Cheen sakta...usi se asal khushi Milti hai...he says looking at Aliya...

Aliya smiles...all the children huddle around zain and hug him tight...yayyy...thank you sir...
Zain : AREY apne madam ne Abhi TAK cake kata hi nahi...CHALO CHALO cake kaatne chale...
All the kids hold zain and Aliya's hand and pull them to the table...
Aliya cuts the cake while everyone wish her...she feeds the cake to zain and zain feeds Aliya as well...everyone clap and cheer for their beloved teacher and their new friend...

Next morning, zain and Aliya at the airport...Aliya was cuddling zain's arm...THANKS...mujhe ab TAK ka Shayad best birthday Banane ke liye...
Zain : waise MUJHE thanks kyun keh rahi ho...shukr toh ALLAH ka hai KI hum dono KI khwaish ek Saath poori kardi...warna tum kahan AUR main kahan...
Aliya : woh toh hai...

Just then the flight manager announces...flight no...2150...Delhi to Mumbai has been cancelled due to bad whether...dear passengers..we are sorry for the inconvience...
Zain and Aliya surprisingly look at eachother...
Zain : ab kya??
Aliya : MUJHE kya pata...Kam se Kam hum dono toh ek Saath hai...isse behtar AUR kya ho sakta hai...
Zain smiles and hugs her tightly...and so does Aliya...😳

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So that's it...together forever after all...no matter what...
Started with delhi...ending it there itself...
Hope it wasn't boring...
Do comment...

Thanks a lot for everyone...
Love you...
Ahf...

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Posted: 11 years ago
wow..it was lovely.😳...very well written..loved it❤️...thanks u so much for writing such a beautiful ss..😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
That was so cute and nice habeeba...
they hugged in school..awww
beautifully writtened...

Continue other chapters also...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Last chapter was amazing
Loved it
Thanks for the pm
Edited by ank_23 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
cute ending , Hubbi , keep writing , well done , I loved the started in Delhi ended in delhi
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Posted: 11 years ago
It was beautiful like always..
Loved t habeeba..
Finally together forever..
Hats off to u girl..
Congratulations ..
Hope u continue to write wonderful stories like this..
Love u
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Posted: 11 years ago
It was a beautiful ss very well written 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: RUHANIKAA

wow..it was lovely.😳...very well written..loved it❤️...thanks u so much for writing such a beautiful ss..😊


Thank you so much RUHI...😳
Glad you loved it till the end...
Love you loads...
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Posted: 11 years ago
This was so amazing ..
Thank u hubby for writing such an amazing
SS .. aww the hug un skool was amazing ...
Thanks for the pm ...
Lots of love ..
Alina

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