FF : Coin has two sides - Pure & Evil (Ch10A - Pg126) *Pms Later* - Page 40

Originally posted by: To-Barobar

superb update Di!!!
thnk u TB!!! 🤗

u rocked!!!
loved d bhairavigiri...
mukwaas ki jagah mukh ke vase...😆
Bhairu ka dimag hai!!!🤣🤣

Anna-rutu talk for me it was a bit boring..🥱
so skiped it...😉
u r mad.. 😲

that lab scene with goons seemed interesting..
wanting to know more of it...
yeah i know it was filled of curiousity...
tabhi toh dala tha yahan🤣🤣🤣🤣

keep writing...

uff no vava scene in this one...
very bad...
plz include vava in nxt one...
along with super duper bhairavigiri...
i doubt u wil get one in nxt...'
wil try to put..


continue soon..
thnks 4 d pm...

Originally posted by: PRINCESS_ALISHA

hey hiyu😳
nice update😳
i am sorry i took so many days😛
you are a gud writer😳

Originally posted by: ..optimist..

AR 🤗 SW🤗

Finally read CHAPTER 7

Anna is determined to talk to Manav and cleverly gets rid of Sharad telling him to go and help Varsha.
u think so..😆😆

Haha... Pritesh toh bada chalu hai... Sab mardon ko kaam pe lagaya 😆😆
Pritesh toh sabka baap hai colony me... smartest of all..

Are waah! Kulfi... mmm 😛😛 tumhe chahiye??

Bechari Anna... Feels left out 😭 yeah bechari😭

So Rutu had saved Sharad's life some years ago... it wil b revealed more..

Vasant searches Varsha by smelling... Haha that's funny... He thinks Varsha is hiding from him 😆😆

yes he can smell Varsha only...😆😆

Rutu bhi aa gayi... Kya baat karni hai Anna se akele mein? 😲
imp talk.. 😉

Arey, se Vasant aur Rutu mein kya baat hui? 😲😲
u wil know that soon...
btw i think only u r interested to know that.. no one even noticed that part...

Anna is special? Aisi kya khaas baat hai? 😕
u wil know that too

Awww... Rutu is such a sweet lady yaar... Lekin woh ek aur wajah kya hai? And what is Manav hiding? 😲😲
secret secret...

Anna's misunderstanding about Rutu is cleared... and they are friends now! 😊
yes.. soon to be besties...

Rutu is scared of Hemant 😆😆
yes darkness is always scared of light na... its that sort of...

Varsha more innocent than Vasant? Would love to know how... 😛
haha .. really u wanna know...
slowly slowly u wil know that too...

Wrong network 😆😆
yes Sharad ka network kabhi bhi wrong ho sakta h...😆😆

He Bhagwaan!!! Bhairuuu 🤣

Haha Toh Barobar! sab ek saath! 😆😆

What had happened? Something very sad... Something that they are trying to forget... And Sharad doesn't want them to remember those moments...

yes too sad past...
no one wil want to remember that..
but past always comes infront of us unexpected...

Thieves are scared of Bhairu 😆😆
bechare sab bhairu se darte hain😆😆

Oh God! They killed the thieves 😲🤢
they can kil anyone ... monsters r they...

Beti???? So he is Rutu's father?? 😲😲😲

What?! Vasant's father is there too? 😲😲
yup... u c d children r so gud... but their dad's r evil..

Aakhir maksad kya hai unka? Aur 2015 inke paas hai 😲
haan 2015 inke pass hai...

Ab Kuku kaun hai? 😕

an item who had come to colony before...

Hope to get the answers through the next updates... 😉

ur half questions wil b answered in nxt 2 parts..
wait for them...

PS : So sorry for being late... 😳

Originally posted by: Kulasya.

Finally read everything . And its Mmm... 👏 Seriously u r no less that accomplished writer. Bahut achi likhti ho tum . Eagerly waiting for next part . And yes , pls write more independent stories & try to publish them . Very good 👏

Originally posted by: coolhi1988

Thnks 4 d lovely comment...🤗

Originally posted by: coolhi1988

dont b sorry SW🤗

res

Originally posted by: ..optimist..

^^ Unreserved 😉

Originally posted by: mbmskkm

Nice title of the Story...
its eye catching...
liked promo 1..
pure vs evil..
they showed this in d show...