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Posted: 12 years ago

Part 31

Ek baat pe maafi milegi….he stares at her while saying.

Anandi blushed. Dhaat….she mutters. Lekin pehale kahin chai peyange aur kuch khaane ke liye bhi lete hain. Mujhe bahut bhook lagi hain.

Arre wha tumhe bhook bhi lagati hain. Aaj toh kamaal hoo gaya. Shukar hain kaam se tumne khaane ka naam toh liye. Warna main hee humesha khaata rahta hunn. Thik hain jaisa tum kaho.

They stopped for tea & packed kachori's with them. Shiv was driving while Anandi feeds him kachori. They are having good times. They came outside the city. It's Small Hill. They came out of car & see entire Jodhpur city speard out. Anandi was happy. Shiv's cell rings he excused himself since it's from office.

Anandi sat on one rock nearby. She was looking at Shiv with love. Shiv humesha mere baarien mein soochate hain. Aapne aap se pehle meri khushi ke liye kuch bhi karne ke liye taiyaar rehte hain. Innka poora pariwaar mera kitana khyaal rakhta hain. Itana ki Mahi aur Sanchi toh mere kitane acche dost ban chuke hain. Itani khushi meri zindagi mein aaye ki ab main darne lage hunn. Kahin yeh sari kushi mujhese cheena lee meri kismat. She had tears in her eyes.

Shiv finished his call & turns. He was shocked to see Anandi wipes her tears. He came near her & toched her shoulder. Kya hua Anandi ? Anything worng?

Nahi kuch bhi toh nahi. Kuch chala gaya tha aankhon mein she replied.

Shiv sits besides her. Main janata hunn. Yeh sab joh hoo raha hain use tumhe kahin na kahin takleef poochte hain. Main yeh janata hunn ki beeta hua kal yunn achanak se bhoola dena aasaan nahi hota hain.

Anandi looked at him with surprise. He holds her hand.

Anandi shaadi ki taiyaariyan tumhe kahin na kahin disturb kar deti hain. Inn bte dinno mein tumne bahut kuch saaha hain. Tumhari maa achanak iss duniya se chale jana aur phir divorce. Main samjhata hunn.

Nahi Shiv main aapne beete hue kalke baarein nahi sooch rahe thi. Maa ka jana mainne kismat ka khel samjhke manzoor kiya hain.

Rahe baat Jagya ki toh mujhese dur hue bahut din hoo gaye. Jab woh pehli baar Mumbai gaya tab hee mera usska rishta totne laga. Pata hain pyar kya hain yeh mainne kabhi jana hee nahi. Kyunki jab yeh ihsaas hota tab tak main aur jagya ki shaadi hoo chuke thi. Aur jagya hee mera pyar hain yeh main samjhne legi. Aur shaadi ke iss rishte ko nibhana mere liye pyar ban gaya.

Jagya ne kabhi mere baarein nahi soocha. Uske liye uska carrier, uski pasand, yeh woh bass joh kuch bhi bass uska. Main uski icchaon mein aapne aap ko khush karti. Meri aapni pasand na pasand ka na mujhe ishass tha aur na hee jagya ko. Ab main jaan gaye ki humari toh koi baat milati nahi thi.

Payr kya hota hain yeh maine sahi mayano mein aap ko dekh kar seekha. Shiv was stunned to hear this. Anandi put her head on his shoulder.

Aap shiv…jab Dadi sa ne aapse meri aur aapki shaadi ki baat rakhe. Tab sirf aap mujhse pyar karte the. Lekin aapne aapna pyar ko mujhe par thopa nahi. Mere upper kisi bhi kisam ki jabardasti nahi ki. Jab Maa ke gujar jane ke baad uski aakhri iccha puri karne ke liye maine aapse shaadi karne ke liye haan kaha. Tab bhi aapne meri khsuhi meri raazamandi ke baarien soocha. Kisi dabav mein aapne mujhe haan karne se mana kar diya.

Uske baab aap ne aapne pyar se mujhe yeh ishass karvaya ki aap ne mujhe par koi ishsaan nahi kiya hain. Balki aap mujhe se pyar karte hain. Bina kisi shart ke bina kisi sawrth ke. Aur main samjh gaye ki js pyar se main aaj tak anjaan thi woh mere samane hain. Aapke roop mein.Aap ne mujhe itani khushi dee hain ki main ab iss khushi se hee dar ne lagi hunn.

Shiv put his arms around her. Main humesha sirf tumhari khushi chahata hunn. Tumhe mere rehte hue dark ne koi jaarut nahi hain. Humara pyar isse hee rahega balke waqt ke sath aur badhega.

Haan Shiv. Hum dono ki pasand napasand bhi ek dusare se mel kahti hain. Woh kya kehte hain usse...Made for each other.

Humm...lagata hain Sanchi ka asar dheere dheere tum par bhi hone laga hain.

