RAYA TS : TUM SAATH HO Last part on pg 5 update 24 dec 2015 - Page 4

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Posted: 9 years ago
#31
lovely update
feeling bad for ram yaar
I hope jaldi ram pocha Jaye
eagerly waiting for ur next update
thanks for pm
continue soon
plzzz jaldi update Karna aur apki old stories ka bhi plzzz
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Posted: 9 years ago
#32
Very interesting twist in the story
Priya had must about Ram marriage to Esha and decide to get married but on other hand he realised his love was never died for her and began his journey to stop her marriage from Jai.
Thank u for the pm.
Edited by LovingRaYa - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#33

He opens his eyes...

All heads turns towards him...but no effect on bride and Groom they are So engrosses in kissing each other

He is confused Instead of Priya someone else is the Bride...and Groom is obviously No Jai i saw his pic once not clearly remember his face but Not this Guy then Who the hell They are and what they are doing i mean they are Kissing each other like there is No tomorrow or they are hungry from Ages ...he thinks but All his thought kicks away when

Man turns Ram by his shoulder...

hello Ram...Man says to him...

Ram : Hello... Er...i Know you...He scratches his temple... " JAI" Ahhh...

Where...What he is searching for words ...What is all this he finally Says

Jai : are you come for Priya's Marriage ???

Ram : he looks here and there...

Jai : i asked you something ???

Ram : NO...i came here to Stop her She thinks i am married But I am not And i love her and She...

Jai cuts him between She loved you too and you Both Are duffers

Ram looks at him in complete Shock...What it is mean She loves me And Please for God's Sake What happened here i thought You both are going to marry here...

Jai again cuts him in between And says I ll tell ypu everything in Car we dont have Time just come with me i ll tell you everything in Way Just Says this he drags him out of Venue to Parking Area and almost throw him in his Car and he too sits on driving seat and starts the Car...

Ram : Can you please tell me where are We going ???

Jai : Airport

Ram : AIRPORT!!!!! WHY I DONT WANT GO TO AIRPORT I WANT TO MEET MY PRIYA WHERE IS SHE ???HE ALMOST SHOUTE ON HIM

Jai : Ohh shut up and Calm down We Are going to Airport Because Your Priya is leaving For Russia

Ram : What ???

Jai : Yes

Ram : And What About Marriage...

Jai looks at Him and says I said you both Are duffers Listen what she did to me

Flashback

2 hours Ago

The Same Marriage venue

She is looking angel in white Wedding gown She wanted to be marry like this way two kids one boy and one girl is carrying gown's end And She is walking towards Jai where he is stand with Priest ...while walking she remembers the incident where she and Ram did the same thing with Bride's gown (walked with carried gown in hand with her upto to the end )

She tunrs her head And She sees herself and ram in those two kids walking with her

She somehow shrugs this thought and reaches to Jai...

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Posted: 9 years ago
#34
superb end to the os!! :-) really amazing..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#35
Superb ending...
Thanks for the pm...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#36
Beautiful os plss keep writing
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Posted: 9 years ago
#37
superb yaar. absolutely cute. love u RaYa.
thanks for pm.
pl write more n more RaYa stories.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#38
Wow. It's absolutely awesome.
Your finishing words. !!!!!!!!
They were the most beautiful words.
Thanks for pm and keep writing more.
Edited by Sakshiashu - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#39
Wow... Finally two differs got married...
Ram proposed Priya ii nn a unique way... Exactly as Priya wants it.. Nice...
They lived happily ever after...
Please do write more...
Thanks for PM
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Posted: 9 years ago
#40
lovely end thanks for pm . continue soon .

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