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Posted: 18 years ago
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well done ........ i luv the whole sequence.............
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: ritzy2ritz

awww that was indeed a wonderful update....i loved how he asked her out already!! haiii ! the roses look beautiful! pls upddate sooonn !! i love how u give pics ! it makes me envision it better 😳

thank you very much for ur lovely comment!

will cont soon!

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: sania_12

Loved the update. I love the sari that Vidya is wearing. Continue soon.

thank you very much!😃

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: sj_gupta

well done ........ i luv the whole sequence.............

thanks a lot!

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Preview: Vidya is walking outside and some guys start to bother her, Sagar bashes them. 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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aaahhh! sounds amazing!! cant wait!! 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: ritzy2ritz

aaahhh! sounds amazing!! cant wait!! 😛

thanks!

ill cont later on today if i have time😃

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Posted: 18 years ago
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~*Part 7*~
-Surili walks in acting like shes all that 🤔 and comes upto Sagar and Vidya. Surili looks at everybody whos are dressed in dresses and uits and Vidya, who is dressed in a saree. Surili laughs and says looks like oyuve never been to these types of parties Vidya, cant you see the way people are supposed to dress? Vidya looks at herself and feels embarressed. Sagar tells Surili shes right, Vidya has never been to these types of parties, and didnt know how she was supposed to dress, but Vidya is the most beautiful girl in the room 😳. Surili laughs and says even better then me? Sagar laughs and says way better then you 👏 . Everyone laughs at Surili and starts to clap.
-"Suno na", from Jhankaar beats plays and Sagar takes Vidya to the dance floor. Both slow dance to it making Surili jealous. 😃 A guy comes near Surili and Surili pulls him to the dancefloor and starts dancing with him to get Sagar jealous. Sagar laughs and says wow, Surili will never change. After the dance is done Sagar tells Vidya hell be right back and leaves her alone. Some guys and start talking to her. Then they start asking her questions which make her feel uncomfortable. One guy touches her and she moves his hand 😡. The guys start coming close to her and grad her hands. Vidya lets go and tries to run out of the party, with the guys following her. Sagar's friend says hey look and Sagar looks back seeing Vidya being followed.
-Sagar gets furious and runs after Vidya. Vidya starts to walk faster and one of the guys get her by the arms. Vidya stars saying chodiye mujhe! chodiye! Sagar screams Vidya! and runs to her and pushes those guys off of her. Sagar starts bashing those guys and starts yelling how dare you touch her! and starts bashing all of them like crazy. One gets Sagar from the back but Sagar pushes him off and he falls on something and finds a big knife. He goes towards Sagar hiding it behind his back and Vidya sees this. She tries saying somehting but she runs towards the guy and catches the knife with her bare hands as soon as he was going to stab Sagar . Vidya screams and Sagar looks back seeing Vidyas hands full of blood. 😵 He yells Vidya! and socks the last guy. Vidya falls down unconscious ad Sagar runs upto her and tries to wake her up.
-Sagar starts to panic and he lifts her up and takes her to his car. 😳 As he is driving he calls the doctor and tells him hes bringing a critical patient. Sagar strats to drive faster and finally reaches the hospital. Sagar takes in Vidya in his arms and puts her on a stretcher. The doctors take her inside the room and tell Sagar to wait outside. Sagar calls Ma and tells her what happened. Ma starts to cry on the phone but Sagar consoles her and tells her he wont let anything happen to Vidya. Ma says shes leaving and shell be coming there. Sagar says ok and hangs up. The doctor comes out and says Vidya has lost a lot of blood and they dont know whether shell survive. This brings tears in Sagars eyes. 😭
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Posted: 18 years ago
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HI ITS GUD BUT REALLY SHORT I WANNA READ MORE .... AND PLS I LUV UR PICS THINGY IN NEXT PLS ADD SM THANX
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Posted: 18 years ago
#60
wow!!! i read the whole thing in one go...n in one words tht was mindblowing..... 👏 ...really hun...u write very well 😊

luved all the parts.... 👏 👏 👏

oh! n i luv ur picture thingies 2 😊 ....they trully help w/ the mental pictures 😛 ....lol 😆

OMG....poor vidya 😭 ....i hope she will b alryt....i wonder whether sagar will give her blood.... 😳

once again tht was amazing...continue soon! 👏

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