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chand pari thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hello...

Sorry I couldn't comment...Well I had some comp problems..

👏 WAH!!!!Kya updates thay...
I love ur ff and plz don't end this just think of something new and continue this...You everyone likes it so much so it's a request...I was also wondering about Shalu and if she had a baby yet or not..But I am glad she'll be back soon...

Plz cont soon... 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
#42
really nyc long update...!

plz cont soon :D
Edited by narmz - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#43
yipeee they are back 2getha...long update..and a gr8 one...
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Posted: 17 years ago
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wow, you are a great writer.Plzzz continue!! 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Recap: Sagar found vidya and took her back home.

Sagar and vidya were still sitting on the bed hugging each other when vidya pulls herself away and looks at sagar's face. She looks at him as he looks like as if he is trying to hold back his tears and his words. Vidya looks at him and again apologizes for leaving him like that but than she goes on talking about how she thought that leaving was the only solution she found because she really wanted to have the baby. As she was talking sagar puts the index finger of his right hand on her mouth to make her stop talking. Vidya looks at him in surprise as he starts talking as he removes his finger from her lips.

Sagar: vidya how could you even think that I would ask you to kill an innocent life………

Vidya: but you said you didn't want a child

Sagar: you should know by now vidya that I often do and say stupid things that I don't mean………….If you thought I didn't want a child and you wanted it you should have gone straight to my dad and told him about your pregnancy……..didn't I tell you about my dad and him wanting a grandchild…………….and you know how I cant say anything to my dad………………

He was about to say something else when vidya cuts him off as she is thinking to herself and says "haan…..I should have done that….yeh toh maine socha he nahi" Sagar as he sees vidya thinking to herself smiles as he hits her lightly on her head and says "sochnay kay liye dimaag zaroori hota hai jo tumharey pass nahi hai" Vidya stops thinking and looks at sagar as he smiles and seeing him smile also makes her smile and she again hugs him. They were both hugging each other when sagar says "vidya tumhey meri yaad nahi ayi kabhi……..u never even thought of calling me once" Vidya as she is still hugging him says "main tum se pehle bhi keh chuki hoon par phir kehti hoon yaad ussey kiya jata hai jise kabhi bhool jaein aur tumhey bhoolna mere bas ki baat nahi……………..haan par mujh se bhi ziada tumhe kisi aur nay miss kia"

Sagar now looks curious and backs away looking at her and says "accha?.......Kis nay miss kia mujhey?" Vidya smiles as she puts both of her arms in front of sagar and says "in choorion nay……" Sagar smiles as he looks at her arms and than looks at her face again.

Viday now looks at her bangles and says "bhari bhuddhu hain yeh….. janti bhi hain kay tum dushman ho inkey aur inhey tor do gay par phir bhi tumhey din raat yaad karti rehti thi" Sagar grabs both of her arms and kisses them and than looks at her face again and they stay up all night talking about what they did without each other and bunch of other stuff.

The next scene is after it has been awhile since vidya has been back now. Sagar is in his room standing in front of the mirror trying to put on his tie but he is getting frustrated because he can't get it right. He gives up and calls out to vidya. A very pregnant vidya comes into the room walking slowly as she has her one hand on her waist and says "kya hai?" Sagar looks at her he smiles and than says "I can't get the tie right….I am trying but it won't go"

Vidya: didn't I teach you just yesterday

Sagar: I did everything the way you told me but I can't get it right

Vidya roll's her eyes and walks up to sagar and grabs the tie out of his hands and starts tying the tie. She finishes it for him and sagar smiles and kisses her on her head and then tries to hug her but he can't hug her right because her pregnant tummy is getting in the way. He looks at vidya and says "kya vidya I cant even hug you right…….baby is coming in the way" He gets down on his knees in front of her and starts talking to her stomach and says "kya baby jee why are you being a hadi in the kabab and coming between mom and dad" after saying that he puts his ear on vidya's stomach to see if he can hear a response. As he puts his ear on her stomach the baby kicks and sagar immediately backs away and looks at vidya and says "oye vidya did you see that…….this is the second time this baby has kicked me I think it wants to start a fight" Vidya laughs as sagar stands up now and says "tumhari aulad hai panga lenay ki aadat toh tum say virasaat mein mili hai issey" Sagar also laughs and says "that's right!!!!"

