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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: bpatil3



Haan neel jaise instructor honge toh how coem a doctor can be innocent😉😆


Haha malati ji instructer is very good but student is very dull 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
Part 12:

Thx for the PM.

The teasing was awesome at the Bf table, priya was drowned so much couldn't actually get wht her intelligent MIL n SIL is talking. hihihi yaha pe toh MIL has Neel's MIL glimpse lolz
Two smarty doctors hacked Shruti's password , thats great.
well doc Bhandari's present condition is heart touching, ram ji ki training shuru lolz.
Ye kya hai priya kahi bhi so jaayegi😆😆, I m sure he had diagonized and prescribed wrong medicines to many patients, as his full concentration was on priya, every 15mins once he was checking, doc giri tum aise mat karo plzz😉😛😆
if he is calling her kiddo nothing wrong, she is😆😆



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Posted: 10 years ago
finally me back...
read all the parts.
its just superb. i loved it.
plz continue soon dee...

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: lpsakshi

Again sorry what to do ek tedi aadmi ne mujhe busy rakha hai

What an update what I have to tell about this romantic sensuous or cute
Wow she is missing him badly but ziddhi kiddoo she is not admitting
kiddos hi aisa hota hai kya ?
And she is afraid what if something happens to her ye tho baat hai
And she is in verge of tears I know how it is very well
Haha she is murmuring to herself wow how cuteee
Ek kiddoo hi dusri kiddoo ko achchi tarah samjh skata hai hai Na Neel
Yeah this line is very true jahan jahan kiddoo hai vaha vaha khushi ka rounak aata hai
And Krishna ji s thoughts are lovely
Peacock color I think she like it most I heard from her
She is eager to meet him haha lovely and she can't hide her excitement
How sweet Krishna ji kash har ladki KO aise hi MIL mili tho kitni achchi hogi
Aww kk ji planned well but madam is hesitant to go
The way u mentioned about hospital is nice
Hmm all are drooling over her can we have that dress pic please
Haah reethu is hahaha
like her concern for kiddoo

But she is not aware of our kiddo naa how beautiful and charming she is ek hi muskaan me sabh kuch settle hota hai
Haha sister's omg lovely now they can know how and what is this kiddoo ji can do

Short fellow koi hai kya uski hsptl mai
And she is admiring Rb ram haha suffocating and I think what if she is in that position rather than steth
Wooow rams reaction is fab and "OH My, Kiddo, "🤣
🤣

hahaha love it muaahaaa

How sweetly he is explaining her everything haa and that's we are also liking this kiddooo

Great thought of ram
And she likes it very much
Their convo is romantic
blushing hahaha lovely
Blushing kiddo superbly penned down
How sweet he is waiting for her approval in spite of his urge

Aww his thoughts are dangerously romantic and action is utterly seductive
Haha mostly so many will react for that type of kiss like that only and it was sensuous and romantic loved the way it went on.

She is numb and getting time to register poor kiddo [LOL
she may afraid for sec what was happened but she is enjoying it lovely



Lol
tedhi aadami ... manavudu 😆😆😆
Aww thank you so very much for liking the part
haha yeah she is misisng him badly .. lol rofls
kiddos hi aisa hota hai kya ,,aise hi hotha hai 😆
haha yeah ek kiddo dusri kiddo ki acchi tarah see janathi hai ..
Haha yeahs he like the peacock colour most
she cant hide her excitement
im glad you liked the hospital ..
haha you want to see that dress ..will see
yeah reethu is not aware of our kiddo so kuch bhi bolte hai ..
the gossiping was great
Lol rofsl
Im laughing while reading your comment
ahah oh my god kiddo
ram's recations are worth watchful
Thank you so very much
im glad very glad that you liked it

Thanks for the lovely long wali comment

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: lpsakshi

Part -11

SORRY IS NOT ENOUGH I KNOW IT BUT I M SERIOUSLY SORRY

Thud thud thud started with a bang omg
What an effect kiddoo had on him
Ram was confused and happy at same time
Poor ram she scared him with her non reaction
Hahaha she is asking what ? itni asani se bhul gayi I think his kiddoo needs another round of what had just happened .
Finally he asked wow lovely confession by ram about his condition as well as effect she had on him.

How innocent is this kiddoo very cutely she is saying I don't know
Yes no husband had hear it hahahahhahahaah
Cute scene between RAYA I just losted in that moment
Haddi aagayi
Phirse kiddoo ji hahahahah poor PA may be he is scared to death poor fellow ram vaha nahi hai tho o bhaag jaata tha 🤣
She didn't like it na so many times she is like grrr for calling that telling us "Em kaadu"😆

Kiddoo ji likhne ke liye itna bada explanation hahah I love it

Hahaah a sirf ram hi nahi hum bhi
🤣

Hahaha Jhansi ki rani war shuru kiya hey bhagvan ram iss ram ko bachao please
That too infront of his PA hahahhaha poor PA may be he is thinking mai tho bach gayi

Hahaha doctor ram to teacher ram hey hey aur kitna avatars he has to take for his kiddooo darling

Hahahaa doctor to teacher , teacher to passionate lover wow

May bi he cant ask this question to his kiddoo what will happened if she hear it clearly aww already she turned into beet rout color .
Teasing tho shuru hogayi we want more
We are also adoring her more and more
Haha vikram entry is good
She ran after a kid cute na a kiddo behind a kid to catch

And vik- neha-kiddo child hood is good
Very sad to know how sruthi and aswin were dead
Mistery going on and on so something had happened in past with trio lets see what it was

And she is recollecting every thing poor priya she is in so much pain
Sruthi is a good friend tried to warn her

Hmmm raya convo is emotional
And ram is smoothening her loved it superb
She is getting solaced in his presence how sweet
What romantic morning

He is helping them in this case
Cleverly he is managing and helping
Loved it suprb


Hats off to writer and thank you so much to bring it here

Aur kuch bhi kehna chahta hun update me baare me but I think it will be so long so.


