ZaYa OS: Sometimes...!!

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hi people! How are you all?
I am back with another OS. This one is one part OS.
Hope you all like it.



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SOMETIMES...

"Aaliya, beta mujhe zain ne sab kuch bta diya hai. Agar Bhaabhi tumhe itna thang kr rhi thi toh tumne mujhe pehle kyun nhi bataya?" i heard Phups tell Aaliya. I know, maybe i shouldnt have told Phups anything about it. But its my wife in question for heaven's sake.

"Ammi maami esa kuch nhi kr rhi thi, woh toh inki aadat hai. Sab kuch bada chada ke bolte hai. Mei bilkul theek hu ammi, woh bas ek accident tha" Aaliya told Phups. The limits of this girl. Mei sab kuch bada chada ke bolta hu? Meine bas wohi bataya jo sach tha. And Phups has the right to know. Agar meri Aaliya ko kuch ho jaata- nhi Zain! Esi baatein nhi krte!

"Accident tha? Huh?" I said walking up to these two. They shifted their eyes towards me. "Agar us accident mei khuda na khasta tumhe kuch ho jaata toh? Phups, yeh pehli baar nhi hai. Isse pehle bhi kitni baar Mom ne Aaliya ko ghar se bahar nikalne ki koshish ki hai. Uss din jab Mom ne use suitcase ke saath bahar chhod diya tha. Uss din jab Mom ne Aaliya ko meri zindagi se bahar nikal jaane ke liye kaha tha. Yeh pehli baar nhi hai Phups. Mom ne ek baar nhi hazaar baar Aaliya ko zaleel krne ki koshish ki hai" I ended. Both were crying. As much I hated seeing Aaliya cry, Phups was no less.

"Aaliya? Kya yeh sacch hai? Bhaabhi ne tujhe ghar se bedhakal krne ki koshish ki hai?" Phups asked Aaliya. She was still crying. I knew she would be mad at me for telling Phups everything. But i had to. She deserves to know. So being a total asshole, i decided to continue.

"Phups baat sirf Mom ki hoti toh shayad se mujhe itna bura na lgta, par yaha shazia aur nafeesa bhabhi bhi Aaliya ke against the. Uss din holi ki party mei Gauhar ne meri thandai mei Bhang mila di thi. Woh toh allah ki rehm hai ki ese kuch bura nhi hua. Nhi toh Fahad Bhai ki tarah, meri bhi dusri shaadi ho jaati" I said again. Phups looked at aaliya. "Mei jaanta hu phups. Meine bhi shuru mei Aaliya ke saath bahaut bura kiya hai. Shayad utna bura jitna Mom bhi nhi krna chahti thi. Lekin phups mei bhi kya krta? Ek taraf Mom thi jo mujhe Aaliya ke khilaf brainwash kr rhi thi. Aur dusri taraf Dad the, Pour soul, mujhe itna samjhane ki koshish ki. Mei nhi sudhara. Par ab mei sudhar chuka hu phups. Ab mujhe pta hai ki mere dil mei Aaliya ki kya ehmeet kya hai. I LOVE HER" I ended.

Phups hugged me and Aaliya together. I held her hand. "Mere baccho, mei jaanti hu ki jis halat mei tum dono ka nikaah hua tha, woh shayad nhi hona chahiye tha. Mera dil mujhse baar baar kehta gya ki tum dono ki jodi bahaut acchi hai. Hai bhi. Par pta nhi Bhaabhi ko Bhopal se kya dushmani hai? Hai bhi toh Aaliya pe kyun nikal rhi hai. Lekin mujhe pta hai, ki tum dono jo bhi hoga uska khushi se saamna kroge" Phups said. Sure we would Phups. Mei Aaliya se Beintehaa Mohobbat krta hu. Mei usse kuch nhi hone dunga. I promise.

"Aaliya" I said as she suddenly hugged me. Wrapping her arms around me tightly. I hugged her back breathing through her hair. "I am so sorry" she said. "Arre tum kyun sorry bol rhi ho? Sorry toh mujhe bolna chahiye" I said.

