ZaYa OS: Because You're Mine - Page 2

Originally posted by: -Ammie-

oh my, this was easily one of the most cutest, well written Os i've read in a while! truly everything was top notch! be it the romance or the fun / flirty element...

i love how you presented both of their perspectives! very nicely written😳

looking forward to reading more from you...

awesome one.
besharam vs phatto zain scene was damn funny.
zaya part was really romantic and hot.keep writing.

OMG
lovely lovely os
really loved it
great work

you are simply tooo goood. that fangirling part had me crcking and that cornering was so like besharam zai.loved it.please continue if u can. loved it.

^ Thanks so much everyone. May continue if I have time :)

Damn, this was ... mesmerizing.

Originally posted by: hilly

Damn, this was ... mesmerizing.

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Kudos to Harshad for playing Phatto & Besharam Zain SO epicly well.

Would love to see more than in the upcoming, silly track.
Besharam Zain is such a treat- he's got such SWAG chilling on the bed with a drink like that and telling Phatto one off.

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Coming to the OS.. Woah, the combination of both of them playing at once, once they merged with the hug was done well. lol @ Aali- she couldn't even think straight and started blabbering to distract herself from such close proximity. Poor think was left so gobsmacked while attacked with a hug. Really well done :)

Lovely OS 😳 Loved it!

I was just going through different threads when I came across this OS! I mean like I was seriously missing something so fabulous from three days 😉 It was wonderfull!! 👏 Finally the HUGG! Although we didn't get this in the drama but yours was enough to satisfy my demands 😛 I think it must have been Behsharam Zain's plan to provoke him for the Hug 😆 Besharam Zain was soo smart!! He knew how to make Phattu Zain hug his wifee LOL! And thenn like Aaliya's confused and nervous state was so lovely to read! Mann she was fangirling her own husband 😛 Hahah! That part was EPIC! And how can I forget that 'NAHHII' ! hahah 'Tum Allah se Nahi mangti ho" 😛 Hahah Zain knows everythingg 😉 He's way too too superb and cool 😳 The best part was that Nahii, ruk waha during that useless conversation of Besharam and Phattu Zain 😆 Loved itt! Now going to read your OS 'Tho Kya Ye Ishq Hai' 😊