*{we all write a FF together!}*

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Posted: 17 years ago
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hi guys till date all of us have only been writing our own ff's but I thought tht there cud b sum chnge I mean most of us have lots of ff's and they're all great but hw great wud it b if all of us write one together for exmple I may start off wid the first part then you will have to decide wat the nxt part is

okay lets get started!

rules: min:35 lines and after tht amount you can do as much as you like….priya

plz don't change the character names

arushi: divyanka

ishaan: sharad

arushi:shalu kaha gaye tum jaldi karo puja keliye der hojayegi

shalu: haan didi mein abhi aati hoon lekin kya aapne saara saman leliya puja keliye

arushi: haan shalu ab chalo

a's ma:arushi!shalu!jaldi karo beta hume deri horahi hei

arushi:ji ma hum abhi aye shalu ko lekar

as they enter the temple the bells start to ring

a's ma, arushi,shalu:namaste panditji

pandit:sad sukhi raho,sadha, suki raho baith jaoo

a's ma:ji punditji

pandit:haan ab dhaaga dijiye

a's ma:arushi beta dhaaga nikalo

arushi:wo……ma…dhaaga lana tho hum bhul hi gaye

a's ma:koi baat nahi jaoo jakar mandir ki dukaan se le aao shalu ko lekar

arushi :haan ma hum abhi jaatey hei, chalo shalu

shalu:didi meine kaha tha na ki kuch reh tho nahi gaya

arushi:haan par jaldi mein bhul gayi thi

shalu:ab jaiyiye bhi

arushi:o fo shalu tum eise humse humesha behas kyun karte ho

shalu:di mein behas kaha kar rahi hoon mein tho bas aapko kehrahe hoon aapko tho meri koi bhi baat achi nahi lagti isliye mein jarahi hoon dhaaga karid kar ajaiyege

arushi:jaa!

I's ma:ishaan!....ishaan! kya kar rahe ho tum abhi tak tayar nahi hue kya

ishaan:yes mom im cuming jus chill

I's ma:ishaan tum bhi na kitne der lagathe ho aaj puja heina!

ishaan:aya mom…driver!!! gadi nikalo

they get into the car and reach the temple there arushi finishes collecting dhaaga and is cuming bk up to the mandir and crossing the road

ishaan is also getting dwn the car and crossing the road

I's ma: ishaan beta mein tho nariyal laana bhul gayi jaoo uss mandir wali dukaan se le aao tab tak mein mandir jati hoon tikhe beta

ishaan:ok mom

ishaan is walking pass the road to the shop and thts were arushi is and arushi cuming ishaans way where the temple steps are------------------------

bump!!!!!!!!!!!!!

ishaan:hey deka kar nahi chl sakte ho kya

arushi:aapka matlab kya hei aap mujse takraye the hum appse nahi

ishaan:deko khud galti karti hei aur muje blame kar rahi hei hw stupid ab sorry bolo

arushi:hum sry nahi bolne wale galti aapki hei u say sorry

ishaan:xus me! ishaan aur sorry never galte karne wale ko sry bolni chaiye muje nahi

arushi:mei aapse nahi takrayi thi aap mujse takraye so u say sorry…aur humara dhaaga…dhaaga kaha gaya(she looks for it on the floor)arey dhaaga tho gaya ab kya karoon

ishaan:well sorry bolo

arushi:no im not gonna say sorry u say sprry tis ur fault

ishaan:lagta hei aapko behas karne ka bahot shuak hei

arushi:dekiye hum aapse koi bhi behsa nahi karna chahte wese bhi puja ki mahurat nikalraha hei….arey puja!

she runs up the steps to the puja

a's ma: arushi beta tum agayi itne der tak kaha thi

arushi:wo…..ma

a's ma:kher koi baat nahi par dhaaga layi hona

arushi:arey dhaaga lana tho hum bhul hi gaye…abhi lekar aatey hei

a ma:jaldi jaoo muharat nikalraha hei

arushi:haan!

