OS- !! Shiv's Challenge !!

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Ok my dear friends…the challenge scenario has excited me so much that I ended up doing the impossible… Please bear with me for mistakes as this is my first attempt.

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Its been 3days they haven't met or seen each other….though they used to talk number of times over phone. But still a feeling of restlessness because of not seeing each other remained. Shiv used to rant about it every time over phone. And Anandi as always made him understand the necessity of following it.

On that day, Anandi was returning from her panchayat meeting when she saw Mahi on his bike. He offered Anandi to drop her in the haveli. Anandi agreed after a bit of persuasion.

On the way all of a sudden, the bike stopped.

Anandi – Kya hua Mahi

Mahi – Pata nahi bhabhi, shayad petrol khatam ho gayi.

Anandi got down the bike.

Mahi – ek minute, main zara check karta hun ki actual me problem kya hai

Anandi realized that they were near the pond area. All of a sudden she heard a voice –"Anandijee" which gave her an adrenaline rush …..and she immediately knew there is only one voice that has such an effect on her. ☺️

She came back to her senses and without turning around started her rant.

Anandi – Collector saab, aap yaha kya kar rahe hai. Aapko pata hai na ham ek doosre ko shaadi se pehle nahi dekh sakte.

Shiv – Ha, pata hai. Par hum kaha dekh rahe hai ek doosre ko.

Anandi didn't understand and turned around to see what Shiv was saying.

And she saw Shiv standing with an umbrella blocking his face….🤣

Anandi couldn't stop giggling. "Chowdhary Song"

Mahi was seeing all this and silently started his bike and went.

Anandi was shocked.

Anandi – Arey, ye Mahi bhi na. Mujhe yaha chod kar chala gaya. Ab main ghar kaise jaaongi.

Shiv – Don't worry, wo thode der me aa jayega. Mere phone karte hi wo aa jayega.

All this time, Shiv was blocking his face with umbrella. 🤣

Anandi – Nahi Collector saab, ye teek nahi hai. Mujhe abhi jaana hai.

Shiv – Chaliye na, hum kahi baith kar batein karte hai...bas thodi der...Pleeez.

Anandi – Theek hai, magar sirf 5 minutes.

Shiv – Ok…and started walking near the pond side. Anandi followed him.

Shiv sat in the border of the pond still covering his face sideways with umbrella. 🤣

Anandi came and sat near him.

Shiv – bataiye, aaj aapka din kaise kata.

Anandi started telling him a to z what all she did the whole day. Shiv didn't utter a single word all this while.

After some time Anandi raised her voice – Collector saab, mai aapse kab se kuch pooch rahi hu, aur aap kuch jawab hi nahi de rahe ho.

Shiv came back to his senses – Oh, I am sorry Anandijee…Wo kya hai na maine suna hi nahi aap kya kah rahi thi.

Anandi – Suna nahi ka kya matlab hua Collector saab.

Shiv – Wo itne dino ke baad aaj aise lag raha hai ki mujhe mera Chaand nazar aa gaya….Isliye uski khoobsurati me kho gaya tha. ☺️

Anandi staring in the sky – Chand, Kaha hai chand.

Shiv started laughing. He said – Aap hi to ho mera Chaand.

Anandi blushed ☺️…..and then suddenly realized.

Anandi – Acha to aapne mujhe dekha…aapne cheating ki hain collector saab. Aapne rasm ko thod diya.

Collector Saab – Nahi Anandijee, mera yakeen maaniye. Maine koi rasm nahi thoda. Maine aapko dekha nahi par fir bhi aap mujhe dikh gayee…matlab dikh rahi hai.

Anandi saw that Shiv is still blocking his face with umbrella. 😆

She got angry – Aise kaise ho sakta hai…aap mujhe kaise dekh sakte ho. Aur aap kah rahe ho ki aap mujhe ab bhi dekh rahe ho.

Shiv – yes, main aapko ab bhi dekh sakta hun and sach me aap gussa hoti hai to aur bhi pyaari lagti hain. ☺️

Anandi was very angry now.

