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Posted: 11 years ago
#21
You my dear need to stand up and take a bow.


Superb job on this one! Weaving in their personal lives and how they differ from their social lives was an excellent input. The facades that these two wear when in public compared to an enclosed room. Marvellous, simply marvellous. The balance between angst and romance was perfect. Not too sappy, not too morbid. I have to admit, Zeeshan's addition was very will introduced, specially revisiting old times when they were about to get married (Thank god they didn't otherwise bechara Zain would've been left without his kitkit).


Simply put, from beginning to end, it truly was a remarkable read. Hats off to a job well done! 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
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That was so beautiful ! Please write moree u are a wonderful writer ⭐️
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Posted: 11 years ago
#23
it was awesome... the blend of angst and romance was simply perfect! :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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BEAUTIFUULLLYY WRITTEN DEAR👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Too good to be true...you seem to have the writer's pen...great work...love the way u have penned it...makes it life like...can feel those emotions surface to reality...pm me your other works plz
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Beautiful piece of work! At least Zeeshan got them to confess!
Loved it.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow this OS was just beautiful! 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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It was amazing <3
I was actually planning to write an OS with Zeeshan making Zain jealous and making him confess.
But mine could have never been this good 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
#29
Lovely OS 😳
beautifully written
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Posted: 11 years ago
#30
best os i have ever read...👏
awesome just awesome...
i am soo sad i couldnt read it earlier...
as i wsnt a member...
but awesome os...
u really are a rocker...
keep writing...😃

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