I's ma:arey ishaan tum agaye nariyal laye hona

ishaan:o shit! nariyal o mom abhi lekar aati hoon bhul gaya

they both go to the same place again and as arushi rushes she is abt to fall and ishaan cathes her in his arms….

They stare at each other…………….for long

arushi gets up

arushi: wo….hum ….dhaaga

ishaan:wo dhaaga aap yaha chodgayi(he givz it to her)

while giving dhaaga to her he touches her hand and holds onto it

arushi:wo…humara haath

ishaan:o sorry!

arushi runs up the temple steps as her dupatta flies across ishaans face…….

ishaan:muje eisa kyun hua jab mein usse dhaaga de raha tha tab mere dadkan eise tez kyun hogaye…kher! the nariyal lets go get it

arushi:ma dhaaga

a's ma:do ab puja shuru karte hei punditji

pundit: avashya

they finish puja and then arushis mom meets her childhood friend

a's mom:arey varsha! tum yaha

ishaans mom:sunaina tum kesi ho

they hug each other

a's ma (sunaina):tik hoon kaha thi tum itne din meri yaad nahi aye ek phone bhi nahi kiya tumne

varsha(ishaan mom):nahi eisi koi baat nahi hei wo no.khogay tha aur ishaan ke papa ki death hogayi aur hume pune jaana pada

sunaina:ye tho badi afsos ki baat hei varsha mein samhajsakti hoon

varsha:ye dono kaun hei..

sunaina:meri betiyaan! ye he arushi aur ye shalu

arushi,shalu:namaste aunty

varsha:kese ho bete

arushi,shalu:hum tik hei aunty

ishaan cumz in!

ishaan:mom aapka nariyal..

varsha:beta inse milo ye tumhare auntyji hei

ishaan:hi aunty!

varsha:aunty ko namste karo beta

ishaan:o sorry namaste

varsha: aur in dono ko milo ye hei arushi aur ye shalu

shalu:hi

arushi:tum!

ishaan:tum!

sunaina:arey tum dono ek doosre ko jante ho!

arushi:wo…..ma

ishaan:wo..nai..aunty bas yunhi

sunaina:o…..varsha aaj tho tumhe merey ghar aana hi padega

varsha:zaroori bas puja khatam karke baithiye arushi beta aur shalu aap bhi

arushi,shalu:ji aunty

varsha:sunaina tum bhi baitho

sunaina:ha varsha

varsha:chalo ishaan baitho

ishaan:kaha

varsha:wo arushi ke paas jagey hein waha baith jayo

ishaan hesitates but then sits and arushi feeling vry embarrassed and shy

they sit nxt to each other

arushi:ma puja khatam hui hum chale

sunaina:kya jaldi hei arushi chal hi rahe hei hum …chalo ishaan beta,chalo varsha

varsha:chalo

they r in arushis house and as arushi serves tea to ishaan he glooms at her…

ishaan:thnks par mein chai nahi peetha

sunaina and varsha have tea and shalu goes upstairs

then sunaina and varsha go to sunainas room and start chting

varsha:ishaan beta tum arushi se baatein karo aur hum aatey he thodi der mein

ishaan:wo……………………ok

ok guys nw I leave it to you…..plz leave cmments and do write the nxt prt..mke sure it has A_I romance…good luck!

..priya...😳

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Posted: 17 years ago
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plz leave cmmentz+ur own part!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hi.. this is priyadarshini basu... u can call me priyo.. i am a new member here and 2day is my first post
well priya exciting start and here i continue...

5 minutes have past since ishaan and arushi's mom have headed to the next room and they have not spoken a single line to each other.
Ishaan <thinking>... aur kitna wait karu??? jhagra ke tym kitna bolti hai aur abhi dekho bolti bandh..

Arushi<thinking>-... kaisa ladka hai... kuch bolta hi nahi hai but jhagra to toofan ke jaise karta hai..

Ishaan<thinking>... yeh to typical 1960's ki ladkiyon ki tarah behave kar rahi hai.