Sagar now heads towards the bed and grabs his coat and starts putting it on when vidya says "waisey aaj tyaar ho kar kahan ja rahey ho"

Sagar: office ja raha hoon aur kahan jaon ga

Vidya: I thought baba told you that you were not going to the office today and you were going somewhere else

Sagar stops whatever he was doing immediately and says "oh yeah……I was suppose to go pick up chinu and shalu from the airport"

Vidya as she hears that looks happy and surprised and says "shalu is coming?" Sagar now bites his tongue as he closes his eyes and says "I was SECRETLY suppose to go pick up shalu and chinu" Vidya now comes close to sagar and says "sachi? Is shalu really coming?" Sagar smiles and says "yeah……..shalu wanted it to be a surprise…..so act surprise when they come and don't tell them that I told you that they are coming" Vidya looks very happy and says "don't worry I wont tell them and I will act very surprised"

In the next scene vidya is sitting in the living room with sagar's parents but she keeps looking towards the door as she is smiling. Sindoora who was also sitting there notices that and says "kya baat hai vidya? Kya dekh rahi ho bar bar" Vidya smiles as she looks at sindoora and says "kucch nahi di bas aisey hi" As she finishes her sentence she hears foot steps and gets excited because she knows its going to be shalu and chinu. She gets up and starts walking towards the door as everyone else also gets up to see where vidya is going and they see sagar and chinu holding the bags while shalu is walking holding her baby. Vidya almost runs towards shalu but than realizes that it's not possible for her she puts her hand on her stomach and now walks slowly towards shalu. Shalu smiles as she sees a pregnant vidya coming towards her. Vidya immediately first grabs the baby out of shalu's hand and than hugs shalu. After hugging she pulls away as sagar comes and stands next to vidya and looks at the baby and says "Isn't he cute vidya"

Vidya smiles and says "haan hamari shalu pay gaya hai na iss liye cute hai" Sagar gets offended and says "what you mean? You mean to say that chinu is not a good looking guy? And by the way I think the baby looks like chinu that is why he is so cute" Vidya disagrees and says "No!!!!! I think he looks like shalu" Chinu and shalu just stand there and smile as everyone looks at their baby.

Sagar and vidya were about to get into an argument when uma takes the baby from vidya and says "mujhey toh lagata hai dono pay gaya hai" Sagar and vidya on hearing that now look at the baby at the same time and than look at each other and than at the same time say "yeah he looks like both of them"


Next scene is after couple of days. Shalu and chinu are only there for a week so they decided to go meet some old friends and than go somewhere else and shalu thought that since they are only going for few hours she shouldn't take the baby with her and vidya offers to take care of the baby along with uma, so shalu leaves with chinu leaving the baby with vidya and tells her to be careful and she will be back in two hours.

Vidya is sitting in the room with the baby and baby falls asleep and she gently puts him on the bed and puts some pillows around him and than puts the covers on him and than kisses his cute face and than goes towards the bathroom. As vidya is in the bathroom sagar comes as he came back early from the office. Sagar without knowing that the baby is sleeping yells out vidya's name really loud. The baby gets scared and starts crying as he wakes up. Sagar now gets terrified and goes near the baby and picks him up and says "stop crying!!!!" but the baby cries even more now and sagar doesn't know what to do but than he sees the bathroom door open and vidya coming out and says "Vidya make it stop crying" Vidya immediately comes and grabs the baby from sagar and the baby stops crying as soon as vidya holds him. Sagar raises his eyebrow and says "I think he doesn't like me" Vidya laughs and says "what did you do to make him cry"

Sagar: nothing I just called out to you…….aur waisey bhi why was he sleeping here iss ki mom kahan hai

Vidya tells him that they went out for something and they will be back and in the meanwhile she thought that she would get little practice with the baby before their baby comes and sagar smiles hearing that as he sees her with shalu and chinu's kid.

