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palpal15

@palpal15

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: rdjha
awesome start Pal!!! do continue...and i like ur idea of past and present...quite gripping///

Thx Rashmi. Glad u liked the start. Hope I can do justice to the concept.

Originally posted by: onlinebuddy75
Congrats on new FF.

Waiting for next update, want to know the reason behind this statement

"And was off in a jiffy, as if being in the same room with him was now a punishment for her"

Hey buddy thx... 😳 . Im afraid that part will come in the latter parts of the story. But every update should take us closer to it.

Edited by pAL-pAL - 12 years ago

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@5cents

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#22

Pal, very interesting start 👍🏼

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libsrocks

@libsrocks

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#23

thanks for keeping my request in view...your intro shaped up really well 😊

update soon plz

Edited by libsrocks - 12 years ago

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Payali09

@Payali09

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#24

YYYEEESSS NEW FF! 🥳

I was getting all sad and disheartened about Shadows coming to an end but then you went and started a new one and made my day so much better 😃

The present time, flashback and flashforwards might be too much for some writers but I know you will do full justice 👍🏼. Keenly anticipating finding out the reason for what looks like a once happy relationship taking a nosedive.

Can't wait for the update! Happy writing.

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Dhrashtee

@dhrashtee

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#25

Nice start. Waiting to see why Anandi is so mad at Shiv!?!?!

Thanks for the PM.. :)

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palpal15

@palpal15

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#26

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debbie

@Debbiee

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#27

Nice to see a refreshingly new story here. I can see your innovative mind must have got lot hidden under the plate. Waiting for the next update 😊

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Payali09

@Payali09

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#28

Thanks for the update!

Really enjoyed getting a peek into the background of Anandi...she's the same but different. The spark which was briefly squashed by child marriage in the serial is going strong in your story. I really appreciate a glimpse into her psyche early in the story. Lays good ground work for future updates.

Still trying to work out what is going on in the present but am sure it will slowly be revealed.

Can't wait for the next one 😃

Edited by Payali09 - 12 years ago