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Posted: 10 years ago
#61
Simply superb 👏
loved the way her first crush broken and she is going to be storng and her crush came again telling he broke up with her and the kisss ahhh
superb

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Posted: 10 years ago
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read two parts in one go ram proposed her superb waiting for the next update continue soon nd thanks for the PM

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Posted: 10 years ago
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read both d 2 n 3 parts in 1 go...! 3 part was ossum...luved d way ram sat with priya n kisswed her! hope isha was jst a tympass...! if possible plz make it a little long 1 n show their after marriage romance olso..! cont soon...n 10xx 4 pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
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lovely update and thanks for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: rags06

Hurray... He proposed😃😃

Nice going... Continue soon... Thanks for the PM




yes he proposed...
thanx for reading nd commntng
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awww loved it Ram proposed Priya yaaaYYY N they kiss ' hmmm pls continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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OS-Metro Station

last Part

here is last part hope u all like it

Recap :

His soft, pink lips pressed up against mine in an instance. Not being able to stop myself, I moved my lips against his and we kissed for a few seconds before pulling away and leaning our foreheads agaisnt each other.

I was speechless. I had finally kissed my crush.in a train ohhh god how stupid we are...

"Be my wife" He whispered. (How unromantic way to propose i thought)

last part :

Priya's Narration

Kaha kho gayi ms priya sharma...ram said....

I blused...finally i spoke

ram its too early i mean hum jante hi kitna hai ek dusre ko...

Ram: Ms.priya sharma age 26 lives with her mom who has a boutique...ypresently working in TOEFL classes...

Topper of Xavier college...

Comes 11 by train works upto 4.15 And everyday left with 4.35 local train...today u r late its already 12 anything else mam...

Ram ye info meri kaha se kab...i mean...i dnt know...

He looking at me without blinking eyes and...he cups my face in his hand and said

i love u...love u from first day when i saw you when u sit next to me...

i never ever feel the way i feel for u priya.

My eyes widened and I stared into his in awe.

Ppl around us watching us only ram left my face and said...

Ram : u wanna know who i m...what do and all...???

I just said i know u works at KI...but really dnt know what is KI...

He laughed at me...

Whats wrong y u laughing...

Ram : sorry sorry u think i works at KI...i m son of Amarnath kapoor owner of KI...kapoor industries...

What u r son of Amarnath Kapoor i mean u r The kapoors...

What r u doing here on metro station u had luxieries cars...why u travel by train...

Wait wait would be mrs.kapoor...ram said...I blushed...my cheeks turns to red tometo...

Actuly i workd on a project with government of india...Bullet train project so i decided to travel by local train for one week to undrstand the public metro transport...

my dad told me so many times not need for this but i beleive in perfection and i know no one can do better than me ...but on my first day i saw you sitting on bench...

from that day i fallen for u...

when 1 week passed my dad again told me 1 week over not to do this more but main kaha maane wala tha tumhe jo dekhna tha...

Pyar ka izhaar karna tha par kabhi himmat nahi yhi...

fir mene socha thoda time dena chahiye...lekin ...

Lekin kya ram i asked...

Lekin isi bich isha US se wapas aa gayi...yes isha meri gf hum US se sath the lekin i never feel like love for her...

i feel love for u priya only...

Main usi din tumhe apne dil ki baat batana chahta jis din isha station pe aa gayi mene use bata diya ki main tumse pyar karta hu...

Kya par tum to use u know hug kar rhe the...i said...

Ram : Priya i was jst consolng her she cried after here this...and u think i was...no no...

Jab use sab bata diya tha to i turned my face and said confesstion me itna time kyu...my cheeks truns red...

I love this red cheeks...he said...


I blushed more...

Us din mene dekha ki Sumit tumhe u know...ram said in low voice

Sumit kya ram mujhe kya...i asked with my eyebrow ups...

Tumhe flying ...he stopped....

I loughed ...u think mere or sumit ke bich...i asked...

Nahi matlab Haa koi bhi yahi sochega naa...or us din se tumahara kuch pata nhi tha kab aa rhi ho kab jaa rhi ho....

