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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: abhishekpanchal

omg...who the hell he is???... preview was awesome next soon please


Thank you so very much
suspence continues abhi 😉

will try to update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sssabcd

omg.. Danger fr priya? 😲
no pls.. We want raya safe..


Yeah danger for priya

Thank you
will try to update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
tell me the time atleast 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: lpsakshi

Sorryyy for this much late here is my 2 nd comment


Totally mind blowing update
and she is scolding herself for her dreams and reactions lovely lovely
We want to know what is his reaction after slight pinching of his nose vo hi bataado yar

Here kk is a haddi Hai
Krishna ji was away ? Is because of her proffession kya?
Ak suggestion is awesome loved it
Ak and kk are behaving like her own parents its a great bonding .

What yar here is also Priya is the one who lose balance always i know if ram lost balance imposdible for kiddo to controls 😆

Haha there kiddo is back she cannot tolerate that name na but in future hope she loved it
Jhansi ki Rani is back muaaahaaa
Ha

Awe she is complaining about her hubby to her professor lovely here professor asked superb question
Professor : what he is not listening
Priya went calm .. how she will say he is calling her kiddo .
Professor : sensing different menaing , don't tell that he is flirting with you and all , I wont belive as I know how Good Dr.Ram is ..
Priya gaped at him . Ram laughed at seeing her opened mouth .
Ram : Dr.Thilak cool mate , he is hardly controlling his laugh , Priya and I got married recently , she is my wife ,sidehugging her , some thing she is tellingto me and you misunderstood totally .


This is awesome loved it he is controlling and he manages the situation brilliantly
Questions ki barish lively oh god they stopped there what she will told when they asked another questions waiting for that situation come 😆sooon
And reetha can we expect some jolous track here?
And poor girl don't know about her hubby at all

And waiting for next part eagerly

reetha?



Awww lakhs thank you so much
haha she is scolding for herself for her dreams and reactions
hotha hai na

yes its because of her profession only .. ak & kk are supporting priya
lol will see who will lose balance in future
kiddo is back with the kiddo name
haha the convo is just hilarious
i dont think jelous track will come
will see how its gonna turn up
thank you so much for the lovely comment
will try to update soon

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: armanz

Waiting for the update


just wait for some more time , please 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago

PART-8

Ram recognised Reetha , Hey doc , You are working in our hospital right ..

Reetha : Yes sir ..

Ram:So this is your college .

Reetha : yes sir and priya is our best buddy , she called all of them and introduced all of them.

Ram was patiently answering them where as priya blushing .

Gals : Sir can you give a pose , we just want your couple pic , Priya don't have it . You are looking made for each other sir .

Ram kept his hand on priya tugged her closer to him , Gals clappingly taken photos . and they dispersed from there. Giving some free time to Ram & Priya .

Priya slowly came out of from his grip

"What was that "

What ?? Ram asked curiously ...

Nothing , Im getting late she turned to go , she got a beep sound in her WA , she checked it her friends sent the photos immediately with some naughty comments . she glared at them .

Ram :Kiddooo .. Send those to my WA too please , The smile on his lips never faded and the blush on her cheeks never faded . Both went to respective places .

Priya : Finaly you people have got what you want , she smirked at her friends .

Friends :Yup finally ...but you know what? he is indeed super cool yaar . In between their professor came after explaining some methods he asked them to meet him in Surgery ward . The young docs were very much intrested to go to the surgery ward and experiment their skills .

A week passed like this ,Daily Ram is dropping her and picking her up maximum times , if he wont he is sending the driver to pick her up . And the security is informing and alarming every maximum details to Ram also about her . She have been comfortable with him and his flirtings .

Priya's curiosity increased ON Ram and his whereabouts she isn't able to understanding her feelings towards him .at the same time she wants to know so much about him , when ever she listens about him from Reetha , she so wanted to see him in that raging avatar in the hospital .

