Some Observations

I am here once again with some observations. Firstly let me say I am liking the flow of the story, the casting is good, music is much much better nevertheless I have some observations.

There was a post yesterday saying DM should take some lessons like Hiten. Well since DM has grown from scratches and is a self made man, I think DM has faced a lot of hardship at the same time I feel inspite of showing him as a just man, there are many things he has not taken care. Like the condition of his village, the poor pay of his employees, specially his master cutter etc and now when Santo came to his house, he did not give a 2nd thought as to where Santo will be staying as he was unwilling to share his bedroom with her.....the condition of the storeroom is pathetic and since it is not Santo's fault having been married to him it was his duty to atleast see her living quarter is of some standard.

There is another issue which I would have liked to see before the story moves further. Santo's feelings towards DM as a husband. The other day Santo said as a punishment if DM accepts her as his wife.....I thought it was a very heavy dialogue for a 18 year old to mouth. I was discussing this issue with a friend of mine, she said she is an ordinary village girl, her upbringing is different.....I have never stayed in village but I am not sure in the time of cell phones, the girls are still so naive. In short I would have loved to see Santo's apprehensive of her elderly husband and mixed feelings towards her step children, 3 of them around her age or elder....she accepting them with open arms is just on going down with me.....I am not saying she has to be cruel to them but she can be a bit upset over this fact.

Sometime back I had wished Pinakin addresses DM as Motabhai, it seems the creatives have taken the fact into consideration, I appreciate the same but would ask the request since they are putting in so much effort they should also take into considerations these things...after all Santo's marriage to DM was not a love marriage but a marriage of convenience, some 2nd thoughts in Santo's part at least should be there....your thoughts friends, love Tin