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Posted: 17 years ago
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Great update, one small request though, would it be possible for you to update the title of the post whenever you have an update..its makes it easier to know there is and update and what page it is on.

Thanks!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: kshre25

Great update, one small request though, would it be possible for you to update the title of the post whenever you have an update..its makes it easier to know there is and update and what page it is on.

Thanks!

i am sorry but i have no clue what your are talking about can you plzzzzz explain it to me? if i knew what it was i would definitly do it!!😊😊

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: rabia16

i am sorry but i have no clue what your are talking about can you plzzzzz explain it to me? if i knew what it was i would definitly do it!!😊😊



So sorry Rabia, what i meant is, every time you update, if you could give us the date or even just page of update, in the title of the post...that would be great! In order to edit the title of the post all you need to do is edit the first comment you made to create this post. Let me know if you need me to explain more.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hi guys thanks for the comments i am reallyyyyyyy sorry that i couldn't continue because of school i was too busy but this weekend i have no hw so i will continue!

Recap:chinu and sagar have a little chit chat and sagar tells him that he likes V. His parents also agree and sgar proposes vidya.

Ok! so it all starts when sagar's parents are shown in vidya's house.they talk for a bit and sagar can't constantrate for what thay are talking about becoz he keeps looking around to see vidya becoz it's too late that she didn't come.soon she comes.she is in black salwar kameez and has black long earings on. she has a tray in her hand with snacks and tea.

sd: are beta aao betho

v: ji.

sm: are wah kaushaliya itni sundar beti peda ki hai tumne.

vm: dhanivaad.

sd: kaushaliya ji. humme iss rishte se koi aitraaz nahi.

vm : yeh tou bohot achi baat hai.

sm: to dher kis baat ki kyun kal hi sagai hojaye.

vm: itni jaldi saari tayaariya kaise hongi.

sm: app fikar mat kariye sab hojaye ga.

(sorry guys you wont like all this but i wanna have a little twist here.)

suddenly, we see sindoora coming.

sin: are app sab yahan kya karahe hain.(she is evil but you know she always does the natak so thats what she is doing.)

sm: sindoora beta tum yahan.

sin: kaise patao maaji par aniket ki shimla mein tabyat bohot kharab horahi hai(with crocodile tears).

sm: kyaaaaa!!

sin: haan plz yeh shaadi baad mein nahi hosakhti hai.

sd: nahi. sindoora tum jao shimla hum sab wahan shaadi ke baad aai ge.

sin: par....

sd: mujhe koi behes nahi chahi hai. sin is getting jealous from inside.

sd: chalo abb chalte hain.

precap: it's sagar and vidya's engagement party and they both are dancing on the song "deewangi deewangi" from oso.

ok guys i am tired now i hope you like it and please comment and sorry for any mistakes.

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Posted: 17 years ago
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fab update...PLZZZ PLZZ UPDATE SOON!! i cant wait
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey guys thanks for the comments i really appreciate them. i am soo bored so i will continue.

OK so it all starts when its sv engagement party.the party is at sagar's house. he is all ready with a black kurta on, and looks so hot.he is waiting for vidya to come downstairs. so she does.she is wearing a pink lehenga w/pink jewelry like, bindiya, bangles, earings, necklace, and pink heels.

sd: ladies and gentalmen may i have your attention please. aaj meri beta ki engagement hai toh main apne beta or hone wali bahu ko stage pe bulana chahunga.

so they come.and sagar holds vidya's hand and puts a diamond ring in her left hand the third finger and vidya puts a ring in sagar's hand. As soon as they are done we see vidya talking to some ladies but then they hear some music vidya turns around and sees someone standing with their back towards them on the stage (u know it's our Sagar.)singing the song.

s: dekho dekho hai shaam bari deewani dhire dhire banjaye na koi kahani.( ofcourse the background music is playing he is just moving his lips.)

s: dilbar hain dil kash hain dildar nazarein hain aaj zameen par utare kitne sitarein hain atlo hosh nami danam hum hain dil hai or janam bas deewangi deewangi deewangi hai na koi rehsar na rehpar yeh ilzaam lage kispar bas deewangi deewangi deewan gi hai. all hot girls(while holding vidya's hand he lets her on the stage😳) put your hands up and say oso (vidya sings) all cool boys common make some noise and say oso they all are enjoying but they don't know that a car stops in front of the house they don't notice we see a lady's feet coming out of the car we see that she is soo like a model.we can see her back and she is walking towards the house.( guess who it is.)...... it's.....SURILI😡.she goes inside the house.everyone stops dancing and shocked but vidya doesn't know why.

sur: are aap sab ruk kyun gaye lets dance. ohhh sagar darling i missed you so much she hugs him but sagar is angry.even vidya is.sagar pushes her back and yells.

s: HOW DARE YOU! TUMHE ANDAR KISNE AANE DIYA!SECURITY, SECURITY.

sur: chilane kuch nahi hone wala ek toh mujhse mangni kari or abb mujhse hi dhoor jarahe ho woh bhi iss photi kori ladki ke saath.

s: SURILI!!!! HOW DARE YOU!!MAINE TUMSE SIRF MANGNI KARI THI LIKIN WOH BHI MAINE TOD DI HAI OR TUM JANTI HO KYUN TODI THI NOW GET OUT!!!!!

V: EK MIN!! (crying) surili yeh naam tumpar bohot suit karta hai. jaisi ladki waisa naam.

sur: HEY YOU...

v: CHILAO MAT!! yeh mat samjho ke main chup raho gi aur tumhari iss bakwaas ko sunti raho gi. mujhe koi behes nahi karni hai SURILI! NOW GET OUT!!

sur: theek hai main jarahi hoon par yaad rakhna ek ek se badla loongi!! or tumse bhi VIDYA!!

v: bohot dhamkiya dedi NOW GET OUT!!

precap: it's sv wedding surili comes again with a wakeel😡.

OK guys i am very tired i hope you like the little twist of surili but don't worry i will get her out of this ff soon.plzz do comment so i can continue soon.take care,bye.😊

- Rabia

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Posted: 17 years ago
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uh oh! why doesnt somoene just shoot surili that would make everyone's life hell lot easier lol...wicked update!! con soon=))
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hi rabiah!!! i just caught up on ur FF ... tis great!!!! plz continue!!!!!! ~niti~

oh n i read on ayeshas ff tat ur bdays comin up??? 😃 wats the date??? cuz i dont remember which ff i read it in 😆 if i already missed it 😳 then happy belated birthday!!!!!! 😉

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