That day while going back to her home , she asked driver to go to Mr.Bhandari s house to check on them ,the house is always filled with laughters and teasings , Now feeling empty without any such noices . she slowly walked down to the hall , her eyes got teary when sh e saw two large photo frames of sruthi and sahil ,smiling at her .she called them when she didn't get any response she went to their bedroom .

Dr,Jayesh karekar is cheking Mrs.Bhandari s BP , Mr.Bhandari is standing beside her with worried lines on his face , she rushed to them " what happen to aunty "

Seeing priya both faces lits up " how are you beta"

"im fine aunty but what happen to you "

Jayesh: priya , her BP Is fluctuating and she is suffering from severe headache from yesterday.when I came to see them , now they told me , You tell her to take some rest don't take much stress .

Priya : what is this aunty , you should take care of yourself na .

Mrs.Bhandari : when my both kis not there in this world what I should do priya by taking care of myself .

Priya went numb for sometime she don't know what to speak further .

Jayesh : Priya , I told them to go and visit "Balanand " for sometime , so they could feel better

Priya : such a great idea uncle .you are always best , Turning to them it's a very beautiful orphanage aunty you definitely will love it , please once go and just stay there for sometime .

Mrs.Bhandari : coming out from her thoughts , will see priya , by the way how is your life going on , How is your new house .

Priya : Everything is okay aunty .

Mr.Bhandari :Take care of yourself priya . don't go outside with out anybody .did anything happened recently ..

Jayesh : looked worried ,Priya if anything happens just call us , we are a call away .we don't want to loose you at anycost .

Priya overhelmed seeing their care towards her , she nodded her head . after spending sometime , she left to her home .

When she reached her room , Ram was working on something , he glanced at her turned his gaze towards the clock than back to his work , she looked at the time ,Its close to 8 , she walked near to him mouthed a "sorry "

He glanced at her once again than continued his work .

She muttered under her breath , I m teling sorry phir bhi he is showing his attitude .

"I heard it " Ram growled

"Thanks for your ears for hearing it " saying this she bites her tongue and ran off to washroom , she took bath , wore a silky simple kurthi , she glanced at Ram once who was deeply involved in his work . she escaped from their room to kitchen room .

Where Krishna ji and Niharika is ordering the servants to arrange the dining table . priya entered saying

Good evening Mammiji and di ...

Good eveinig beta .. how was your day , Krishanaji asked priya .

Priya : Its good and tired bhi mammiji , she was watching while krishnaji making bread pakoras , who will eat this oil food at night time .

Niharika : smilingly " our koun aapka pathi inki ladli beta "

Priya flushed hearing it .

Niharika: You know he likes to eat ,he is a foodie and at the same time , mainatians his atheletic body too[ in this ff He is a handsome hunk ]

Priya : phir bhi , Night time its not good na mammiji

Krishna ji : But he asked me to cook .so can't deny it .

Priya ,niharika ,krishanji banter goes on , while priya is narrating about what she got different cases today , how she felt . some teasings and naughty talks between them finally all came back to the dinner table except Ram .

Krishnaji told priya to call Ram . She went to their room to call him ,Ram was lying down on the bed watching TV .

Mammiji is calling for you dinner .he turned the otherside .

Priya now understud he is still angry on her . she walked near him ,

" im so sorry , I wanted to inform you befre going to uncles house but I just forgot ,anyway you wil get all the report na than why this much attitude ha!!!!

He glared at her !!1

Achha ok ok ,sorry , next time onwards I will inform you pakka , please come for dinner "

Ram: a slight sly smile played on his lips , That's like my girl so you know why im angry , but I can't accept your sorry I want more than this .

She baffeled asked him "means "

Showing his forehead I want a kiss here ... He held his hair back with his hand .

She gasped , You are so shameless, and sorry you are not going to get what you wanted

Ram :than im not coming for dinner

Priya : Don't behave like this .

He pulled her she directly landed on his lap ,caressing her cheek , Just one kiss with your pink soft lips . He pleaded her . She downcasted her eyes when his gaze piercing her . His hand carving her cheeks ,jawline .how soft she is .

Please leave me na , she pleaded him .he is enjoying her discomfort , she is struggling to get off from his lap . When his lips about to touch her soft scalp .

