Soji SS: Love is unbreakable part 21 ( updated on pg 45)

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rajji.soham

@rajji.soham

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Posted: 10 years ago

#261

I loved this part, actually I love your entire SS, its just awesome. This is exactly what I wanted to see between Sojji, in the orginal the writers were always easy on soham, he got Rajji's love and forgiveness so easily all time. You are doing a fantastic job, love you dear and thanks a lot

Edited by rajji.soham - 10 years ago

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prabha

@prabha.abha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#262

Y this is happening to rajj, precap is very scary, hope some one will stop that

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@nedhvik-91

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Posted: 10 years ago

#263

update 15 😊
I read it part 15 ...in full of love n confession 😊 😛 ...superb aisha i liked it very much i would say its wonderful dialogue n scenes ... 👏 👏
M enjoying thoroughly ...n i feel peace finally soham confront his love for rajji not only love but also jealousy ... 😉
My favourite scene has two...first dance floor n second sohji room 😳 😳
Perfect song selection ...Bani feeling 😆 😉 ... etc...

Scene dance floor ...sohji close dance uff it was awesome tum se hi was amazing 😃 😃
Soham after drunk he actually told a truth... 😉 😆 😆

Sohji room...soham confront of his love front rajji...so beautiful... 😳 😳
In restaurant soham order was also good n in the car soham on rajji's lap ...
.nice 😳

I liked it very much dear...keep doing we liked it...n we appreciated ur writting...i can late but never its impossible...
😃 😃 😃

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Rajji (Shanu)

@.Rajji.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#264

ugh i hate bani, she just hangs around being angry and/or sad. Seriously, she needs to get a life !

I'm so sad for sohum, poor guy, i wish he could just have rajji back, it's hard to see him in this condition !

loved amreek dialogue at the end !

What is this precap!! so shocking ! this can't happen !! 🥺

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Rajji (Shanu)

@.Rajji.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#265

Originally posted by: sojifan

Are you enjoying scenes and story If not then tell me i will end this ss in next part...

As a fellow writer, i just want to say that you should write because you enjoy it, not for others. If YOU love this story, whether people like it or not shouldn't even matter, you should continue writing. Just like that if YOU don't like it, you should explain it to the reader and end it. YOU matter, not the rest.

When i write, i say to myself "if 1 person in the world enjoys it, then my goal is accomplished" and if that one person is MYSELF, i'm totally fine with it ! 😳

Much love!😃

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Namita

@nami9j

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Posted: 10 years ago

#266

very nice update.. loved it.. 😃

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@nedhvik-91

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Posted: 10 years ago

#267

Interesting ...update aisha... 😊 😃
Ohhh soham hard tried to talk to Rajji but this bani...ufff 😡
I liked Sohji conversation ...in the room... 😃 it intense ...

Keep rocking wid ur writting... 😃 😃

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swetha10

@swetha10

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Posted: 10 years ago

#268

Wonderful update... hmm interesting precap..

continue soon

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sojifan01

@sojifan01

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Posted: 10 years ago

#269

Amazing update 👏 👏
cont soon...

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Aisha

@Aishaarani

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Posted: 10 years ago

#270

Part 17

Soham comes in his room and go near bed. Simran also comes to Sohams room and shocked to see, Soham is sitting in the room and crying... Simran comes to Soham and also sit next to him...

Simran: Soham kya hua, teri Rajji se koi baat hui??

Soham: kya baat hogi Bhabhi, Rajji meri koi baat sunna hi nahi chahti...

Simran: Soham woh...

Soham inturpets her and says: Mein janta hoon Bhabi, mein ne Rajji ke sath galat kiya hai, isiliye woh mujh se naraaz hai...

Simran: Soham Rajji galat nahi hai, jo Rajji ne saha hai na...hum to uska andaaza bhi nahi lagaa sakte..

Soham: Mein janta hoon, Par mein kya karoon...

Simran puts her hand on Sohams shoulder...

Soham: mein kya karoon bhabi, mein nahi reh sakta Rajji ke bina..Soham hugs Simran...

Kookie and Guggi are seeing this... They come in hall...

Guggi: Kookie, Rajji bhabi yeh theek nahi kar rahi hein...

Kookie: Guggi yeh waqt in baton ka nahi hai... Mujhe samaj mein nahi ata...Ke Rajji bhabi aur Soham veerji ki kismat mein kya likha hai... Kismat unko ek pal mein paas le ati hai aur dosre ki pal juda kar deti hai...

Guggi: Lekin hum unko alag nahi hone denge...

Kookie: Hmm, humein kuch na kuch karna hi pare ga...Both look at eachother and Guggi nods...

In other room Rajji is trying to make Heer sleep..Suddenly her phone rang.. She picks up the phone...She hears somthing and gets shocked...

Next morning evryone is heaving breakfast.. Rajji is lost in her thoughts... Simran asks her what happend, why are you not eating. Rajji says nothing... Angad asks Simran And where is Soham?? Simran says he isnot feeling well. Bani says she will take breakfast for Soham in his room and leave the place... Rajji says she is not feeling hungry and leave the place.. Kokoie notice it that Rajji is tensed...

Bani goes to Sohams room and sees Soham is standing in fornt of window and lost in his thoughts... Bani goes near him and says"Soham"... But soham doesnot react and still lost in his thoughts...She again call Sohams name, suddenly Soham sees at her...

