SV Valentine Day - My story

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Posted: 17 years ago
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V-day is approaching and I keep on thinking of a special episode of Dulhann... Lots of ideas keep on popping in my mind but there's one which I'd like to share with my IF-buddies today... Nandoo, Shaili, Meera...here u go guys...

13th Feb - 11:45 pm - Sagar's room...

Vidya is trying to sleep, Chinoo enters…

C – Bhabhi dadda ko kuch naye saboot mile hai Sindoora di ke khilaaf, woh humein study room mein bula rahein hai…

V is surprised n she follows him to the study room… No one is there…

C – Lagta hai woh kisi kaam se gaye hai…hum yahaan intezaar karte hai…woh aate hi honge…

V – Kahin Sindoora di ko pata nahin chala hoga na?

C – Bhabhi aap chinta mat kijiye hum dekh kar aate hai, aap yahi rukiye ga…

C goes to S's room where S is decorating the room… He then starts helping him… They light some candles, sprinkle some flowers on the bed and make some other arrangements…They put different things on each corner of the room…

C then goes to the study room…

C – Bhabhi dadda kahin dikh nahin rahein, Sindoora di ka bhi kuch pata nahin… Is se pehle ke woh yahaan aa jaaye, aap apne kamre mein jaaiye, hum dadda ko dhundh kar aapke paas aate hai…

V is really scared and she rushes back to her room… As she opens the door, she is pleasantly surprised to see that the whole room is decorated beautifully and S is sitting on the ground with knees bent… She looks at him and asks what's going on and he just keeps looking at her and calls her towards him through aankhon ka ishaara…

As she comes close he takes out a ring and offers it to her, she blushes and brings her hand forward… He slides the ring in her finger and then stands up…

The clock strikes 12.

Before she can say anything he moves closer to her and whispers in her ears…

Vidya I love you…

They look at each other for a few seconds…

S – Aaj Valentine's day hai, is liye main chahta tha ke main sabse pehle tumhara naam loon aur phir tumse apne dil ki baat kahu…

V blushes… they both wish each other Happy Valentine's Day…

S – Vidya jaise saat phere hote hai, saat janmo ka saath hota hai, waise hi aaj main tumhe saat tohfe doonga…

V – Saat tohfe? Hamare liye itna sab karne ki kya zaroorat hai aapko?

S – Mere bas mein ho to main saara jahaan tumhe de doon… yeh to kuch bhi nahin… Tumhe apna pehla tohfa mil gaya hai, ab doosre ki baari…

He gives her a red heavy saree and asks her to change n come… She comes and he keeps staring at her for a while…

S – Beautiful! Vidya aaj is kamre ke har kone mein hamare rishtey ki nishaniyan hai…

V – Matlab?

S – Aao mere saath…

He holds her hands and takes her to one corner of the room, a traditional gold set is lying there… S picks it up and puts the necklace around V's neck and then puts the earrings…

V keeps blushing all the time with emotions flowing from her eyes….

He then takes her to another corner… A pair of kangans are lying there…

S picks them up and slides them in her hands… Then moves to the next corner…

A mangal sutra is lying there… Again he picks it up and puts it around her neck…

Then they move towards the last corner… A small golden box of sindoor is lying there… S puts the sindoor in her maang n then covers her head with her saree's pallu…

S – Ab lag rahi ho tum meri dulhan….Tumse phir se shaadi karne ka waada kiya tha jo poora nahin kar saka, is liye aaj apne dil ki tamanna poori kar li… tumhe apni dulhan ke roop mein dekh liya…

V is in tears of happiness… She keeps staring at him… Her eyes saying how happy she is and how hard it is getting for her to thank him enough for what he has done for her…

S – 6 tohfe de diye ab saat ve ki baari…

S goes and sits on the bed with his legs folded ( Just how V used to sit every time the family planned their first night…lol)

V keeps looking at him and asks…

V – Aap aise kyon baithe hai?

S – Main hoon tumhara saat va tohfa…

V starts giggling and then keeps staring at him…Then she comes and sits beside him…

V – Aap bhi na…

They both laugh a little and then hug each other…

V – Ab aap jaiye, Sindoora di jaag jayegi to pareshani ho jayegi…

S – Wah! Tumhe tohfe mil gaye to tum ab mujhe jaane ko keh rahi ho… Aur waise di ka naam le kar mera mood kyon kharab kar rahi ho yaar!

