RaYa SS : Destined to Marry *PART-13 on PAGE-137 on PREVIW ON PAGE-145 - Page 73

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: MittalKanu

Awesome part

Waiting for next
Thanks for the pm


Thank you so much
will try to update soon

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: iluvusakshi

why did ram kiss priya? i mean i love the scene. lekin priya kahi ram ko galat na samajh baithe aur kuch weired na react kare. pl no mu between them. MIL is very smart. pl continue soon.


Lol Good question ,..Seeing priya so near he is unable to control 😆 so he kissed her 😉

I know you liked it and afraid of how she will react 😉
will try to update soon

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: rampriya7aug

ye name kahase dhunda??? kiddo. i love it.



Lol ..
Haha ..
If i share its a problem
if i wont share also its a problem 😆
Usaully I will call The writer [Girija] as Kiddo 😆 and she don't like this name at all ,
when she said this story and priya as innocent , i told her to keep her name as "Kiddo " 😉
Rest of the story is here 😆Hai na I too love it .. so much 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: rags06

Precap precap precap precap precap


Will try to post it soon
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: youandme272000

wow its too good...

hope priya dsnt overeact and realise her feelings,,,
continue soon...


Thank you so much
will see in what way priya reacts in next update

wil try to update soon

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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update
finally ram kissed priya
continue soon
thanks for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
CONGRATULATIONS Neel & Giri For completing 100 pages very soon

Just with in 16 DAYS ,10 PARTS , 1OO PAGES , 12730 VIEWS 👏

Way To go GIRLS .keep rocking with your rocking stories .🤗Love you girls and Hugs both of you ,Party tho bantha hai boss , update dedo atleast give a preview for this celebration



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Edited by armanz - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: akilagoud2

awesome update
finally ram kissed priya
continue soon
thanks for pm


Thank you so much
yes he kissed her

will try to update soon

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: armanz

CONGRATULATIONS Neel & Giri For completing 100 pages very soon

Just with in 16 DAYS ,10 PARTS , 1OO PAGES , 12730 VIEWS 👏

Way To go GIRLS .keep rocking with your rocking stories .🤗Love you girls and Hugs both of you ,Party tho bantha hai boss , update dedo atleast give a preview for this celebration



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OMG

Babes Thank you so very much ..
Yeah Its a great achievement really 👏 The credit goes to one and only Our WRITER writings .

Thank you so much
and congrtaulatiosn to you too Because Its for your bday her special gift to you babes
Hugs back ..


Okayy I pesetered her so much and she is going to giev preview soon

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Posted: 10 years ago
Writer [ G!r!j@]
OMG OMG Your responce is just overwhelming guys ,Thank you so very much for the great achievement ,16 DAYS ,10 PARTS , 1OO PAGES , 12730 VIEWS wow thank you very much
Today is OFF for me ,but still I had loads of my personal work so couldnt able to pendown the whole update ,so as Neel is pestering Im giving a preview for now .. Tomorrow i will giev the full update pakka .. As i promised two more big fans 😉 They were very eagerly waiting for Priya' reaction 😆 ..
Stay blessed and keep smiling guys ..

PREVIEW

Priya went numb still she is lying above him , she can hear his heart sounds very clear ,He kissed me,My first ever kiss her cheeks rosed up in Ram's fav colour .

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A jolt rushed in his spine That she didn't responded back neither she didn't protested him for doing that ,Now a thin stinge ran over his legs .He scared she might hate him for this .Shh What you have done Ram ?? ab kya karu!!!

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"Hmm " she uttered ..

Err umm "Are you okay "

"Hmm " again the same answer she gave ..

Ram was cursing himself now , he don't know how to as what he wants to .But as he know her very well .

"Did you liked it "finally he blurted out

very softly she asked "What "

It was Ram's turn to get shock ,Hmm woo ..
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But please don't hate me Kiddo , you are precious to me very very precious ,I don't wanna loose you caressing her hair firmly he told.


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That means ,He rolled over her Now she is lying one the bed he is on her but maintained his weight on his elbows as she should not feel his full weight .

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He gazed ather a while , stunned to hear her answer ,After few secs He rofled on the bed , Kiddo Omg kiddo .. God no husband had hear this type of answer ever , That's why I call you Kiddo .God how sweet you are kissing her forehead , he didn't realise she is staring at him with wonder as she doesn't understand what exactly happen to Ram

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"Raman JI "

"MIthra ji "

"Vivek ji "

"Kiddo Ji " Oh sorry sir ,, she is damn angry at me , she yelled at me without a reason

Priya rose up from her place , Reason is there she yelled back at him

The secretary was terrified to look at her . Ram was laughing uncontrollably hearing "Kiddo ji "

How dare you call me Kiddo ,she questioned him

Secretary feared to death seeng her anger , Mam The caller ID was displaying that name so

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Ram invited him also to join the dinner as he don't have any problem.

"I need to know answers priya , I know I know I should not bring this topic but Please try recollect something atleast gimme some clue "

Priya looked at Ram , Oh him sorry , If you two need privacy I will just be back he said with a smile about to go ,Priya placed her hand on him pausing his action "

"Why she didn't run to save her life Ram ,she sobbed hard " she could have na , atleast she could have alive

Shhh Kiddo , don't cry ,Why she didn't run ,Even if I tell the answer You won't be able to understand , sleep my angel sleep .. His husky voice ringing in her ears one again ..



p.s: i know i know i have not given the priyas reaction but what to do if i will give in preview itself ,what is there to read ..soo stay tuned for the update

Edited by luvsakshi - 10 years ago

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