Haan. Sanchi ka hee asar hain. Pata nahi kitani laambi planning karti hain. Uss din keh rahe thi bhabhi aap ke baachon ke naam bhi main dhoond ke rekhti hunn.

Shiv was stunned hear this. He looked at her. Tumhe baache pasand hain?

Mujhe haan bahut pasand hain. Pata hain jab nandu chota tha tab main usse sambhalti thi acche se. Shagun aur Varun ko bhi. Maloom hain Dadi sa kab se intazaar mein hain woh toh Devi maiya se kehti rehti hain anandi aur Shiv ke baacho ko dekhe baigair main nahi jaane wali iss duniya se. Jab humare baache honge toh main unnhe ek behtaaar insaan banaungi bilkul aapki tarah.Anandi smiled & looked at him. Shiv was smiling. Anandi gets embareessed.

Accha toh madam sarpanch yehi bhi soochti hain. Mujhe toh tumne bataya bhi nahi. Well agar baat baacho ki hoo rahe hain toh usse pehale Shaadi karni hogi. Aur baacho ko iss duniya mein lane ki itani badi jeemedari uthane ke liye hummne taiyaari bhi toh karni padegi na.

Anandi was confused. Nahi samjhi tum…Honeymoon. Well baato kahan jana hain ?

Anandi blushed & starts walking away from him. He followed her. Arre madam ji batayeh na. Kahan jana hain. Mujhe chuuti ki application bhi deni padegi.

Anandi felt shy. He grabbed her from back. Ab bolo….jaldi se.

Main kya batun aap jahan lee chale…mujhe nahi maloom.

Dekho main lee chalonga phir yeh mat kehna ki yahan kahan lee aaye mujhe.

Nahi kahungi….pakka. Jahan aap lee chaale. They start walking together towards road holding each other like ture lovers.

Precap

Well keep guessing

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Posted: 12 years ago

Part 32

Back from Jodhpur Sanchi is busy showing shopping to Dadi sa & others in haveli. Dadisa is happy to see Anandi is gelling with shekhar family very well. They were treating her like their own daughter. Shiv enters in haveli. He announced that Delhi's company people asking anandi to visit Mumbai for some work purpose immediately.

Dadisa was reluctant as wedding date is nearing & Mumbai always made Anandi unhappy. But Anandi is ready gone there. She told dadisa she needs to go since it's very important for school. She will be fine. Shiv told her he, sanchi & mahi will accompany her. Sanchi is excited.

All are landed in Mumbai. Anandi was bit nervous. Shiv understands her pain. He holds her hand. She smiled at him. They reached to company's guest house first then Shiv & Anandi drove to corporate office. Mr Pankaj welcomed them warmly. They had very successful meeting & intoduced Anandi to their executives. Later on Panjak insistence they processed towards SNG hospital which was funded by their company.

Pankaj told if anybody from Jeaitsar needs any kind of further medical help. She can send them here. They will provide excelllent team of Doctors & all facility. Anandi nodded. Suddenly one of wardboy accidently hits Anandi. Her saree gets dirty & wardboy apologies her. Pankaj asked one of the addmistrative staff to show her washroom. Anandi washed stain from saree & came out. She started walking towards conference hall. Jagya saw her & called her.

Anandi tum yahan? Mumbai mein kaise aana hua?

Anandi glazed him. Kaam tha she told him & starts walking.

Ruko mujhe tumse baa karni hain.

Humare beech baat karne ke liye kuch baacha nahi hain Mr Jagdish Singh she told him farmly.

Main janata hunn. Kuch dino pehale Gauri ne tumahare saath baatameezi ki thi main wahin tha. Lekin himmat nahi juta paya tumhara samana karne ki.

Anandi simply ignored him.

Tumahri sagai hoo gaye hain na uss Collector ke saath. Mainne suna uss din. Anandi main janata hunn ki mera tum par koi haq nahi hain phir bhi tum uss batamez collector se shaadi mat karo.

Ek minute Jagdish. Meri neejee zindagi ke baarein aapko kuch kehne ka koi haq nahi hain. Main kisse shaadi karti hunn kise nahi. Aur ek baat woh mere honewale pati hain. Unke baarein mein main batameezi bardashat nahi karugi.

Lekin Ananadi tum uski sacchayi nahi janati. Bahut hee ghamandi insaan hain. Us din mujhe beech bazaar bahut pita who bhi bewajah.

Yeh tumahri purani aadat hain jagya. Aapni galati ka ilzaam humesha duusaron pe thopna.

Meri koi galati nahi thi. Uss sabji wale ne mujhe dhamkane ki koshish ki. Maine bass aapne aap ko baachne ke liye usse mara. Lekin uss Collector ko beech mein aane ke liye kisne kaha tha.

Wha wha….Doctor Jagdish. Aap toh bahut mahaan insaan hain. Koi rah chalte garib adami ki madat ke liey aage aata hai woh baatameez hain aapki nazaar mein. Aur sadak par shaarab peekar zagada karna yeh badi garv ki baat hain Anandi said scarcastically.

