AnSh FF: NO GREATER LOVE: Chapter 15 p42 12/06 - Page 7

Originally posted by: Manshi

Hmmm... Very nice part, the story is going in interesting way.. Well I like ur scenes changing style... Its like i m not reading but actuly watching... Its fantasic...,the ansh scens nd thought of scene was superb, nd ya.. I remind u I like Mahi ki Lovestory...

Originally posted by: VerboseG

Wonderful writing Sheena!

You have the art of capturing a reader's attention down pat...

Bravo!

Originally posted by: vasanthimrao

Rea both the parts together.. Its superb, I too am not getting why jagya turned out to be that evil😕 anyways, loving this story...

Originally posted by: adi2512

Sheena..

Read both parts together...

Awesome updates...

Loved the way you described Shiv's emotions reg Anandi in the last update...😳

Hmmm...The suspense is building up...😎

Do update soon...

P.S :

What's the matter? Why is everyone so tense? Shiv asked sitting down as he reached for his tea with one hand and the paper with the other. As he had a sip of his tea, he unfolded the newspaper and saw the picture on the front page, spurted his tea out and started to cough.

I can SOOO Visualise Shiv here...😳😳

Originally posted by: Pri_kinmuk

Nice update sheena...

its definitely a page turner...cannot wait to read the next update...