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SO THIS IS A NEW FF THAT I MADE CALLED JUST FRIENDS?

IT STARTS OFF WITH MINI SAGAR AND MINI VIDYA. THEY ARE CHILDHOOD FRIENDS AND GOT SEPARATED WHEN THEY WERE 4&5 YEARS OLD.

the next scene takes place a few years later when vidya is 13 and sagar is 14.

shalu:VIDYA!!(shalu keeps running through the woods as fast as she can)VIDYA!! vidya jaldi ao.

we see the lips of a girl as they say.
vidya:kya hua shalu
shalu:vo...chote....chote..
vidya:aare shalu battaon na.
Shalu:choote thakur... he's at the cliffs.
vidya:tho kya hua?
shalu:vo khud kushi karna chati hain. plz vidya aab usko baat kar. vo theek taryase *she stats crying*
vidya:agar vo khud kushi karna chati hain tho karne do.
shalu: vidya, ye tum kya keherahiho. tum ko zara se bhi fikar nehi hain uske jaan ke liye.
vidya:kyun phikar karu. aare uska jaan hain vo jo karna chati hain karne do. muhje koi farak nehi parega.
shalu:theek hai lekin mein garehoon
vidya:gao, muhje bohoth sara kaam hai.

shalu runs off and leaves vidya all by her self.vidya is picking peas and puts them in a large basket. after a while she starts walking.

vidya: ye chote thakur bhi na. bohoth zyada thamasha karthi hain.

whilts walking through the fields she mutters to her self about how chote thakur has a quench for attention.

Vidya; lekin agar vo such much khud kushi karenge tho......SAGAR!!!!!!!!!!

she drops her basket of peas and runs back the other way as fast as her legs would carry her. the wind rushed through her hair and slapped against her face


WELL I'VE INTRODUCED YOU TO VIDYA SO TOMORROW I WILL INTROUDCE YOU TO SAGAR.

BYE

LOVE FROM
PRIYA
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Posted: 17 years ago
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NIce job...cant wait to see S! 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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well i'm gonna introduce sagar now.
sorry i didn't write much yesterday about vidz, its because it was quarter past twelve in the morining in england so i was really tired

love you guys
priya 😆


someone in crowd:aare chote thakur plz. aab idar aye.
shalu: ha chote thakur. plz khud kushi muth kar
someone in crowd: tumhara jaan to hum sab ke se keemthi hai.
someone in crowd: aare koi usko rokiye.
merra: shalu vidya kaha hai?
shalu:vo...mein usko dhoonda tha lekin mila nehi.

someone in the crowd steps forward.

sagar:agar tumney ek kadam aur rakdi tho mein yaha se zaror jump karongi.

sagar turns around and looks at all of them. his gorgeous hazel brown eyes are filled with tears. sadness overcame his usually happy face and turned it sour. the rain whipped his hair against his face as he spoke. the person steps back.

sagar: mein aab loogse bohoth pyar karthi hoon lekin jo mein suchi pyar karthi hoon vo meri shakal thak nehi dhekna chathi.
someone in the crowd: lekin yaha ke sub ladki tumse shaddi karna chati hai.
sagar: lekin vo nehi.
shalu: tum abhibi chote ho. koi aur tumhe zaror millegi( in other words shalu wants sager to marry her).
sagar: nehi millegi. aur agar millegi to phir uuper se.
merra: chote thakur plz.

sagar walks up to merra and places his hands on her face.

Sagar: merra tum janthi ho ki mein tum ko rothe huye nehi dheek sakthi.
merra: tho phir muth jaye.
sagar: jana hoga. dadi mere liye intasar karihain.
sagar pulls merra close and hugs her one last time. he lets go and smiles at her. he starts walking to the cliffs and prays.
the wind starts to blow very hard and pushes everyone back except him. he was ready.
He took three steps forward and closed his eyes

Vidya: SAGAR!!!!!!!
She pulls sagar back but accidently trips over a rock and falls back. She screams>
Sagar: VIDYA!!!!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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wow nice story plzz cont soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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HEY PPL NOT GETTING ENOUGH COMMENTS TO CONTINUE
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Posted: 17 years ago
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PLS COMMENT OTHERWISE I WONT CONTINUE
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Posted: 17 years ago
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nyc start of ff plz cont soon... 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
#8
are...ab continue karoa na....ab oar in intizar nehin kar sahthey hei
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Posted: 17 years ago
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can i continue the rest of the story priya?
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Please continue soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I can't wait anymore!!!!!!!!!

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