Maine zagade ki shuruwat nahi ki thi.

Mujhe tumahri koi baat nahi sunne hain. Tum aapne kaam se kaam rakho. Meri zindagi baarien soochne mein aapna waqt barbad mat karo. Main khud kabil hunn aapne baarein soochne ke liye. Tumse behtar samajh hain mujah mein insaan pehchane ki.

Main tumhar bhaale ke liye keh raha hunn.Dilse tumahra bhala chata hunn main.

Tum aur mera bhala...

Gauri saw those two were chatting & gets furious. She walks towards them.

Tumahra dil nahi bhara joh tum yhan bhi chali aaye she said in loud voice.

Anandi gets irritated & starts walking. Gauri followed her. Tum samjhte kya hoo aapne aapko uss Collector se shaadi karke hum par dhop jaamne aaye hoo. Lekin abhi bhi tum Jagat ka peecha nahi chod rahe hoo.

Anandi stops. Main aur tumhare pati ka peecha. Mujhe aapne jaisa gira hua samjhe ke rakha hain kya she replied back to her.

Anandi………..she screamed out of anger.

Chillao mat yeh ek Hospital hain. Main aapni zindagi mein bahut khush hunn. Mujhe kisi aur ki zindagi mein dakhalandazi karne ka koi shouk nahi hain. Waise bhi tumhare pati mein ki itani haisiyat hee nahi hain.

Arre wha uss collector ka saath milane ke baad tum isa keh rehe hoo. Lekin usse kya maloom tum kitani baar Jagat ko aapne pass bulane ke koshish kar chuke hoo. Aapne hone wale pati ko aapna yeh roop bhi dekhana. Uss beechare ko tumahri asliyat maloom hee nahi hain.

Anandi lost her control. She was about gave solid reply to Gauri.

Ek min Shiv said. Kuch bhi Anandi ki khilaaf ek shabad kehne pehle uske anjaam ke baarien sooch lijeyehga joh bhi aapka naam hain.

Shiv aap rehne jejeyeh. Inn logon se aap baat kar itani inki haisiyaat nahi hain. Chaleyeh yahan se Anandi dragged him.

Nahi tumhare baarien mein yeh log kuch bhi bakwaas kare yeh main bilkul bardashat nahi kar sakta. Anandi ki burai karne ka aap logon koi haq nahi hain. Lagta hain uss din ke Anandi ke thappad ka asar nahi hua aap par.

Anandi ne aapko bhi aapne jaal mein fasaya hain Gauri said.

Shut up….Aap ek aurat hain iss liye leehaj kar raha hunn main. Lekin ek aur shabd nikala moohse Ananadi ke khilaaf toh main yeh bhool jaunga. Anandi meri mangetar hain. Uske sachayi hee uski takadat hain. Uske beete hua kal se baarein mein main acchse wakeef hunn main. Kon saccha hain kon jhootha yahi bhi main janata hunn.

Aap jaise log dusrronse ke baarein mein humesha bura hee sooch sakte hain. Kyunki jenka pyar aur vishwaas kaamjoor hota hain. Jhooth ke buniyaad pe khada hota hain. Wahi rishta kaamzor hota hain. Mera aur Anandi ka rishta vishwaas aur saach ki buniyaad pe khada hain.

Pankaj and other adminstrative office came towards them. Pankaj asked Shiv what happen.

Pankaj ji aapke hospital mein kafi ghatiya log bhare hain aapne. Yeh baatameezi pe uthar aaye hain Shiv told him.

Pankaj looked at Gauri & asked someone from administrative staff. Senior doctor came there, pankaj told him entire incident. Senior Doctor and management trustee asked for forgiveness from aanndi & Shiv. He blasted Gauri & Jagat insulting Hospital's respected guest likethis & asked them for an explanation in his cabin.

Shiv & Aanndi left with Pankaj and other trustee. Gauri & Jagat are now looked extremely tensed.

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Posted: 12 years ago
after public demand I put his story of JG getting scold by AnSH.😆


I hope you guys liked it...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awww... that was sooo beautiful ...

I wait eagerly for your update every day ... and you never disappoint ...

Thank you so much ... It was so nice to hear A speak so openly to Shiv ... loved it !!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Sheer delight would love to see that ontv
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb updates
loved both the parts but the best i liked was the confrontation scene between the four
waiting to see the result
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Posted: 12 years ago
liked it! Are... We loved it... Like always. I lv the A told to S that he is her true love, u saw so btfuly the love nd respect the both 4 eachother. Wow u r simply great nu wow. Sry but plz continue soon as we are egarely waiting nd ya i like ansh ka karara jawab to fools jaga [=D>]
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thanks for your updates. So wonderfully written.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing updates!!!! Loved how they were asked to apologize in public,
Plz continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Good to see long awaited JG bashing...keep up the excellent work...I love ur story

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