The next scene is after almost two years. Sagar and vidya had a baby boy for which sagar's dad got so happy and started new company abroad in his name and gave it to sindoora and sindoora got really happy and accepted the deal and moved abroad. In the singh house the phone is ringing and vidya comes and picks it up and talks for awhile and than after hanging up dials sagar's number and calls him to come home early. Sagar asks her why what's the reason. So she tells him that Rohit and his wife are coming to visit. Sagar gets happy and agrees. Well Rohit after noticing how well chinu and sagar's arranged marriage worked was obsessed with the idea of getting an arranged marriage. And he wanted his pyari bhabi's (vidya and shalu) to pick the girl for him. So vidya and shalu had a very bright idea of hooking Rohit up with Radha and well Radha and Rohit got married.

Sagar and vidya are sitting along with Radha and Rohit. Rohit and sagar were talking to
each other while Radha and Vidya are talking to each other. But sagar and Rohit can
overhear the girls conversation. Radha says "waisey where is your shaitan
baccha? Nazar nahi ah raha"

Vidya: woh apney dada dadi kay pass hai woh ziada unn kay pass hi rehta hai

Vidya keeps talking and Radha out of nowhere says "are you pregnant again viyda?"
Vidya first is shocked but than blushes as she smiles and looks towards sagar as sagar
also looks at her and smiles because he heard what Radha asked. Rohit and Radha both
look at sagar and vidya's expressions and get the idea.

Rohit laughs and says "come on yaar sagar your first child just turned two"

Sagar: hey!!!! It wasn't planned

Rohit: just like the first one

Vidya blushes as Radha laughs and sagar says "yeah like the first one but don't worry the
third one will be planned"
Vidya looks at sagar in surprise and says "The third one?.......oh no no no I think two is
enough"

Sagar: but what if we have a boy again…….I want a girl

Vidya: maybe we will have a girl

Sagar: but still I want the third one

Sagar and vidya start arguing as Radha and Rohit just sit there and than look at each other
and Radha says "I have a feeling that the number of kids they are going to have is going
to be a lot more than three" Rohit laughs and agrees as they see that sagar and vidya are
not going to stop arguing so they get up and leave as sagar and vidya sit there still
arguing.

Well this is the end guys 😳 I thank all of you guys who took the time to read my FF and liked it so much 😳 and also putting up with many mistakes i made( i am pretty sure i made plenty 😆 )and also the people who took the time to leave me comments...thank you guys 🤗 🤗 and last but not least, i had started this FF by dedicating it to Mani and i would like to end it by dedicating to him once again 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
#46
👏 It is really emotional that ur ending it...This was the best ff one this If...Ur a brillaint writer... 👏 I wonder if i could actually live without this ff...Once again u were my insperation on starting my own ff...
So sweet that Vidya is praganant again 😳 😃
Rahit and Radha got married 😃 Yeah!!!Sanju ka kya hova?
Shalu ans Chinu's child 😳
THis was a very sweet ff...tahnk u soo much for starting it...
God bless!!!
Take care bye...
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Posted: 17 years ago
#47
AWWWWWWW!!!!!!!that was such a cute update...I TOTALLY LOVED IT!!! omgg imma cry...this is soo sad u ended it...i so can not wait fer u to write another one omgg ur an amazing riter... i dont even know how to describe how good u are....SOO TOTALLY WICKEd!!! loved 😭 😊 😃 TUMHAREY NAAAM!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#48
from beginning to end, this was beautiful! loved it! 😃
N3ha thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
#49
heyyy arooj.... AWESOME FF... I LOVED IT SOO MUCHH!!! hope u start another great ff soon!!! 😊



-Meha
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Posted: 17 years ago
#50
👏 👏 what a happy end loved your ff plzz start a new one

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