Hey common lakhs
I do knew you were busy so no need of sorry
haha yeah what an effect kiddo on him ..
Ram was so happy and confused to at a time ..
Lol she needs another round wil see ...
lol rofls
yeah yaar she don't know ...
hehe yes no husband had not heard of this

Kiddo ji ..
pA gone in her hands ..
Lol em kaddu .. roflss

Doctor to teacher than to passionate lover banna padtha hai na because
kiddo is his wife 😆
Thank you so much
Im glad you liked it
yeas they were getting more closer and deeper in each passing day
will be going to give the updte sooner
just stay tuned for it

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: lpsakshi

ONCE AGAIN SORRY FOR LATE

HAHA Krishna ji said god only knows and still they are talking ?
abhi tho shuru kiya ye dodnon ne baat karna abhitak tho jaghada or romance na
kiddos didn't get ideas quickly
haha bechara kk ji trapped between two JBs ek tho Romantic JB dusri tho Innocent kiddoo JB
hahaha kk understood what was his intentions and niharika is too good
hey KIDDOO what u had done to Ram how he changed lol he is replanning his schedule lovely
nice palnof shruthi
the way u wrote about shruthis drawing is good love it

hahaha kiddos ko kitni kaam hota hai kaha milta hai time to concentrate on self and belongings
password is cute I want to try it also hahahahaha
🤣

while I reading I thought aftr getting correct password she will hug him with joy but no probs we will wait

😉

poor girl going through so much of pain
mistery mistery and the target is moving priya to shruthi , shruthi to priya we are eager to know who is that and photos of shruthi ?
is that guy was behind shruthi ? or priya for love?
If he likes shruthi y he wants totake sweet revenge on priya ?????
And bhandari family facing health problems aww how priya will react about this?

.Priya jolted when she felt she is losing her grip on her seat . Ram what happened ?? Why ???Why you are driving fastly ?
Stop it Ram, Hearing her decelerated the speed of the car , "what happen kiddo " Are you afraid of speed he smirked at her ,
She sighed "Hmm No im not , seeing the route by the way where we are going "
"To our Hospital "
Priya smiled at the answer "OUR " she murmured again , a beautiful smile crept on her face , But this route is different na .
Yeah Kiddo , It's different route , so calm and lonely route , but we can go easily and how much ever speed we want also , winking at her . She obsereved the route it was very placid way . she loved the route instantly she said "Drive slowly please "
Ram gazed at her with corner of his eyes , smiled seeing concern for him from her


Haahaha kidddo is sleeping hmm that too till evng 6 ye tho hai she needs it na
How sweet this ram is checking her every 15 min lovely

Hungry???
We are also waiting for this word na ?

Sudhir and priya convo is a bit emotional what to do he is overprotective about her
And culprit revealed so he will be more and more angry on our kiddooo na omg she is in more danger na now
Romantic part is suprb now he is teaching hope in future vo ulta hojay
Ram is a great teacher
Wow priya is opening up with him nice
And she told what she felt at that time ? time management hahah
Awww percentage wise anger reduced haaan that's y called Kiddooo
And total update is fab every character has its own important and equal priority no one was ignored
I cant describe in words just muaahhaaa




Again sorry .. no need yaar

Krishnaji .. lol she is super women here ..

JB s .. lol ..
romantic jb ,kiddo jb .. godd ..
he is replanning his schedule totally .. just to be iwth her

Aww im glad you liked it

haha try for that password i will also wait for it

Haha she iwll hug him hmm will see hope we can get in future

Mystery mystery but the target is on priya and sruthi only ..
will seee and reveal soon that who is that photos .. and what its doing with police and media

will see what s vilan's motive behind priya ..
Im glad you liked the scene
haha yeahs he slept
and "hungry ?? yes we are also waiting for this word
will see how its going to be in future updates
whats the vilan motive behind it
everything is gonna reveal soon
Thank you so much for the beautiful comments
will try to update soon
sorry for later reply

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: rags06

Update preview update preview update preview update preview

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Yaar three days hogaya... At least a glimpse dho...😭😭



Awww so sorry sorry
I was busy and she was also extremly busy with her exam preparation and all so gimme one more day will post the update
preview hoefully tomorw i will post


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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: savirao

Awesome

Superb

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Fantastic



Thank u for pm



Thank you so much
Im glad you liked it

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: .pia_12.

Di waiting 4 the update!!!
If not preview bhi chalega 😉


Thank you so much

sorry for late

will try to give preview by tomorrw

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: armanz

After giving almost back to back updates itna gap accha nahi lagtha hain madam ji..Give update asap yaar..waiting is very very difficult..



Aww baby just gimme two more days time will come back with regular updates
sooorrryyy

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