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Posted: 11 years ago
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THE PROPOSAL

rehaan was all set to propose aalia today and had called her at the lakeside
Aaliya on the other had no idea abt his intentions as he had told her that zara n kabir wanted to spend some time with her

Zain had arrived at Hyderabad and after the ishtemai nikkah was sitting at the lakeside remembering their ishtemai nikkah

Rehaan along with ghulaam sab had decorated the entire area with lights and rehaan was rehearsing his cheezy lines infront of him
Rehaan: ghulam sahab mujhe aaj se pehle itni nervousness kabhi nai huii...vo naraaz hogayi to? Vo mumbai wapas chali gayi to?usne mana kar diya to
Ghulam: nai nai rehaan beta vo zara kabir se bohot mohobbat karti hai...aur tumne uske bure wakt pe kitni help ki hai ... Aur ab vaise bhi usko aage badh jaana chaiye
ALL THE BEST!!

*aaliya entered as ghulam went*

Aaliya:rehaan zara n kabir kahan hai n ye sab decorations kyu
*rehaan went on his knees**aaliya went numb n was shocked *
He closed his eyes: aaliya will u Marry me?

As zain was going back he saw this heartbreaking scenario
He just stood there behind rehaan and stared with his signature read puffy eyes
Aaliya was so f**ked up with rehaan but before she could sunaofy him her eyes met zains
A lone tear escaped his eyes while she just stood there with a what-the-hell-did-this-rehaan-do expression

Zain was hurt to the core. The person he had been waited for since a year. His first and last love. He thought that person was dead ,.. Aaliya whom he loved with all his heart n soul had moved on
He turned around and started going
Aaliya: ZAIN!!! Zain ruko !zain tum ghalat samajh rahe ho !zainn!
*rehaan opened his eyes n saw zain and was embarrassed so he just stood there watchin all his efforts go in drain*
On the other hand aalia stopped zain
Zain *turned around*: ek saal aaliya ! Har ek pal is moment ka intezaar tha .. Ki kab meri aaliya mere saamne hogi ... Par dekho na vo dua qubool hui bhi to kaise ... Mere aankho k samne meti mohobbat kisi aur ki hone jaa rahi thi...par shayad mere gunaho ki yehi saza thi
Aaliya: shhh zain maine tumhe usi moment maaf kardiya tha when u realised ur mistake. Is ek saal me maine tumhaare alaava kisi k baare me socha bhi nai ... Rehaan ko mai sirf ek dost maanti thi
Aaj se pehle mujhe bhi nai pata tha that he has feelings for me
Zain:*couldn't stop crying*r: REHAAN! Moo na tod du saale ka
Tumhe pata hai aaliya... kahan nai dhunda meine tumhe. Meri jeene ka koi matlab nai reh gaya tha jab meri zindagi hi mujhse door ho gayi thi *cupped he face n their longing fir each other could b seen in their eyes*
MUJHE MAAF KARDO AALIYA. MAIN JAANTA HU KI MERI GALTI MAAFI LAYAK NAI HAI PAR PLZ _/\_

Now their relationship had reached a stage where words werent required
They hugged once again become zaya from zain and aaliya...


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Euphoria_V thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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gauri my darling
it's awesome
I loved it
love u my friend
keep writing more
Uniquely...me thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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👍🏼Awesome...so wish it would happen...
And the BEST PART...muh NA tod do us Saale ka...🤣


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: 786ahf_bi

👍🏼Awesome...so wish it would happen...

And the BEST PART...muh NA tod do us Saale ka...🤣



exactly it was best part
I loved that line
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: 786ahf_bi

👍🏼Awesome...so wish it would happen...

And the BEST PART...muh NA tod do us Saale ka...🤣


actually it was supposed to b like:
Zain: REHAAN moo na tod du saale ka bloody backstabber mere peeche ek saal se meri biwi pe chance maar raha tha...
But didnt write coz of some aliens
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Posted: 11 years ago
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really awesome gauri
very well written
dat last part zain and aaliya bcom zaya truly superb
well done
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Posted: 11 years ago
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its superb gauri
beautifully written
great job
keep writing
Edited by jazly_zayafan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awessome...!!!
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"Main dil mein aati hoon...
Samajh mein nahi..."
RUHANIKAA thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome os!!!👏
loved it❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Beautiful os
Loved it
Very nicely written

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