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lishu_

@lishu_

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#261

I'm speechless..!
Take a bow Debbie !! 👏
You justified the theme completely..!
You nailed it !
I'm in love with Dr. Anandi!
Thanks for this much needed superfast update..!

Edited by Jaishreeka - 12 years ago

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nightseye

@nightseye

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#262

hai..debbs...

very clean.. verry casual.. but still very expressive.. very.. "realistic"

Enjoy reading your updates... it really gives an insight of the feelings of all the girls who have actually gone though this.. experienced...no words can ever be enough to describe how badly i look forward to your updates...

⭐️

your writing is a real eye-opener.. to many.. a tear-striking experience for some.. and INSPIRATION TO ALL...

SHU-KA-RI-YA..

Jagiya.. kabhi sudheraga nahi.. naahi.. uske jaise... ladeke... they don't realise wat they do..will be returned back to them..

Ranbir'sBachana Ae Haseeno is also not an eye-opener to them 😉

plzzz...update fast...

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nightseye

@nightseye

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#263

hai..debbs...

Emotionally... draining... and heart-breaking update...

the reality... "The Doc who takes the oath to save the life of his patients... no matter what... end up selling themselves... thier sinciearity.. their self-esteem and their soul just for their personal gains.. may it be in the form of KIND or Bank BALANCE..."

LOVE HAS NO SAY

HEART HAS NO FEELINGS

EYES HAS NO SIGHT

ALL THAT REMAINS IS POWER AND MIGHT...

but they forget.. thy dont gain.. thy just loose...

WANTED TO SHARE THIS WITH YOU... FELT VERY TOUCHING.. ...

Lord, today I sent my baby to you. Please give her wings and let her fly. She's new at this so take it slow
Teach her how they flutter by I'll miss her so though we'd never met. And I'll never know her smile. But you need her and now she's yours
She was only mine a while. She'll never know pain. And she'll never know fear
For I know that you will keep her near. And now . . .
I close my yes to say good bye. And watch her fly away to you
Please keep her Lord, and love her 'till. I get my wings and join you too.

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BeingMahiway

@maahi11

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#264

I m lft wid no wrds... dis is absolutely superb...

plz update nxt portion as sun as possible...

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libsrocks

@libsrocks

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#265

Really really awesome...i do not like people who in name of love support wrong things like women in name of love tolerate abuse and like this girls tolerate their boyfriends doing illegal things in name of love...really really love it...you know how to show social message with a good story...any plan of joining BV? 😉

but i am scared...jagdish still loves her so hope she does not get inclined to him again

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Manshi

@Mithi_vani

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#266

First sorry for the late comments... I just read last 4 parts in one go... All r superb... The way A's mom take step for herself.. Its 👏 .. Its very good msg... A woman hv to stand for herself.. The way A do all hardwork nd achevied this sucess in her life its all bcz her mom... Every girl whoud hv such mother... 😊 .. Nd then this Jagdish story... Oohhh... I hate this man.. Hw 🤬 .. He cheater... Hw can he do that.. But its bitter reality of current time... Nd its true.. That J type well known dr r also involed in such crime... For the sake of money he go down to such lo level... 😡 ... This all made me 😭 .. I feel for A.. 😭 ... But i m happy that S is with A... He is with her... To consoal her... Nd A share all her pain with him.. He is the prsn who can u/s her pain nd give her reason to smile.. 😊 .. U r just awesome... Wonderful writer Debbi... 😭 .. Ur story touch my heart... Great work dear... 😊 ..

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vasanthi.m

@vasanthimrao

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#267

debbi do u even knw wat r u doing for me?? I'mgetting crazy for ur updates, getting impatient day by day... nw please stop torturing and update d next part soon please... wanna knw shivjee's reaction 😛

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riya_ss9

@riya_ss9

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#268

Debbie, stop teasing yaar...waiting for the next one 🤗

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debbie

@Debbiee

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#269

Originally posted by: nightseye
hai..debbs...

Emotionally... draining... and heart-breaking update...

the reality... "The Doc who takes the oath to save the life of his patients... no matter what... end up selling themselves... thier sinciearity.. their self-esteem and their soul just for their personal gains.. may it be in the form of KIND or Bank BALANCE..."

LOVE HAS NO SAY
HEART HAS NO FEELINGS
EYES HAS NO SIGHT
ALL THAT REMAINS IS POWER AND MIGHT...

but they forget.. thy dont gain.. thy just loose...

WANTED TO SHARE THIS WITH YOU... FELT VERY TOUCHING.. ...

Lord, today I sent my baby to you. Please give her wings and let her fly. She's new at this so take it slow
Teach her how they flutter by I'll miss her so though we'd never met. And I'll never know her smile. But you need her and now she's yours
She was only mine a while. She'll never know pain. And she'll never know fear
For I know that you will keep her near. And now . . .
I close my yes to say good bye. And watch her fly away to you
Please keep her Lord, and love her 'till. I get my wings and join you too.

My eyes filled with tears with the soulful poem that you sent. I would copy paste the same to the first page if you please.

Of course its true, ask a mother who has lost her child, the pain is said to be the unfathomable and the pain lasts through the life. I somehow fail to understand how some people could do this for the sake of money. But most of all why women give in themselves to the circumstances. Why can't they raise their voice against this cruelty?