Arushi<thinking>... Uff mera mooh itni der kabhi bandh raha hai kya??? fine let me start

Ishaan<thinking>... ok i'll start
both<thinking>... 1,2,3...start
both of them.... woh...

they stare at each other..
Ishaan- woh main... main... main..

A small boy screams singing:- MAIN TO HOON PAGAL... YEH KAHU HAR PAL, AB KOI HULCHUL HONE DE HONE DE..

Arushi was trying not to laugh out out loud..." kya timing mein Tilu gana gaya woh bhi perfect"

Here Ishaan is all embarrased angry and everything...
Ishaan<thinking>:- yeh kaun badmaash tha?? abhi nahi Ishaan ... pata nahi tu itna nervous kyun ho raha hai.. ek ladki hi to hai..
Ishaan: woh arushi...tumhara naam kya hai arushi?

while arushi looked at him with shock ishaan was lyk "o shit!"

arushi:- now i get it... aapko bhulne ki bimaari hai
ishaan: matlab?
arushi:- pehley to shaqh ho raha tha ki ap mooh se bolna bhul gaye magar jab apne mera naam poocha tab to poora yakeen ho gaya ke sach mein aapko bhulne ki bimaari hai.
ishaan:-mera mazak ura rahi ho?
arushi:- mein kabhi dharam praji ke fan ki mazak nahi urati...
ishaan:- wat do u mean?
arushi:- arrey khud abhi to sholay film ki veeru ki style mein kaha arushi tumhara naam kya hai arushi aur tab to dharam praji ki tarah lad rahe the mandir mein..
ishaan:- yeh kuch zyada ho raha hai...
itni mazak thik nahi.
arushi:- shahrukh khan ki kasam mazak nahi kar rahi hu.
ishaan:- to yeh kya kar rahi ho?
arushi:- sachchayi baiyaan kar rahi hu.. 😉
ishaan:- u know wat bohot filmy ho...
arushi:- haila sachchi???
ishaan:- yuck i dont lyk this haila waila..tumhari zaban hi galat hai..
arushi:- zaban galat hai? wat do u mean? har ek ki zaban to aisi hi hoti hai... and bio book mein bhi zaban ka diagram aisa hi hai... tumhe shayad short distance syndrome hai .. thik hai koi baat nahi zaban dikha deti hu... lo dekho
<and takes her tongue out>
ishaan:- dont u have any manners? aise kisi ko zaban thodi dikhate hai???
arushi:-to dikhane doosra style bhi hai kya?? bolo na plz..
ishaan<thinking>:- ishaan mere pyaare gaadhe... tu isko 1960 ki ladkiyon ke saat compare kar raha tha ??? chi!
arushi:- kaha kho gaye ho?
ishaan:- agra.
arushi:-waha khone ki koi khas wajah?
ishaan:- ha hai. mann mann mein zara pagaal khana ko dekh raha tha..
arushi:- o to tum bhi mujhe pagal keh rehe ho... sab kehte hai..
ishaan:- arrey arrey nahi main itni badi gustakhi kaise kar sakta hu? tumhare liye nahi mere liye dekh raha tha?
arushi:- woh kyun?
ishaan:- kyunki aur thodi der tum baki na to main sach much pagal ho jaunga aur mujhe pagal khane mein shift hona parega.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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^exellent i loved it priyo thx can sumone else carry on nw and it has to b romantic scene nw and i mean very romantic.....good luck
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Posted: 17 years ago
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this is a very nice idea priya .. both the parts r very well written by both of them .. i ll continue sometime 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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thanks but im really bad at ff
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey...nyc updates so far....a real gd idea of everyone writing the ff together...i will deffo help out but at the moment im busy wif writing my own ff 😆 ....it would be appreciated if u check it out and tell me wat u think bout it... 😳 its called :

pyaar ki jeet.....

...Narmeen...
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Posted: 17 years ago
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^ ill definetly check it out....

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