A new poem

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PreciousPri

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Posted: 14 years ago

Hi all

lets see if i can get my creative juices flowing ... i wrote a little something 4 DV in English so i thought ill do Hindi this tym 😊

Maine apno se dushmani modh li... tumhare liye

Maine sab se mu modh liya... tumhare liye

Maine pyar karna sikha... tumhare liye

Main shaitaan se insaan bana... tumhare liye

Maine praishchit bhi kiya...tumhare liye

Maine duniya ko bhi chod ne ke liye tayar tha... tumhare liye

Lekin main tumhe kabhi nahin chod sakta...bhul sakta...tumhari liye bhi nahin

Hope u like it... sorry 4 any mistakes my Hindi isnt brillaint 😳or rather my Hinglish isnt 😆

Dedicated 2 the 1 n the only Thakur DigVijay Singh who dared to love ...

Edited by PreciousPri - 14 years ago

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uxghya

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Posted: 14 years ago

wowww pri its amazing pem love it really enjoyed it thansk yess perfect describtion of dv love towards amoli

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Savitha0101

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Posted: 14 years ago

Preci dear this is simply fantabulous yaar. 👏 ⭐️ ... Perfect, perfect, perfect for our DV 😃 😉 👍🏼

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king99

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Posted: 14 years ago

This is perfect Pri. It fits DV so much and can just imagine him saying all of this to his Amoli.

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PreciousPri

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: uxghya
wowww pri its amazing pem love it really enjoyed it thansk yess perfect describtion of dv love towards amoli

Thanks so much Ghaz ! im happy u love it 😃 well i try 2 be creative n romantic at times n it just happened to work this tym 😆 ... i was intending it to be a description of DV's love n glad it turned out like that 😉

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PreciousPri

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Savitha0101
Preci dear this is simply fantabulous yaar. 👏 ⭐️ ... Perfect, perfect, perfect for our DV 😃 😉 👍🏼

My darling thanks thanks n thanks a bunch 4 ur appreciation 😃🤗 i try my best n its ur appreciation n DV's love 4 his Amoli which makes it perfect 😉 Merci yaar 😃

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PreciousPri

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: king99
This is perfect Pri. It fits DV so much and can just imagine him saying all of this to his Amoli.

Thanks a million Saba !! like i said 2 Savi i try my best n its DV's love 4 his chahat n all u DVians love that makes it perfect 😃

me 2 can imagine DV saying this 2 his beloved 😍

i wanted something which will be apt 4 DV n his journey 2 get his Amoli n i guess my effort wasnt in vain 😳 but hey i made a typo in the poem which i have edited 😛

Edited by PreciousPri - 14 years ago