Sweetener : Drabbles (Chap.5 on page 10) - Page 6

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Posted: 3 years ago
#51

Beautifully written...and the journey I would have liked to see Ram and Priya take on the show. For two strangers to start knowing each other, becoming the best of friends and then fall in love..❤️

Your story is all heart! ❤️

Hope to read more from you soon..

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Posted: 3 years ago
#52

Love based on friendship is the most powerful and beautiful thing you can have. They deserved it, and you deserved 1000 beautiful words for your ability to create something so magical and real at the same time, with emotions and colors typical of people with big souls, like Ram and Priya.

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Posted: 3 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: DazzlingLight

Beautifully written...and the journey I would have liked to see Ram and Priya take on the show. For two strangers to start knowing each other, becoming the best of friends and then fall in love..❤️

Your story is all heart! ❤️

Hope to read more from you soon..


Thank you so much for your kind words❤️❤️ Same, this is what I wanted from the show as well. I feel we were kind of robbed in that sence so I tried to write them as strangers, turning best of friends who falls in love ❤️ Thank you for reading and taking time to comment

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: SEA05

Love based on friendship is the most powerful and beautiful thing you can have. They deserved it, and you deserved 1000 beautiful words for your ability to create something so magical and real at the same time, with emotions and colors typical of people with big souls, like Ram and Priya.


Agree with you , finding love in friendship is as pure as it getsThey really do desserve all the love and happiness 😃 Thank you, gosh that's so sweet of you ❤️Blushing, due to your kind words. Really gratefull that you took the time to read and leave a comment

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Posted: 3 years ago
#55

You brought me so many wonderful minutes filled with love, of course, I wanted to answer)

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Posted: 3 years ago
#56

You're a wonderful writer!!! Hats off to you. I just read part 3 and 4 and both were so well written that the reader just gets engrossed in the story, that's what happened to me.


Father's Day was just the perfect way I imagined Ram and Priya will celebrate this day.


Valentine's Day brought these two bff/love birds closer.


Hope you write more soon ♥

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Hero_Coconut

You're a wonderful writer!!! Hats off to you. I just read part 3 and 4 and both were so well written that the reader just gets engrossed in the story, that's what happened to me.


Father's Day was just the perfect way I imagined Ram and Priya will celebrate this day.


Valentine's Day brought these two bff/love birds closer.


Hope you write more soon ♥


Thank you so much, that's so sweet of you❤️So so happy to hear that you got lost in the story, I don't think their can be a bigger compliment than that so thank you so much


Father's Day was something I imagined must be very painfull for both of them, for different reasons so I wanted to show them connect over that and also show how the future father's day could be associated with happiness and love again when they have their own little ones running around. For Priya to see a husband and a father who stays and loves his family with as much sincerity that Ram does. So I'm happy that drabble did not dissepoint and you liked reading it 😳


Valentines day did bring them closer, from strangers to friends who are falling for each other ❤️


Thank you for reading and commenting ❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
#58

Beautiful stories... Glad that i came across them now... Specially when the show is making no sense. Loved the interactions and emotions... This is exactly i imagined their relationship growing... And what the first episode promised... Them healing eo do beautifully... Going to save your drabbles to read them again whenever the writers disappoint us :)


Please please write more!!!

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Posted: 3 years ago
#59

Originally posted by: bhubhnis

Beautiful stories... Glad that i came across them now... Specially when the show is making no sense. Loved the interactions and emotions... This is exactly i imagined their relationship growing... And what the first episode promised... Them healing eo do beautifully... Going to save your drabbles to read them again whenever the writers disappoint us :)


Please please write more!!!


Thank you so much for reading, so delighted to hear you liked the stories so far❤️❤️So happy I was in a small way able to capture what you imagined how their relationship would grow Happy that the drabbles can help a little bit when the show let you down 😳 Will for sure write more after my exam season is over hehe 😊 Thank you for your kind words, and taking time to leave a comment ❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
#60

Wow! Each update is so wonderful! Please keep writing more...🤗

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