AnSh-Sanchi-Jagya OS !

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hope the forum can tolerate another Sanchi OS ! Let me not go into the details of why I had to write this one. Hopefully this OS make some sense. I couldn't think of anything else to write about Sanchi..

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Sanchi is on the phone with her friend telling her 'Yeh Anandi bhabhi ko gift select karna bhi nahi aata. Itna ghatiya sa gift leke aayi hain Kashmir se. Woh toh gawar and dehati bilkul hai..' She frowns looking at it and continues 'Lekin mere ghar walon pe, pata nahi kya jadoo kar diya hai Anandi bhabhi ne. Kisiko bhi unki chalakiyan nazar hi nati' She continues telling how she tried to burn the cake wanting to make her look down in front of the family but remembers how the plan fell flat on her face and says 'whatever.. mein dikha dungi unki asli chehra kya hai sab ke samne'

Shiv who was searching for his sister wanting to give something that he and Anandi had forgotten to give earlier,is shocked and outraged hearing that his sister played dirty games with his wife. Sanchi sees him and cuts the phone telling she would call back. She gets afraid worrying if her brother had heard her talks or not. As she starts to speak, Shiv cuts her off and asks 'Tumhari himmat kaise huyi aise harkat karne ki, Anandi ke saath..' His loud voice shakes Sanchi and brings Ira and the rest of the family running to the verandah where they were standing.

Shiv fills in the family with Sanchi's antics. Everyone is furious to hear what Sanchi had done to make Anandi look down. Ira says 'Shukar hai Anandi bahar gayi hai. Agar yeh sab sunleti toh kitna bura lagta usse. Meine usi din tumhe warning diya tha Sanchi ki tum aisa kuch nahi karungi Anandi ke saath.. jisse usse ya hume dukh ho. To kyun kiya tumne aisa ?' Sanchi stays mum.

Not hearing any response from her, Shiv who is still angry asks 'Aakir tumhari problem kya hai Anandi se ? Toh, acche banne ka dikhawa karti ho uske samne aur peet peeche aise harkat.. It is so shameful and disgusting to even think that mere behen,a Shekhar, aisa kar sakthi hai.'

Sanchi irritatedly replies back saying 'Ha.. bhaiyya. Mujhe Anandi bhabhi pasand nahi hai. Woh humari layak nahi hai. She is a gawar, dehati and chalaak. I don't trust her. I am sure unki pehli shaadi inki wajah se hi tooti hogi.' The family is shocked hearing Sanchi's words towards Anandi.


Shiv's temper reaches its peak but still tries to be calm and he asks her 'Kya jaanti ho Anandi aur Jagdessh ke baare mein ? Jagdeesh chodke gaya tha Anandi ko, Anandi ne nahi. Jab woh Mumbai chala gaya aur doosri shaadi bhi karli, Anandi ne apne aapko hi nahi balki apne sasuralwalon ko bhi sambhala, padayi ki aur khud apni pairo pe khadi huvi. And you call that Gawar and Chalak ? How Sanchi ? '

He continues saying 'And rahi baat trust ki toh, let me tell you something.. Tum usse trust karti ho ya nahi.. why and how does it matter ? I, as a husband trust her completely and I know she can do no wrong. Toh tumhe kya ? Tum meri choti behen ho aur choti behen ki tarah raho. Apni seema paar mat karo aur apni hadd mein raho. Samjhi ? '
Everybody nods in agreeement and is ready to leave the room that Sanchi asks again not wanting to give up her favorite topic 'So, bhaiyya.. Why did Jagdeesh leave Anandi ? Woh baat ka jawab nahi diya aapne ? Dr.Jagdeesh is so sweet and innocent. Unke jaise acche insaan apne parivaar, ghar chodke kyun jaate ? Anandi bhabhi ki hi galti hogi... Hmmm...I know why because she was gawar and dehati and Woh ek acchi patni nahi ban paayi isiliye'

Shiv gets very wild hearing this but before he could respond, theyhear a voice from outside 'Nahi Sanchi...' Everybody is surprised to see Jagya at the door. Jagya was visiting KB on Sanchi's insistence that he visit them on his way to Jaipur.

Jagya enters the house saying 'Anandi ki koi galti nahi thi humare risthe mein. Woh ek acchi patni thi. Mein hi ek accha pati nahi ban paya. Usne mujhe har kadam pe saath diya. Aaj agar mein Doctor bana hu, toh usme bhi Anandi ka haath aur saath hi hai. '

Hec ontinues 'Mein bhi tumhari tarah hi sochtha tha.. ki gao mein rehne se log gawar rehte hai, aur logon ko sirf upari tarah se dekhne laga tha. Sher ki dhamak chamak ne meri buddhi cheen li mujhse. '
'Mein sochtha tha ki Anandi meri khabil nahi hai. But, actually the fact is mein hi uski kaabil nahi tha. Woh mujhse sab chezon mein upar thi.' Sighing he continues 'Jab woh meri paas thi, tab meine uski kadar nahi ki..' Looking at Shiv he says ' Aur jab samjha, toh bohat der ho chuki thi and tab jaake maloom huva ki meine kya khodiya hai'..

After a brief pause, he looks back smiling at Sanchi 'Aur aaj jaake sach mein usse uski samaantha jo karsake aise jeevan saathi mila hai, tumhare bhai ke roop mein. Aisa dubara Anandi par shaq mat karna. Bohat kuch saha hai usne mere karan.' Anandi who had returned back home had overheard the whole conversation and was in tears listening to Jagya.

Everybody is happy listening to Jagya's words and the Shekhars welcome him inside the house leaving Sanchi to think about her actions.

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With this I hope my punishment is complete..

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nivi that was wonderful. 👍🏼

I WISH each and every word from this story comes true. 👏 👏

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nivi..this is so awesome...hope CVs show all these that you have mentioned...This is exactly what everyone will be interested to see...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nivi, fantastic 👍🏼

Touching and real as it can get . If she keeps perusing J like she is doing ...then there will be a calm outburst from J😛 sooner or later .
I can see nosy Sanchi snooping abt JaAn history & J will give her back...just the way you have written.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome nivi 👏 . Hope cv show this . I always want shiv's showdown with sanchi 😆 . That girl needs scolding 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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You liked it ?? 😲 I thought you won't like because I made your fav character all goody goody 😆 and you like him only miserable 😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
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@ Pal, Soumya, Tina, Jaya: Thanks all 🤗.. Serioulsy I couldn't think of anything other than blastings for Sanchi esp from Shiv.
Edited by dixie123 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: dixie123

You liked it ?? 😲 I thought you won't like because I made your fav character all goody goody 😆 and you like him only miserable 😛


He came of plenty miserable to me. Someone took his toy from the closet while he was playing with other ones and made it their own😈
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nivi ,👍🏼
You are do kadam aage from CVs ,

This is going to happen in future .

NS will get her dose from none other than J .😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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This is SO WELL written! I really hope the CVs read this and get some much necessary inspiration with regards to Ms. Sanchi I-Want-A-Real-Man Shekhar.
I've had something like this in my mind for a while now...I was hoping it'd be put into words in the form of a oneshot or even a short story... thank you so much for doing so! Loved it! :D

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