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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice
Muslims donot fast on eid. It's not allowed.
Anyways, it was brilliant
Continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: vinu127

interesting

nice one priya
thanks for the Pm dear😃
will wait for tuesday


U r wlcum vinu...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Laila_Shiri_Lee

Very nice part dear
Update soon
And please pm me when u do


Thanks @Laila_Shiri_Lee
Yes I will surely pm u...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: funpanie

Nice

Muslims donot fast on eid. It's not allowed.
Anyways, it was brilliant
Continue soon
PM me😊


Sorry for hurting your feelings...
I donot know about it...and I will pm u...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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As u all know tomorrow is eid so I preferred why not writing it today because some of you might be busy 2morrow,...
Will be writing according to ur reviews.. 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Please do write i waiting sinc days for the next update
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: princess5253

Please do write i waiting sinc days for the next update

Please update soon


Sorry could not update it...
I had to go for an outing with my family...
Will update it surely today...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: humiri


Sorry could not update it...
I had to go for an outing with my family...
Will update it surely today...







Oh no problem even i was busy yeaterday 2day will read aaram se😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome update!!!!!
very well written...
loved it...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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PART 2...




The person was non other usman himself who heard all the conversation between phoolmati and suraiya...
He was totally broken down as his wife had made a very dangerous plan to harm his dear bhanji...tears started forming in his eyes..
He started collecting all the power in his body to stand up on his feet to stop aliya from tasting the sheer khurma...but the situation was against him and he fell down crying...
Usman was left by fahad over there because he had to attend an important call..

On the other side Aliya was going towards the kitchen to taste sheer kurma if it was perfect to be served without knowing what was her destiny planning against her when she meet her parents...
Aliya:are ammi-abbu aap ...eid Mubarak...(and hugged them)
Shabana and ghulam also wished her eid Mubarak and hugged her lyk there was no tomorrow..
Shabana:Aliya tum kahi Jaa rahi ho kya?
Aliya:haan ammi voh meh bas kitchen me jaa rahi thi..khana taste karne... aap log bhi chaliye...
Shabana and ghulam followed her to the kitchen...
Aliya:pehle yeh sheer khurma taste karate hai because it is main..
Shabana:a cha meri bacchi...
Aliya tasted the kheer and fell down...
Shanbana and ghulam got a terrible shock of their life seeing their piece of heart lying lifelessly...They started crying and yelling "Aliya meri bachi utho"...
They both wanted to know what happened to her when their eyes fell on the bottle of rat poison... Their eyes were wide and they came to know that it was a trap for someone in which their aliya has fallen...
Ghulam:hame jaldi aliya beti ko hospital me Jana hoga uske pehle ise kuch ho jaye...
Shabana:haan ghulam Saab jaldi karte hai...Maine ton khaha that ghulam shahab is ghar mein hamari Bachi surakshit nahi hai par aapne meri eik bhi nahi suni...aab dekhiye iska iljam hamari bachi ko bhugatna pad raha hai...
(Started remembering when nafeesa and shazia told them about the cylinder blast and how suraiya was against her)
Ghulam:abhi yeh sab bate yaad karne ka samay nahi hai ...hame hamari bachi ko hospital pahuchana hai...
They both got out of the event hall hurriedly without informing anybody but two person saw this ...
They were non other than Suriaya and Phoolmati who were laughing evilly because their plan became successful...

Zain was searching for his life ALIYA when he heard his fahad bhai calling out for him...
Zain: Fahad bhai kya hua?
Fahad: Zain voh dad
(Before fahad could speak anything za in cut him of in the middle)
Zain: kya hua dad ko?...sab kuch thik tho hai..
Fahad :Zain voh dad sahi ho gaye hai...He is standing on his feet and is calling all of us hurriedly and his eyes are filled with tears but I don't know what happened to him...
Hearing this zain happiness has no bound...His dad, his best friend ,his gid was fit and fine...
And both brothers ran towards him and hugged their father tightly and broke down...
Usman:shhh mere bacho dekho mein thik hun... yeh Saab tum Saab ki duaaun ki wajah se hua hai...ki aaj mein tum Saab me saamne khada hun...
Acha zain mujhe yeh toh batao ki merit bhanji kahan hai...
(Hearing aliya name from usmaan mouth left suraiya in shock and her eyes were wide open)
Zain:mujhe bhi nahi pata dad main bhi use hi dhund Raha tha...
(Now it was usmaan turn to get shock...now he came to conclusion that aliya had tasted the kheer )
Usmaan went towards suraiya and slapped her so tightly that the sound echoes till the last corner of the hall...
Suraiya world came crashing when he slapped her...
Usman:aap Sab Haran ho rahe honge na ki Maine suraiya begum ko thapppad kyun Mara toh suniya...and told them how he reaches there where suraiya and phoolmati were playing their dirty tricks and he heard all their conversation and how he tried to stop them..and he also told them that how suraiya vowed to destroy the life of aliya in the beginning of the holy month of eid...