Bani: Soham abhi aap kaise ho??

Soham is confused and asks: kyun mujhe kya hua mujhe...

Bani: woh simran Bhabi keh rahi thi ke aap ki tabiyat khrab hai...

Soham: Haan, woh...

Bani inturpets him and says: Toh aap ko rest karni cahiye aur aap yahan pe khare ho...

Soham: Bani, abhi tu yahan se jaa, mere baat karna ka man nahi hai...

Bani: Aap ka kab baat karne ka man hota hai Soham... jab bhi mein baat... Mein to aap ke liye breakfast layi thi...Lekin aap toh, she is about to leave.. But Soham stop her..

Soham: acha, yahan rakh de, mein kha lounga...

Bani gets happy and put the tray on table...

Soham: abhi tu jaa...

Bani: theek hai, lekin aap kha lena...

Bani leave the place...

On the hand Kookie goes to Rajjis room and asks her why is looking tensed... Rajji says nothing...Plz leave me alone for sometime...

Suddenly someone rung door bell, kookie goes and open the door.. Kookie and Rajji is shocked to see Amreek with a girl... They both enter in the house... Suddenly Soham comes also there..

Kookie: yhe kaun hai??

Amreek: yeh Tina hai, meri dost, aaj hi Canada se ayi hai...

Tina inturpets him and says: no, mein is ki dost nahi hoon, mein toh iski girlfriend hoon aur uski hoone wali...

Amreek inturpets her and says: iski baton ko seriously mat lena, iski toh mazak ki adat hai...

Kookie and Rajji smilies...

Kookie: abhi hamara bhi intodution karvao..

Amreek: Haan, Tina yeh Kookie hai, he point his finger to Rajji and says she is...

Tina again inturpets him and says: yeh Rajji hai...Am I right???

Rajji gets confused and says: tumhein kaise pata, i mean hum pehli bar mil...

Tina: Arey Amreek se tumhare baare mein itna suna hai, ke agar mein tumhein nahi pechanti, to mein bohot bari bewakoof hoti... but I m dumb, i m smart...

Kookie: bethiya na yahan pe...

Tina: Haan, par...

Amreek: Nahi, Hum raat ko ayenge, wo actully Tina ko Rajji se milna tha isiliye hum airport se seedha yahan a gaye...

Rajji: theek hai, aap jao... Mein aap ke sath bahar ati hoon...

Kookie and Soham gets confused by Rajjis behaviour...

Rajji, Amreek and Tina come out of house...Tina sit in the car..

Amreek: sorry Rajji, woh Mom ne mujhe raat ko hi bataya, Aur Tina yahan ke liye nikal chuki thi...

Rajji: Koi baat nahi, Par abhi plz sambhal lena...

Amreek: Haan, theek hai...

Amreek sits in the car and leave with Tina...Rajji go back to the house...

After sometime Simran goes to Sohams room... Soham is standing front of window, holding mangalsutra and looking at mangalsutra with teary eyed...She sees the tray with food on table...Simran goes to Soham...

Simran: Soham yeh sab kya hai??

Soham: kya hua Bhabi??

Simran: tu ne khana kyun nahi khaya..

Soham: Mere mann nahi hai, Bhabhi...

Simran: sab kuch bohot jaldi theek ho jayega... tu itni jaldi kaise haar maan sakta hai... Tu kya Rajji ko itni asani jaane de... tu Rajji se itna hi pyar karta hai...

Soham: Mein Rajji se kitna pyar karta hoon, yeh sirf mein janta hoon, lekin mein...

Simran: Lekin kya Soham, Yahi waqt hai, Rajji ko apne pyar ka ehsaas karva... Usse khud se door mat jane de... tu samajh raha hai na mein kya keh rahi hoon..

Soham nods and Simran leaves the room...

In Amreek house Amreek is siiting in the hall, Tina comes to him...

Amreek: Tina, mujhe tujh se important baat karni hai...

Tina: i know..what do u want to say.. but u tell..

Amreek: Look, we are childhoods friend but mein shaadi...mera matlab...

Tina: i know, u do not want to marry me...

Amreek: Tujhe kaise... matlab...

Tina: u know Amreek, hum shaadi usse karte hein jis se hum pyar karte hein... Aur mein janti hoon that u do not love me...

Amreek: Par woh mom toh keh rahi thi ke...

Tina: haan wo chahte hein ke, hum dono ki shaadi ho jaye... But i know that u love R...

Amreek: Nahi, mein aur Rajji sirf dost...Suddenly he realize what he just said...

Tina: Mein ne toh Rajji ka naam nahi liye...

Amreek: Woh...I mean... mujhe pata tha ke Tu Rajji ki baat hi karegi ... ...Acha chal chor yeh sab baten, abhi tiyar ho jaa, humein Rajji ke ghar jana hai...

In the evening they are all heaving dinner, Suddenly Soham comes and says: mujhe aap se zaroori baat karni hai, jaise ke aap jante ho ke meri aur Bani ki shaadi mein 15 din hi baki hein...Toh mein chahta hoon ke aap log tiyaariyan shooro kar do... Mein bani se jald se jald shaadi karna chahta hoon... Evryone is shocked but Bani gets happy... Suddenly Amreek and Tina enter in the room..

Sorry for late update. Actually i was really busy...

PLZ Do likes and comments... Tell your fav scene or Dialog...

Edited by sojifan - 10 years ago