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RUHANIKAA

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Posted: 11 years ago

#21

lovely update!!!!
beautifully penned...
loved it❤️

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Nandini

@cupcaked

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Posted: 11 years ago

#22

Bonjour! So, ready for my update. Well first i would like to tell you something you might not like, i have my viva on Sunday. So no updates. And on my Monday I have practicals. Again no updates. So hope you bear the patience. So without wasting time, i come upon my 3 part. Here you go:

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10:30am
Forts Hospital
Narrators POV

"Zaiiinnn!!!" Aaliya shouted. Another contraction on the way. Zain held her hand more tightly but it did no good to her. She kept whacking his arm and warning and scaring the doctors and nurses. Their mothers were outside laughing.

"A little help here?" Zain asked Fahad and Osman who were standing outside too, trying hard to control their laugh.

"Oh we went through it too. Especially me, 2 pregnant ladies. At least you have to take care of only one. I had 3 kids Zain. Besides, look at Rizwan, Aayat is in the same way but he is handling her with so much... maturity! And you... Hufff!" Fahad said.

"And you two there? Can you stop laughing and help me out over here?" Zain said bugged with the continuous laughing.

"Oh no dear! We are good here" Surraiya said.

"Zaaiiinnn!" Aaliya screamed again. Zain caressed her hair and held her hand more tightly. Slowly kissed her forehead.

"Shhh... Its all gonna be alright" He said and Aaliya stopped crying and looked at Zain a bit shocked. "I love you!".

"Of course you do you jerk... Owww!" She said again. Nah the kiss and the 'i love you' didn't help. Of course.

"Its time!" The doctor came in and announced. He asked everyone to leave, including Zain. The door was closed.

20 Minutes Later
Zain's POV

I am sure I heard a lot of screaming and shouting. Not only me, the WHOLE hospital heard. And that was my dear wife. But the screaming and shouting got lost as soon as a baby's voice came rushing to my ears.

Baby?

My Baby.

Our Baby.

The doctor walked out of the room and took out his gloves. I went up to him along with the rest of the family.

"Congratulations Mr. Abdullah, its a GIRL" The doctor said smiling. "Go meet her!".

"Thank you so much doc!" I said as I ran into to see my angels. I stopped seeing Aaliya smiling at me with our angel in her hands. I walked over to her as she handed me the baby girl. Awww! Such charming eyes that i would fall for them if my heart wasn't with My Malika-E-Zain. Yeah cheesy!

"Hey there cutie pie! I am Zain. And don't call me Abbu or something. Call me dad!" I said teasing Aaliya. I pinched her cheeks.

"Zain, I was thinking of giving the name Aisha to her. Aisha means 'life'" Awww! Of course you can Malika-E-Zain.

"Hmm... interesting name!" Dad said as he entered the room.

"How is Aayat?" Aaliya asked. Yeah! I completely forgot, i have to check out on Aayat as well.

"I'll be back" I said as i kissed her forehead and went to the room adjacent to ours.

Aayat's Room

As soon as i entered i saw a baby there again. Every so cutely! I made my presence felt as i didn't have time to see there 'finally' romance.

"Congratulations" I said as i hugged Rizwan. "To you too!" He said.

"How is Appi?" Aayat asked.

"Its a girl. Aisha!" I said proudly. Yeah! My girl!. "I am so happy for you two! What's the name?"

"Its a boy. We are gonna name him Aamir" Rizwan said. Awesome dude!

"Nice name! Well i better go back tell your appi that you are fine, see you later".

Back in Aaliya's Room

"How is she?" Aaliya asked as soon as I entered the room.

"Its a boy Aaliya. Aamir!" I said as i sat down on the bed next to her. I leant closer and kissed her forehead.

"My baby sister is an Ammi!" Aaliya said with tears in her eyes.

"Hey dont cry!" I said as I hugged her, lightly as to not hurt her.

"I am not crying!" She said strongly. Smiling! That's why I call her 'Malika-E-Zain!'

4 Years Later
3:00pm
Barkat Villa
Aaliya's POV

"Apppiii! You need to see this!" Aayat said as she pulled me to the window, facing the garden. There she was! My little princess uhhh- correction 'our' little princess. With Aayat and Rizwan's Prince.

"They are so cute!" Zain said as he placed an arm around my waist. But I didn't mind! There they were! Aisha had got hurt and Aamir was holding her elbow and rubbing off the dust and blowing air on her wound. And then... Awww... Kissed her elbow! This boy is just as cute as Zain!

"Call them inside!" I said. "Let them stay Malika-E-Zain. At least they are not fighting like we used to do!" Zain said. I turned my head around and smiled, then leaned into his touch.

"Awww! My babies!" Me and Aayat said as we hugged our kids. I asked Aisha if she likes Aamir, she said "I don't!" And blushed. Oohhh! This girl is just like her Ammi isn't it?

"Oh well, your Mom didn't too!" Zain said as he kneeled down next to me. I smiled!

"This calls for a group photograph!" Maamu said as he entered with a camera in his hand. We all settled down on the sofa. I made Aisha sit on Maamu's lap while Aamir was on Maami's! I sat down next to Maami while Aayat sat at the other end. Zain came and stood next to me. Then sat at the edge of the sofa. Leant closer! And clickkk... the picture was taken!

4 Months Later
Zain's POV

It was time! It was Aisha and Aamir's Birthday! They were now exactly 4 years old. God, time passed so quickly that I still think that this all happened yesterday! And the smile on Aaliya's face, kills me!