Niharika came in .." How much time you two will take ...

She paused in her tarcks seeing the love birds .. closing her eyes

Im sorry im so sorry , I didn't expect you will be romancing , giggling she left the place .

Priya immediately freed herself from him . Walking out ,Mammiji made bread pakoras for you , if you wont come she may feel bad . she almost ran off .

On dining table ,she sat silently not to gaze at niharika ,who was smirking uncontrollably .Soon Ram occupied her beside seat . After some time Niharika spoke "Ma I think we should send Ram & priya to honeymoon " Ram shot his head up , Priya had a bout of cough hearing her .Ram gave her water asked her to eat slowly .

Niharika:It's ok priya , we will select a nice place for you , Sameer too looked at priya .winking at Niharika telling his plans too about for their honeymoon .

Ram finally spoke , hmm actualy I have so many things to do so I need some time and moreover priya also don't have much holidays so let me think about that .

The dinner went fine with Niharika's teasings and tauntings about the couple. Priya felt mortified for her teasings . but she couldn't say anything nor she couldn't do anything .

When the both came to Ram , she shot her questions at Ram

What the hell you are trying to do ?? Oh god how di teased us , and you are enjoying it na , she was pushing him back saying all these .Ram held her hand pausing her attack on his chest , he inched her to him , Priya felt breathless by his presence , His lips merely maintain the gap between her cheek ,he whispered in her ears

"If Di wouldn't have interrupted , My lips could have worshipped your forhead "

She gasped hearing him, his presence is affecting her to the core .

Before he said something , his phone rang with a shrill voice .

Looking at the ID , This is imp take your time to think how to kiss me saying this he attended the call freeing from her grip .

Her body just missed the warmth of him , oh my he is dangerously making me addict for him . she lost in her thoughts for sometime.Ram is getting ready ,

"where ..where are you going "

An emergency case came I need to be there kiddo , you sleep I will join you later . Before she say something , he fled from there ..She looked from the window until his car fazed out from her view .

At exactly opposite to the building A man scratching his beard , laughing evilly

Oh My Priya ..So love is blossoming in you ,, I will wait until you fall in headover heels love with your so called husband than I can take sweet revenge on you .. Hearing his laugh the trees shivered .

He dialled a number , Hello bosss . what are you doing ,Listen carefully , Soon Im going to plan Priya's murder too , what about the Money & what I asked for ???

The other person :Everything will be ready by that time

Vilan : Giving his most evil smile , I want every single detail of Mrs.Priya Ram Kapoor , now our bhi maza aayega .. This time ...Na vikram na sudhir na fate ,No one NO ONE is going to stop this murder Be careful and every single detail I want ..

The other person :sure sure I will . what is your next plan .

Vilam ;Nothing bOss .. Now I will make priya emotionally weak . And the next target name is "Shravan " ha ha ha laughing evilly he disconnected the call .

The other person : Shravan . whats his plan with him ..anyway we need the work should be done .so let it be ..

Priya baby I will be happy if you will also say bye bye to this world .

Its around 1 am in the midnight, Ram came back to room ,he was shell shocked priya was sitting on the bed reading something .

Why you haven't slept yet Kiddo "

She jerked hearing him but very happy to see him in their room .Thnak you for coming so early glancing towradsthe clock .

Ram: I told you to sleep .

bas going to sleep , she kept the books aside slipped in her duvet .He very well knw priya was with half drooped eyes , he changed and slipped his side , caressing her hairs

What happen kiddo , why you haven't sleep yet ??

She groned sleepily "Pllleasee don't call me with that name "

He chukled .. why you haven't sleep??

Im scared of being alone .. nothing else ,saying this she drifted off to comfortable sleep when she felt his rough lips touched her forehead she slept with a contended smile . He cannot hold back his emotion ,taking her petite frame in his embrace , dropped a chiast kiss on her hairs ,he tooo drifted off to sleep .

will post the next part soon .. for that you need to shower your comments ..

