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Manshi

@Mithi_vani

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#151

wonderful... Sweet nd simple part Debbi... 😊 .. I like smoothness of the story.. Nd Highlight of the part was Shiv's note... Ohhh... Its just beautiful... very good going... Dear... 👏 ... Thanks for the pm... Nd asusal waiting for next part... 😊 ...

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nightseye

@nightseye

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#152

hai..debbsss..

Birthdaywala.. cutesa... lovely update...

very.. nice.. enjoyed it very much..

but... 😭... jaldi katham ho gaya.. malloom hi nahi chala kub maine padna shuru kiya aur kab.. pura pad bi liya..

waiting for your update.. "A LENGTHY ONE"

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riya_ss9

@riya_ss9

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#153

Debbie, dear you always amaze me...but too short yaar...loved it.

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Myraa Khan

@QuagMyred

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#154

Hayee! Its beautiful!

Waiting for what happens next!😳

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pabitra.

@pabitra.

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#155

2dy read all the parts in one go.. u r doing a grt job.. keep it up!!

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onlinebuddy75

@onlinebuddy75

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#156

Sweet update like Shiv and Anandi .

Awaiting next update.

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HemaG

@HemaG

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#157

nice part..👏i hope its little longer next time...😉continue soon...😊

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lishu_

@lishu_

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#158

Lovely update!
So The sender of the flowers doesn't want to admit..he sent them!
Made from same brick and mortar and...
Made for each other,huh?!
Wot a lovely bday party!
Anandi going to meet sanchi's family!
wonder whether next(next to next?) update focusses on the theme again or the progress in anandi's personal life w.r.t. Shiv or Both??!

Edited by Jaishreeka - 12 years ago

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debbie

@Debbiee

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#159

Originally posted by: Jaishreeka
Lovely update!
So The sender of the flowers doesn't want to admit..he sent them!
Made from same brick and mortar and...
Made for each other,huh?!
Wot a lovely bday party!
Anandi going to meet sanchi's family!
wonder whether next(next to next?) update focusses on the theme again or the progress in anandi's personal life w.r.t. Shiv or Both??!

Jaishreeka, thx for your analysis. you do it quite well.

As I said before all the characters and their stories would revolve around the central theme. The events are organized that way only. Just wait and watch 😊

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debbie

@Debbiee

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#160

Originally posted by: HemaG
nice part..👏i hope its little longer next time...😉continue soon...😊

Hema, my previous FF was event based. It had a time traversal of Anandi from childhood till middle age. This one is based on issues and hence what you see is human emotions 😊

However I would try to put more in next chapter.

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