SS LAST (A Poetrical Update ) on Page 4 *18-01-2015*

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Janilover

@Janilover

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Posted: 10 years ago

#21

RAYA SS - Chalte Chalte LAST PART

So All RaYa ppl tighten ur seat belt and lets go to RaYaworld...This Is LAST Part

Warning some Hot content and poem read At ur own Risk (lol)

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Ronit : Priya ke pati or Priya ye Pyaar ke beech main dekhte hai kaun jitta hai...

Priya : ronit ye tum kya bakwas kar rahe ho...

Ram look priya assure her its ok and said

"Hamara Yeh Tum Ko SALAAM Aakhri Hai
Sune Aj Tum Se Kalaam Aakhri Hai

Agar Ho Sakay To Bhula Dena Hum Ko
Yehi Ek Chohta Sa Kaam Aakhri Hai "

Ronit : so Ram sahab Bataiye kis chiz ka competition karna chahenge...

Ram looks priya and said jis cheez ka aap chahe...

Ronit : to theek hai Aaj yaha Painting Exhibition hai kyu na Paining competition ho jaaye...

Ram : ok i m ready

Full here

LAST PART

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aanchal

@LovingRaYa

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Posted: 10 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: aman.anjaan
<font color="#990000"><font size="5" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">SS Chalte Chalte

PART 10</font></font>

Ram is with heavy heart giving his love Priya to whom she love
but she didn't want but still doing and now wat fate brought for them as Ronit and Ram is doing competition for Priya only...

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aanchal

@LovingRaYa

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Posted: 10 years ago

#23

The true love alwasy win
The painting Ram made from bottom of his heart for his love
Ronit lose the painting competition as well as Priya
the moment was sealed with kiss while Sky is witnessing their love

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leena

@leena04

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Posted: 10 years ago

#24

res 1

Part 1
reading the part I felt I didnt ead it beefore so reading it all over again... first part is awesomee but story is going in super fast mode... Pehle part me hi mile jaan pehchaan hui or saddi ki baat bhi ho gayi... welll Priya is surlly hiding something so moving for next to know...

Edited by leena04 - 10 years ago

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leena

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Posted: 9 years ago

#25

Part 2 3 & 4
omg story is going on superfamily speed 2nd me RaYa ki saadi bhi ho gayi n this truth came out Priya loves someone else... ohh poor my Ram uske dil k tukde tukde ho gaye but he is really strong man & true lover jo Priya ko uske pyar se milne le ja raha hai but I m sure Priya ko Ran k sache pyar ja ehsaas ho hi jayega iske pehle ki der ho jaye... but all the bad scenes of RaYa were master pieces lol...some were too funny n some were too romantic...

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leena

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Posted: 9 years ago

#26

Part 5 6 & 7
OMG fully power packed update awesome too good I just loved it... full of drama over all... so Priya has actually started to falling off Ram... it shows in her jealousy & care for him... bathroom scene was so perfect to show atam's feeling fif Priya... nd the last dairy ride was the best too good awesome just mind blowing I too too too lived it awesome...

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leena

@leena04

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Posted: 9 years ago

#27

Part 8 9 10
so family Priya falls god Ram I mean he is in deeply love with her aur uje pyar ka rang Priya pe bhi Chad hi gaya... both r in love. .. Ram's dairy n his shayri r soul of the story they r so so good I really loved all of them...so ab finally Priya will meet Ronit or Ram will go away from her... par kahaani abhi baki hai mere dost u never know what will happen next... hope Priya realized her happiness lays in Ram not in Ronit. ... apni khushi k liye na sahi Ram ki khushi k liye Ram k pass wapas aa jaye kyunki pyaar sirf dena dhikaya hai lena nahi...

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leena

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Posted: 9 years ago

#28

Part 11
awww awesome what an end too good master piece by u dear the way Ram portrait his love in his painting was a master piece no doubt it was wonderful in all way too good awesome mind blowing & what to say for end it was much way batter then anything too good... RaYa happily living ever after awesome mind blowing. .. will be waiting for more from you... moving for next stories...