G!r!j@

Edited by luvsakshi - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Asusaul awesome Neel ,will come back with my detailed comment ,Love you for this
Oh my what an update gal..fultoo entertaining and at the same time you maintained the grip of the story..suspense element..My curiosity is raising everytime when I read the update..If this was a novel I wud hv read in one go..AWESOME GALS..👏👏
So the start was asusual lovely with all the gals making Priya click a side hug wala pic wid Ram..and WA dhany ho.instant sharing bhi hogaya...😉😆
Ohh Sruthi's parents might be feeling depressed and might have lost interest in life but they need to be strong to lead the life ahead(my opinion)
Lol his anger was so genuine as she is at risk always and upar se after marriage equations change like "cheppi vellali cheppulesukellali ante naksitam undadu ante kudaradu"😆😆
he didnt ask lip kiss na Priya why you accusing him 😆
So their lil romance was disturbed be unaware Nih entry but I enjoyed reading the teasing and all..but one doubt why did Ram postpone HM?? is it for their relation or something else like her safety??
The kiss was waiting to reach her forehead but again the phone call disturbed them..

What was that stupid bad and evil fellow doing??observing RaYA!!! Oh godd it was so scary..the thought itself..He wanna murder Priya😡😭 Nope Ram will save her bugger wait he will punch u
And who is this Sravan?? Goddd plz aap next part jaldi dedo plzz cant wait to know more..and who the hell gave that supari re...Goshh am getting so many doubts/..Update na plz baby plzzz..
Loved it totally and Giri it wadnt filler part re it was asusual mindblowing..the way u r shaping RaYa relation is soo cool..👏 Kudos Kiddo😆
Neel I want next part asap make ur kiddo write it now okkk😃
Thanks for pm.
Edited by armanz - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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sorry sorry yar for this much late late

wow lovely nicerequest from kiddos friends
haha waise dear can you say " what was that " detailedly pleeeaaasee😉
lovely expressions aww blushing kiddo worth to stare na 😉😉😉
now she is comfortable with his flirtings ☺️ wow hope so soon she will addict for that
now madam is curious to know her man hmm
but reethu hope she is a good character ?
bhandari family part is emotional
" balanand " is that she going ?kid

for me jayesh charcter is still????

ohho he is angry

we need more of this type of situations and solutions bhi

kuch ideas seekhne ko milta hai yar 😉😉😉

lovely convo between RAYA ye gussa me ho ya romantic ho fabulous writing

nice blackmailing loved it 😳
in this shameless kya hai genuine hai bhai 😉

He pulled her she directly landed on his lap ,caressing her cheek , Just one kiss with your pink soft lips . He pleaded her . She downcasted her eyes when his gaze piercing her . His hand carving her cheeks ,jawline .how soft she is .

Please leave me na , she pleaded him .he is enjoying her discomfort , she is struggling to get off from his lap . When his lips about to touch her soft scalp .


wow kitna romaaantic hai

niharika saw them 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 hahaha
and soon honeymoon


his presence and proximity affecting and not only priya we also had that effect same no no more than that 😳😉😉

vilan ?

so he is not shruthis or her familys enimy
he wants to harm priya mentally and phisically omg

and madam cannot sleep with out him haa 😳😳😳

sameer and niharika lol
how much u hate that sameer name now i understand 😆 thats y u made him nih ka hubby



Edited by lpsakshi - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
lovely part.. enjoyed it😊
cont soon & thanks fr the pm
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Thx for the PM.
Oh my , Ioved the way ram getting closer to her,posing for pic showing his authority over her, n Priya can never understand what is his next , before she understand one, he will take another step😆
Bollywood movie hogaya doc villain full plan to kill priya , and eyeing on her window😛😆😆 , and he thinks with his permission she can fall in love with her hubby😆, stupid kahi ka, ram kapoor made his wife fall for him, bcoz she is not rejecting or opposing any of his moves😉😆
Bread Pakoda n madam is worried 😆, so doctors can also be foodie and can't control to have oil food😊. well good progression in ram n priya's love life.
SUper cool update enjoyed raya and priya's embarassment😊

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