Everybody was shocked could suraiya do this to her DIL
Za in was the most effected one...he could not believe what he just heard ...his mom was the sole reason behind every conflict between him and aliya..
Za in fell down on his knees and started crying and shouted calling her name aliya..fahad rushed to console his brother..za in remembered what aliya said few hours before "ki aaj meri zindagi ka aakhri din hua tho"..
He looked up and sent a quick prayer to Allah that "hey Allah Maine kabhi tumse kuch nahi manga par aaj mangta hun meri aliya mujhe wapis kar do "and shouted at suaiya"why mom u did this to me"
(Usmaan again slapped suraiya hard and shouted)
Usman:just get of my house suraiya
Suriaya:usman shaab pls mujhe maaf kar do.I am really sorry...
Zain:Nahi... maafi...maafi unko di jati hai jo galti karte hai...unhe nahi Jo janbhuj kar karte hai...apki wajah se meri Aliya ki yeh halat hai...U destroyed me and my life
...I hate u mom...I hate u..
Suraiya:lekin zain suno toh...
(Before she could say anything someone hand touched her cheeks and leaving her shocked)
The person was non other than shabana who showed guts to fight for her daughter...
Suraiya: how dare u ...tumne mujpe hath hutaya...
Shabana:kash yeh Maine pehle Kiya hot a toh aaj merit beti ki yeh halat na hoti...
Takes out her mobile and calls at police station and gets suraiya arrested...
When police was taking suraiya no sign of regret or guilty reflected on her face...
Usmaan:shabana hamari bachi kahan hai?Aur tum idhar kaise?
(And hugged her)
Shabana: voh bhaijaan..

***flashback***
In hospital...
Aliya was carried to operation theater on stretcher...
Shabana was crying and remembering beautiful days while ghulam was consoling her...
Operation started...
After half an hour docter came and informed them that the operation was successful and their daughter is safe know...
Knowing this they quickly send their prayer to Allah for giving their daughter new life and went inside the room to see their daughter...
Aliya: ammi-abbu zain kahan hai...voh nahi aaya...
(Tried to get up)
Ghulam:arey beta tum aram karo woh jaldi jaldi mein ham zain ko batana bhul gaye...
Mein uske abhi call karta hun...
Ghulam called zain but his phone was unreachable...
Ghulam: begum ab kya kare?
Shabana:ghulam shahab mein udhar Jake zain ko bulati hun aap yaahan aliya ka dhyaan rakhiye...
Ghulam :thik haibegum jaisa aap kahen...

***flashback ends***
And thats how I ended up hearing all this...
Everybody face lit up when they came to know aliya was fine...
Soon everyone was in hospital room surrounding aliya...
aliya was very happy that her mamu was fine and sent a thank u prayer to Allah...
Za in hugged her tightly and warned her not to leave him like this never ever because his life depend on her...
He then thanked allah for hearing his prayer and read dua for aliya and blew it on her face and told her what suraiya did...
When she heard about it she was shocked that her Mami to whom she had always respected her like her mother did this to her...
Her eyes were filled with tears...
Just to lit up the mood of every one usmaansaid: arey bhaii 2 mahine ho gaye par abhi tak khush khabri nahi mili...
Everyone laughed while aliya was embarrassed and zain was smirking at her ... 😃 😃
Part 2 over...
Torture bhi khatamm...
Padh Liya toh lyk toh karo...
I know boring tha par next part will be a happy one...I promise...
Will be writing next part when I get at least 20 comments for this chappy...
For pm buddy me Aur haan mein chiz toh batana bhul gay I...
EID MUBARAK TO EVERYONE ...
HAVE LOTS OF FUN AND MAY ALLAH FULFILL YOUR ALL WISHES... 😃 😃 😃
Edited by humiri - 11 years ago

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