"Zain! Where are you lost? Come help me! There is still so much to do...!" Aaliya said. She was about to leave when I caught her hand and pulled her to my lap.

"I love you!" I said in her hears and pressed my lips on her cheeks and neck. Cutely!

"I love you too!" She said.

"I love you three!" Aisha said as she came running to us. Aaliya caught her in between her legs and started tickling her. Hmph... Shukriya Allah!

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Long enough?
Please comment and like.
Waiting...!!
Thanks a lot and take care.

Lots of love,
-Tanu.

Edited by harshadcrazyfan - 11 years ago

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Humairaa

@Humzy

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#23

Wow awsm update

Loved it

Very beautifully written

Aisha and Amir such beautiful names

Continue soon

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Shiri

@Laila_Shiri_Lee

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Posted: 11 years ago

#24

That's the cutest thing i have read all day...

Omg awww hehe

Them kids are just to cute..

And Aisha and amir..very nice names...my lil sister is called Aisha

Lovely update...and update soon...

Thanks for the long update hehe..

Next part must also be very long..

I'll be waiting

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Anisha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#25

Such a cute and adorable update 😳
loved the names Aisha and Aamir
Thoroughly enjoyed reading it
waiting for the next part

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RUHANIKAA

@RUHANIKAA

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Posted: 11 years ago

#26

aww that ws super cute update!!!!
wonderfully written...👏
absolutely loved it❤️

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oriyu

@oriyu24

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#27

Very cute update..
This time it was a long one...
Really loved it..
the names u chooses for the babies were really cute...
Continue soon...Aur iss baar bhi long update...
Lol

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Nandini

@cupcaked

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#28

Hello people! Well, since I updated my other work yesterday I would like to update this one today. Tomorrow will update some other. Well, without wasting time here you go with my update. Since Maamu has expired in the show (😭) I won't let him in my works. Maamujaan will always be there. So without wasting my time or yours, here you go with the update. Hope you all like it! :)

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11:00pm, Sunday
Barkat Villa
Aaliya's POV

Oh don't even ask! We have been looking for Aisha and Aamir for the past 1 HOUR and we are here and we find that they are hiding beneath the table. These kids need to learn something from their fathers. Yeah! Rizwan and Zain are so scared of me and Aayat these days because we don't let them romance and instead keep smacking them. And the shopping! Well, it never stops! They HAVE to take both of us to shopping at least TWICE a week. (Not a day! Will ask him for that too!)

"What are you two doing in there?" I asked them as I pulled Aisha and Aayat pulled Aamir out of the table.

"Ammi! Aisha was crying. I saw Chachu doing it so when Chachi cries. So I also sat beside her to make her stop crying" Aamir said.

"One minute! Aamir, beta I am older than your Abbu. Call me tauji or something" Zain said. Yeah! That reminds me even I am older than Rizwan.

"No you are my Chachu. Tauji sounds so oldish" He said pouting. Zain smiled and pulled his cheeks. "Call me anything which my baby likes!" He said. Awww!

"Chachu you will ruin my hair style. I used your gel" Aamir said as Zain ruffled his hair. What?

"Hhhmm... That's why you smell just like me. Don't worry dude, use my gel anytime. Besides you look handsome too in it!" Everyone burst out into laughter.

"Okay people its really late, I think we should go to our rooms no?" Aayat said.

"Yeah nice idea! Besides, I am feeling so tired after chasing these little brats" Rizwan said.

"Good night!".

11:59pm
Zain And Aaliya Room

Both were sleeping. No! According to 'one' both were sleeping. And that was me! Yeah I kinda asked Zain about it later. So I was sleeping, as soon as the clock struck 12 my side of bed felt to dip and he pressed his lips on my forehead and said "Happy Birthday Princess!"

I sighed happily. He smiled. "You remembered?" is all I ask.

"Of course I do, can't forget my princesses birthday" He said pushing a few strands away.

"I thought Aisha was your princess now!"

"Yeah she is too! But you are my No.1 princess!"

"Happy Birthday Ammi!" Came and sat in between us on the bed. I picked her up and placed her on my lap.

"Aww thank you so much Aisha! I love you so so much!" I pressed my lips on her cheeks.

"She gets a kiss and I don't? That's unfair!" Zain said pouting cutely. I kissed his cheeks and the pout turned into a cute smile. Aww! My cute hubby!

"I love you!" He kissed me too!

"HAPPY BIRTHDAY APPPIII!!!!" Aayat said as she came running into our room and jumped upon me to hug me. I laughed.

"Thank you so much Aayat!" I said as she pulled back.

"Happy Birthday Bhaabhi!" Rizwan said.

"Thank you Rizwan!" I said too.

"Birthday without cake?" Maamu and Maami walked in with a servant following holding a tray with cake on it. Awww! "Happy Birthday Aaliya!"

"Thank you so much Maamu Maami!" I said smiling. I cut the cake and the first on to feed was Zain. He fed me too. And then he did something I disliked very much BUT found it SO cute! HE APPLIED CAKE ON MY FACE! I smiled and fed everyone. Thank you so much Allah! For giving me such a cute family!

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Hope you didn't find it small? Did you?
Sorry if you did. Didn't have much ideas!
So do you people like it or not?
Please share your reviews with me so that I know!
And I have this thing, I have to reach page 15 till my last part.
So please co-operate. Leave your comments more and more.
Because I really need to reach Page 15 till I update my last part.
Will reply this time for the comments too.
Thanks a lot and take care.

Lots of love,
-Tanu. (Tanya)

Edited by harshadcrazyfan - 11 years ago