"Meine sab kuch jaake phups ko jo bta diya" I added. "Tum toh bachpan se hi chugalkhor ho, isme nayi baat konsi hai?" she said as she laughed. We three laughed.

BACK AT BARKAT VILLA...

"Ab Aaliya waapis nhi aayegi Mummi" Shazia Bhabhi said. She had no idea Aaliya and me were standing right outside the door listening to their conversation.

"Pta hai mujhe Shazia. Usse meine itna zaleel kiya hai ki ab woh kahi apna mu dikahane ke layak nhi bacchi hogi" Mom added. Mom, what's with you? Why do you hate my Aaliya so much?

"Par Mom, Aaliya ne Zain ko ek acche tareeke se badla hai. Ab woh na toh late night parties pe jaata hai aur kaafi responsible bann gya hai" Miss universe added. Aww thank you Miss universe. You are so right.

"Sahi bol rhi hai aap Miss Universe" I said as I entered with Aaliya, hand in hand.

"Aaliya!" Miss Universe came running towards her and hugged her. I smiled. "I am so sorry Aaliya" She said.

"Tum yaha kya kr rhi ho Aaliya? Oh wait, tumhe paise nhi diye the isliya waapis aa gyi ho na?" Mom said. Wait mom! Aap esa nhi keh skti MERI Aaliya ko..!!

"Rukiye mom! Bas, mei uss time chup rha kyunki mujhe lga ki sach mei Aaliya thoda overeact kr rhi hai! Par aapne kya kiya Mom? Itna zaleel kiya Aaliya ko" I said.

"Zain!" Mom shouted.

"No Mom! Aaj nhi! Aaj na hi mei aapki baato ko sunne waala hu, na hi unpe vishwas krne waala hu" I said. "WE ARE LEAVING BARKAT VILLA...!!!"
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Do leave your comments and likes...!!
Hope you all liked it...!!
PM's to be sent in a while...!!
Thanks a lot and take care...!!! 😉 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
#2
loved how Zain stood up for Aliya and defended her 😳
Awesome start Tanya 👍🏼
loved the update as always
waiting for the next part... continue soon
thanks for the PM
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: .Anisha.

loved how Zain stood up for Aliya and defended her Embarrassed
Awesome start Tanya Thumbs Up

loved the update as always

waiting for the next part... continue soon

thanks for the PM



Aww... Thank you so much...!!!
Yeah me too..!! Zain is such a cutie. No...??
Well not gonna continue it as I mentioned earlier...!!!
But will start with a new OS soon...!!
Thanks a lot and take care...!!! 😉 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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superrbb update ...👏
so beautifully written
loved it❤️
ty so much for d pm😳😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awww...!! Tanya this was awesome.Well Written.👏👏👏
Superb Tanya.I love this.You are awesome.👏
Edited by Tit_For_Tat - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Tit_For_Tat

Awww...!! Tanya this was awesome.Well Written.👏👏👏

Superb Tanya.I love this.You are awesome.👏


Aww thank you so much...!!
I know I am...!! 😆 😆
Thanks a lot and take care...!!! 😉 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice one...
Loved it...
Thanks for the pm...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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superb os
aww zain supports her mez
liked it
all d best 4 ur next work tanya 😊
Edited by jazly_zayafan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Yah Yah..I know i m late😡
But iss baar socha kisi aur ko chance du(i m so kind-hearted usee?)😳
Anyways...this was really good yaar...👏
I must say zain ne ek dum sahi kiya...that BV is ghost villa...rahe suri akeli..🤢
But zain supporting aliya was just fab!!
Zain ka POV..i loved that..!!!😳
And aliya kya mahan ban rahi thi?thank god zain ne shabana ko sab keh diya😆
Keep writing..!!(as if u will stop)😛
Awesome OS tha Tanya...!! Thnx for PM..loved it...!!😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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amazing update
u such a great writer

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