Anandi – Collector Saab, aap mujhe aur gussa mat dilaiye…Aap tab se rat lagaye hue ho ki main aapko dikh rahi hun, this is not fair…especially jab mujhe aap nahi dikh rahe!!!!! Ye theek nahi hai.

Anandi pouts.

Collector Saab – Acha…to aapko is baat ki naraazgi hai ki aap mujhe nahi dekh paa rahi hai. 😉

Anandi suddenly realized what she said and blushed profusely. ☺️

Collector Saab – Aapka sharmana sar aankhon par … Anandijee zara neeche dekhogi.

Anandi looked down in the water and saw her reflection in the water…and just beside hers…saw Shiv's reflection…He was smiling.

Anandi surprised and overwhlemed...smiled and blushed. ☺️

Both Shiv and Anandi were seeing each other's reflection in the water with a smile….a smile which projected their happiness, contentment and joy. ❤️ *Chowdhary song in the BG*

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ok guys...tamatar and Andes are welcome...🥳

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Posted: 12 years ago
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WOW Arya you've said that this is your 1st attempt but trust me it's really really great👏 It's sooo cute and romantic😳...Loved it very much⭐️ really now I am looking forward for more of your fantastic writing...Thank you for this lovely OS😃 P:S I think I couldn't understand why did you urge for ANDA TAMATAR?😕 Omlete bana kar khana hai kya?😆 bcoz I dont think anybody will throw ananda tamamtar at you bcoz your OS is fantastic😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wonderful OS, Arya!

Wish to see many more from you😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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AWWW this is so beautiful. I wish it happens this way in the show too!THis is so cute. You know what, Being a cancerian I hv a fondness for both moonlight and water(they are sign/planet of cancer sunsign)And thus imagining AnSh in a setting like this is a bliss! 😳 Thanks so much Arya for this wonderful OS. This indeed was a diwali gift.
Edited by Malika - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: tistaa

WOW Arya you've said that this is your 1st attempt but trust me it's really really great👏 It's sooo cute and romantic😳...Loved it very much⭐️ really now I am looking forward for more of your fantastic writing...Thank you for this lovely OS😃 P:S I think I couldn't understand why did you urge for ANDA TAMATAR?😕 Omlete bana kar khana hai kya?😆 bcoz I dont think anybody will throw ananda tamamtar to you bcoz your OS is fantastic😆

Thank you so much Tistaa for your kind words...🤗
I am so glad you liked it...yes, its my first attempt in writing. I still can't believe that I ended up writing an OS...😆 I don't know what all next I will end up doing because of my love for Ansh. 😲😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: VerboseG

Wonderful OS, Arya!


Wish to see many more from you😊

Gina - 🤗
Thanks a ton 😃
Your appreciation means a lot to me especially because you are one of those gifted writers we have here...lubb you!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: AryaS

Thank you so much Tistaa for your kind words...🤗

I am so glad you liked it...yes, its my first attempt in writing. I still can't believe that I ended up writing an OS...😆 I don't know what all next I will end up doing because of my love for Ansh. 😲😳

Hmmm let me suggest...What abt a hot sensational FF on AnSh for us????Embarrassed😆.I think that would be great way to show your love for AnSh😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Malika

AWWW this is so beautiful. I wish it happens this way in the show too!THis is so cute. You know what, Being a cancerian I hv a fondness for both moonlight and water(they are sign/planet of cancer sunsign)And thus imagining AnSh in a setting like this is a bliss! 😳 Thanks so much Arya for this wonderful OS. This indeed was a diwali gift.

Wow...you liked it Mallika!!! Thank you for your sweet words...😃
This thought came to me when I watched the episode. And I ended up writing it today...😳
Yes...I look forward to something magical in the show too...and I know BV CVs are capable of doing it.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thanks Sharanya and Momrin... I am so glad you liked it. 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: tistaa

Hmmm let me suggest...What abt a hot sensational FF on AnSh for us????😳😆.I think that would be great way to show your love for AnSh😆

I am not that good a writer dear to write what you are suggesting. I would rather show my love for Ansh by reading such sensational FFs from our genius writers. 😆

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