Wo wo i stammerd...Wo kya priya ram asked me ????

I was ignoring u i said...

What why ?????

Wo isha and u hugging and...

He laughed...Sorry priya...

aur tum or sumit ??

Wo hamesha ese hi byee karta hai by the way

Tumhe uska naam kaise pata chala ram i asked...

Plz I m the Ram kapoor...nothing is impossible for me...

Then i inquried abt that man Sumit yadav ur best frnd's Bf...rest mere sab doubs clear ho gaye and i coudnt wait anymore...anything else u wanna know or u wanna say...

Hmmm nhi mujhe kya kahna hai...

Ram : really tumhe kuch nahi kahna hai...???

Nahi...i said again...

Ram : ok then chale hamara stop aane wala hai...

And he abt to standup from seat i grabbed his hand

Finaly i said...

i love u too ram...love u from first day...but meri bhi himmat nahi huyi...

We both laughed...

Ram ye sab itni jaldi i mean...i said in low voice...

jaldi...ok...U wanna time...he said...

"I'll give you time to think about it.

Tell me your decision tomorrow,

I'll be waiting for you at the station," With that said, he quickly pecked me on my cheeks standing up and walking down the steps to get off the train...

". He wanted me to be his wife...

Oh my gosh he wanted me to be his wife...! He loves me i love him too then what i thinking...

A grin broke out on my face and I bounced my legs up and down in excitement. I didn't need to think about this. I wanted to be his girlfriend,his wife his children's mother...!

Since I had seen him that first day when he was helping out a poor old man at the station and down the stairs that led into the city. I bit my lip hard to contain the squeal that tried to escape.

He wanted me to be his wife...

"Excuse me!" I said as I ran hurriedly out of train past a middle aged women and to my usual bench. I looked around huffing and puffing panickly looking around to see if Ram was still here.

I rubbed my temple, tension settling in. He must think I didn't want to be ...because I didn't come. I let out a groan as I squeezed my eyes shut tightly. No, no, no!!!!!!!

I opened my eyes releasing a frustrated sigh and briefly looked to my right to find a person standing there then back at the ground before whipping my head up and back to the man.

Ram.

My eyes widened and I looked at him before my eyes dropped down to the McDonald's packet in his hand.

My eyebrows furrowed. We stood there looking at each other for a while before I slumped my shoulders and walked over to him without hesitation and hugged him.

"I thought you had left." I mumbled against his chest.

He wrapped an arm around me and laughed quietly.

"No. I would have waited all day if I had to till you came. Besides, I already know

"you love me."

He added in a husky voice.

I looked up at him and raised an eyebrow in amusement. "Is that so?" I asked teasingly.

He let out another laugh and leaned down to press his forehead against mine. He beened down on his knees...take out a box from pocket...

A beautiful diamond ring in his hand...and finally he said...

I love u priya...will u marry me...??

now he sounding a little nervous...

I looked up into his eyes.

"I thought you said you already knew that I love you."

"Yes but I would like to hear it from your mouth that you want to be my wife..."

ram said

i rolled my eyes and grinned. "Yes i ll Ram. I accept to be your wud be wife..."

A grin of his own broke out on his face before he crushed me against him in a polar bear hug and let out a happy laugh. "Rammm!" I laughed as well.

"People are looking." I said to him as a blush covered my cheeks. He smiled down at me his eyes twinkling brightly just as we heard the sound of the train approach.

"Who knew you could find "love" at a train station?" He whispered to me.

"Love nahi life " i said and I bit my lip

."I knew."

I smirked at him. "The day I saw you." I then said in a cheesy way.

No work today lets go to train ride...he laughed ...

We grinned at each other before leaning in for a kiss then interlocked our hands and walked towards the train hand in hand...

The end...


sorry for mistake

Thank you

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Posted: 10 years ago
#68
Wow! Very Beautiful Update
I love each & every scenes
Superb Ending
Thanks for the PM
Waiting for your next Story 😊


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Posted: 10 years ago
#69

Beautiful and perfect ending...just loved it 😊
Great job..👍🏼
thanks for the pm

Edited by 0332 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#70
Such a cute ending...👍🏼
Loved it...

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