V – Hum to aapki bhalayi ke liye keh rahe they…

S – Lagta hai tumhe ab bhi meri buddhi pe shak hai… Sindoora di ko kuch nahin pata chalne wala kyon ke maine Chinoo ko apni jagah bhej diya hai… Ab main yahan se nahin jaanewala…

V – Kya?

S – Haan! Ab tum yeh bataao ke tum mujhe kya dene waali ho aaj?

V – Hum to kuch nahin laaye aapke liye… Aap hi bata dijiye ke aapko kya chahiye…

S – Hmmmm…. Mujhe kuch zyada nahin chahiye…. Main sirf itna chahta hoon ke tum apne saare tohfe ke saath insaaf karo…

V – Matlab ?

S – Matlab ye ke tumne apne pehle 6 tohfe pehan liye, unhe apna liya… Par tumhara saat va tohfa to yuhi pada hai… Tum use apna na nahin chahti?

V ki aankhen sharam se jhuk jaati hai, uska chehra laal tamatar jaisa ho jaata hai… S goes closer to her and kisses her cheeks and then……………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………..

In the background...'Bahon ke darmiyan do pyaar mil rahe hai' starts playing...

Phew! Finally I did it...and finally they did it too...lol...
It was a long one but I really enjoyed writing this... I hope u guys like it too😃
Will wait for comments😃

Edited by roshme - 17 years ago

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Posted: 17 years ago
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arey WAH didi!!!!!! 👏

no words are there in my mind which can express how im feeling ....how sweet n cute it was...kaash kaash agar yehi sahi ....sach mein hota toh...duniyaan mein humse jyaada khush aur koi nahin hosakethe ....sachiiii...

love it didi....wht can i tell...not one word or two...each and everyline is sooo beautiful...the 7 gifts and the last line...kya tum apne saatve gift ko apnana nahin chahti ???? how rocking it is....i got all the feelings which Vidya showed whn Sagar is talking all that....i really felt it.... 😳 😃

damn good and superb....soo i will also try my best to put it something like this...but i will just give a try ...coz i knw that i cant make it like an awesome one like you....😳


hmm here u go with ur gifts.... 😳 👏 😃 😉 😍 🤗 the saathve...gift.... ❤️

Edited by Nandoo - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Haha...So sweet of you Nandoo 😃 😃 😃
I'm glad u liked it... I had such a rocking time writing it... It had been really long since I made a post here... Par aaj kaam ko thoda side kar ke maine likh diya... Just had to...Couldn't keep those thoughts inside me.... They had to come out....
After seeing ur comments, I'm waiting for more comments.... 😛
Once again...thank u Nandoo 😃
Now I'm going to office...phir milenge... Till then u have a great time....take care 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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You are welcome didi...really you rocked it...

aur haan yese jasbaathonko hum kitna humhare andar rakhne ka koshish karthe hein utna jyaada baahar aajathe hein....i can understand how would u felt while writing it...

ohh office jaarahe hein...fine...carry on....will meet u soon and i also need to write my FF's update and have some work...milthe hein break ke baad... 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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NICE ONE and what did u do
(lol)
ps keep up with good work
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Are you trying to kill us Roshni di 😛 ... that was too good 😃 😃 ...hope that actually happens ... it was fabulous ...you should write more...i love your work 😃 😃 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Roshni,
You made my day bright! It was soooooooooooooo cute... I am sure come 14th all the girls would dream about seven gifts and the last one is always the best, right? 😉
I loved it, please do keep it up. I am eagerly waiting for the next part!

Tons of love for writing it... 🤗 🤗 🤗
Nishi
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Awwww....roshni di1!! Thanks so much!!! I didn't get a chance to read it throughly though...so will do that tonight!!! 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
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...awww Roshni di...it's so romantic....
i just love it....the idea of the 7 gifts are brilliant...
and mmh...hihi the 7th gift is the best na☺️...hihi...
...
loved it 😛 ...
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Posted: 17 years ago
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oh my go droshni di
this is perfect....
u had me blushing wid V der lolzz
and background main i was playing a romantic song and smile goofily to myself n mum walked in on me lolzz...

oh how do u come up wid dese idea it was perfect ... saatva tohfa apnao 😳 😳 😳

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