I hate her!-A Drabble :)

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hello hello...

Vinu is back with her round of torture! Bad news is that i just came back home from my trip and good news is that I'll be in full form only from monday may be... mujhe bhi thoda rest chahiye!😛 i wrote this when i got little time when i was travelling toh bilkul bekaar ho sakta hai! Romance/comedy, all that is not my cup of tea, coffee, bournvita, horlicks, boost, complan anything! but main impatience ki maa hoon, so ise post karne tak mujhe chain nahi mila... here you go!

This one is also a part of my HarshIka/ZaYa drabble series and I suck at keeping titles so don't mind!

All those who are unaware of the concept of the series, please refer to This post

added to that is, Harshad/Zain's Mom is Pree/Aliya's father's sister here. so humaari Pree/Aliya is Maami ki Bhaanji😛😆

And coming to this one,

scene: Mr Peter and Zain's graveyard scene and our Pretty Pree/Aliya has dropped in on the sets.. what does Harshad/Zain have to think?

I hate her

Zain/Harshad's POV

"kuch zyaada hi shararati hogayi gayi Ho aajkal tum" he said slightly twisting her ears making her squeal like a little kitten. I did not know if I had to smile or get irritated or be angry "I agree sir. badi shaitan bante jaa rahi hai yeh" Maan sir said whacking her head softly. I was jealous. Not of him yaar! I was jealous of her! As soon as she entered the set, I was being awarded royal ignorance... as if I did not even exist! That's why I hate her. All of them like her more than me. Even mom! Was that not why I had had a fight with her when we were 12 and vowed not to see each other again? I used to go on trips or to some relatives' house whenever she would drop home for summer holidays or something.But God did not to seem to like my happiness! Now I need to see her, talk to her and may be in a few days kiss her 7 days a week!

But it was times like this when I felt it was my mistake may be! How can someone not like such a cute cartoon? Just look at her. how she is making a puppy face with the cutest pout and flipping her eyelids fast and saying, "Maine kya kiya?" in the most innocent voice, just like a kid being scolded for eating a chocolate. I feel like pulling those plump cheeks right now! If I , who hates her wants to do this then what about others? And there, Farhan sir did it too. 6 months! Just 6 months and she has virtually become Farhan sir's daughter and to Maan sir, if I was his best friend, she was his little sis. Anyways, we are in her domination zone now. Let's get back to BV! Suchi ma and Gunjan Di will be there right? Although they love her too, they love me more! Hmm... I feel a 100 times better now!

But why is she here? Wasn't she supposed to be shopping to heart's content now? she did not have any shoot today and tomorrow! But damn! I can't ask her. Her immediate reaction will be ' why do you care? Distracted? Concerned? Irritated? Why do you have to feel anything for me?' as much as I am distracted,concerned and irritated, I am not going to tell her that! Someone ask her! "Accha? Kuch nahin kiya? Toh batau yaha kyun aayi ho?" love you Maan sir! Hugging you virtually. "Main toh farhan sir ki acting dekhne aayi hoon. Telecast toh dekh nahin paungi iss liye socha live dekhlu" fun and mischief was filled in each word! And how innocent of our captions to believe her. The only reason she is here is me! We both know it MKB! Whom are you trying to kid? Did she just see me now? From the corner of her eye... or am I hallucinating? Irritating me is her lone motive in life! MKB kahiki! I hate you!



hogayi..drabble hai! isse lambi nahi ho sakti

PMs kal subah uthke bhejungi...tired now and gotta catch up 5 episodes!

love you and misssed you🤗🤗🤗

par ha.. like aur comment bhoolo math

P.S. Parody Paradise update will be as regular-on saturday(that is tomorrow-aapki phooti kismat🤣)

and Fanaa will be updated on monday...i know i'm late but cholly

P.P.S. Kya kisi ko iss scene ka Aliya/Pree POV padne ki intrest hai?🤔

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Posted: 11 years ago
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RES
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Awesome Vinu...!!

Balla Channaga Ittu 😆

Maami Ki Bhanji...🤣..You are Too hilarious..!
Jealous Harshu was awesome..!!

Gunjan di and Suchi ma..🤣

Sach mein you are an awesome writer...!! Hats off Vinu...You really are getting better day by day..!!




Edited by Tit_For_Tat - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Vinu u r back🤗
Res...!!
Shit avi aa gayi mujhse pehle😭
Edited by craziness05 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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RES...!!😲
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Unres...!!😲
OMG...!!! ye to last time se accha laga mujhe...u r sudhering my buttercup..!!
Harshad is such a cutie pie..and pree ko tune kitna sweetly portray kiya hai...
Pulling cheeks...awww
Chalo i m satisfied with this update...U rock meri jaan..!!🥳
Zyada khush mat ho...Fanaa abhi baaki hai...I love that more...aur i m waiting for the update...😃
And rahi baat parody ki to jaldi meri kismat ko phooti bana n update kar...
haan..i want to read uska POV😳
Ab...
I MISSED YOU BUTTERCUP......!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Kitna miss kiya tujhe maine...Welcome back..!!🤗
*Hugsss..!!* Don't call me Nautanki ya phir DK now..sach bol rahi hu...I LOVE U..!!❤️
Edited by ZayaShiz - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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First of all gr8 to see u back. 🤗🤗
Ths forum is suna suna without u vinu...tu kya gayi BI ki trp bhi kir gayi...hamare forum ki rank kir gayi...we get DT note in our shipping adda...n etc etc..
Bt ya we got gr8 harshika pics.of their lucknow n Kanpur trip...idhar tu trip pe gaye n udhar harshika bhi chale gaye n we all left alone roaming on forum n twitter lk bhoot.
Anyways Hope u enjoyed ur trip.
Cuming to the drabble its amazing ...harshika behaving n thinking just lk zaya...wish it happens in real.
Btw I'm waiting for my kismet to get phoot tomorrow.😆
Take rest n cum back in full form soon...waiting for u our sauten.
Edited by Aneesha. - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Res

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Unres..
OMG OMG OMG.. Yeh kya tha vinu? 😲
I didnt knw ki tu itni achi writer hai.. Kahaan chupke baithi thi?
Amazing man.. 👏 👏
My Harshu is such a sweetypie..
Haaye this was ausum..

Suchi ma and Gunjan Di will be there right?

@Bold
ROFL 😆 😆
Edited by ZayaHarshika - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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baby gal.. is just so sweet and fluffy...
Zain's/Harshu's monologue is so cute...
and your description ..god... its like i can see it actually hapeeningf in front of my eyes
great work...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Reswaa...!!!!

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TR the update was just ..*sounding pretty serious*A-M-A-Z-I-N-G .!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!..

whenever the point is about portraying feelings of zain/harsh ..you just kill it .. i just loved harsh POV..and would love read pree too...chalo today you have satisfied me ..(mind you not fully)

And whats this madam ji??

"puppy face with the cutest pout and saying, "Maine kya kiya?" "

muje laga ki tuje srif meri comment hi chori karthi hai ..aajse expression bhi karne lag gai????

PS: Gosh ...i missed you so much meri PR..!!!*hugs you tight*

Edited by ...Renu... - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awsm update
Loved it
Very nicely written

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Res😉
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Unres
This was amazing vinu, u described and wrote Harshad/zain's view really well. I love it😃
Edited by zainaliya-12 - 11 years ago

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