SS: I Belong to You updated on pg:22 - Page 18

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Similar to the starting quote,ending one was fab too..

Part 4

A well awaited confession by lovers and the in the beginning of the chapter the quote too indicated about RaYa love confession.

what a dialogue "mind, mind hi toh kharab hai" its just a awesome.
itne jaldi kiu khatam hun, but super duper hit, thanks for pm.
plz one request plz write step mom and post plzzz

Awww finally they confessed wow n past bhi reveal ho gya cool

Finally confession ❤️ it was superb... Once again thank you for writing this 😆

Superb. But why did you end it abruptly?

Originally posted by: LuvSSever

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Oh for the first time, truly my timing matched😆

Will soon come up with the comments after finish reading it.. :)

UnRes...

Dear..where should i start with.. it was beautiful to the core...

I smiled throughout..

You just bowled me over with the first statement itself..

<font color="#ff0000">He Smiled. She cried. That's how they confessed their love.</font>

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I could imagine RaShi in such a moment..that would be

Thanks,hugs and muaahs to this Rayalicious treat..

You have started writing your lovey dovey scenes too in a most impactful way that reading that we fell into Rayaland immediately..

I thought you were too good at funny ones ,light hearted and emotional ones, but now you have extended your arena to lovey dovey love scenes too..i loved this confession ...

Ram restless in not able to confess to priya,going speechless seeing her, priya enjoying the changes Ram bringing in her but fear the thinking of carried away in it... and she was so into love and his influence, she pecked his cheeks in excitment...awww...

Yes destiny had plans of spoiling priya's plans and we are glad it did...

Good tht priya slept being tired..lol..

Ram decided to take her home ,then confess..

He adjusted priya's hair and the sleepy smile..these little little details and thinking the way rashi portrays it,makes me smile reading such..

On knowing they reached Ram's home, priya's dialogue in mind,scolding her cannot be awake for sometime,bitying nails,lived it..could imagine Sakshi right there.. :)

She getting into ram's home, reminiscing their old moments there, then the photo of esha bringing her to back to fear and she waiting to face it and fearing the sight of esha at each instance..

Then finally letting out her thinking,asking for Ram's wife, then coming to kniw he isnt married, the joy,peace inside..

Ram asking her to stay,she staying bck,then time spend together, ram tease about knowing all,nutz dream too but not him, finally priya accepting she lied but to tell the reason want some time...

Then Ram's confession, ofcourse in heart...grr..

I thought did he say it, whts priya reaction, then read priya shaking him..asked wht and ram said coffee..ufff..tricked here..lol

Then he asking for a dayout,both making their mind to confess but still lost in each others togetherness and not confessed..reached beach..i knew confession wuld happen there..

But how..waited to know..

He said..i luv u...

And tht summed up all for priya...the one she longing to hear for all these years and tht happinessmade her broke down in tears, ram worried, then she inbetween tears confessing her heart out, ram smiled..its perfect...

Then both sharing what happened so far and why they chose to do so...all past and present misunderstandings cleared..seen the possesive priya sharma..lol...then finally raya being one with proposing for marriage...

Similar to the starting quote,ending one was fab too..

<p align="center"><font color="#ff0000">"When two people are meant for each other, no time is too long, no distance is too far, and nobody can keep them apart."</font></p>

Loved it...

yes little sad story end hua but yes waiting for another story from you..😳

One thing is, priya could hv a had a even strong bad encounter with esha..😆

Apart from thinking her as ram's lover or wife, that history priya hadwith her could had been more intense..

But never mind...its about esha, so how much little it is , thts fine.😆.

So overall..loved the story..loved the way it is written..awaiting next..

Thanks for the pm... :)

Its delight to read detailed comments n its does boost me up
So thank you n big hug to you 🤗
Coming to last bit of Isha, i loved your honesty 😳 and liked that u pointed out what u didnt liked
My intention was to show that there was just a small friction between priya n isha and Isha was not that bad
See priya was aloof so she gave a damn to everyone and doesnt care about anyone and Isha too was same unless she started hating ram's attention shifting towards priya...and priya who never talked giving back answer was embarassement for isha so they never crossed each other's path
Did it made sense 😆

Very nice... Loved it... Beautifully written

finally both confessed... to Priya it's dream come true moment... and u beautifully showed her emotions.
but plz write one more ... like epilogue, and the trio conversation plz plz...
and thanx for pm...
if possible plz one short part...