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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: youandme272000

I hv lovd dis story .. read it many tyms on rkr..
its amazing work by amrit.. good story... 😊



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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: sravsbalh

Intresting story
continue soon waiting for the next one
thanks for the pm



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Posted: 11 years ago
#23
Hi dhrishti
Thanks for the pm and presenting the story here
Thanks to amrit for writing it

The story starts at intresting and soon it turned out ziffy in priyas life with a sweet shock twist
aakhir we want only Raya ...😆
So both are hatred towards eachother
Ram is buring his godness in his past and hating some one which he cant do
Vik &Neha were always there with him
Hope these two will help him built up a relation between these two stubborn adults😆

Ram started something soft for priya but Priya hasnt felt any
Lets se whats heading for us
Good stoory

Thank you for the pm once again
Loved it
waiting for next

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Story Going very interesting 😊
Continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#25
Lovely update
Vikram is right, ram is going to fall 4 priya!!!
Continue sooon😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
#26
vry nice
but part 3-5 ka pm nahi mila...:(
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Posted: 11 years ago
#27
whoa dear ...nicee n intersting story😊
n thanx for pm😊
cont soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Lovely story started with hate
Aah the arrogant tycoon Ram 😳
Thanks fr Pm
Goodone amrit n drishti
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Posted: 11 years ago
#29

part 6

@KI
Ram's cabin
3 of his employees wer showing him sm reports
ram tried concentrating but he failed..he felt restless..smthing strange

r-xcuse me 4 a few mins
d eployees went away

ram moved 2wrds d window
he crushd d curtains
he was breathing fast

ram to himself-wats wrong wid me..kya ho ra h muje..y is she evrywer..hw can i feel her wen she's not around..ye nai hona chaiye..its wrong..chaah kr b usse nafrat kyu nai kr pa ra hu mai..use dard dene ka khyal bhi muje kyu chot pahocha ra h..

vik entrd d cabin n heard evrysingle thing

v-its only bcz u dont wanna hurt her ram

ram turnd 2 face him
r-tu
v-tuje pyar ho ra h usse

ram had tears in his eyes
r-ye nai ho skta muje usse kya kisi se pyar nai ho skta

v-ram sbke lie koi na koi bana hota h tere liye priya bani h isliye tumdono aj sath ho

r-its not true meri zid ki wajah se priya mere sath h wo sari zindagi mere sath nai rene wali

v-tu reh payega uske bagair


ram went blank cudnt anser..
v-i got my anser...
n vik went away

ram stood still
he din know wat wud he do wen priya wont b around him

aftr d skol hrs priya went to shergil house

n-hi priya
p-hi neha
n-plz cum inside make urself comfortable
p-tx
n-kaisi ho
p-hm gud

neha din kno wat 2 talk abt wid priy

p-neha i treat u as a frnd so i need ur help
n-ha bolo priya feel free

p-mere dad innocent h ram ko bhot badi galatfehmi hui h mere dad ko lekar n i want 2 sort out d things

n-hw can i help u priya

p-tum vikram se kehna k wo is case ki depth tk jaye cctv footage can also help

n-its a brilliant idea priya m sure it'll work

p-m waiting 4 d day jb mere dad innocent prove ho jaye

n-uske baad
p-uske baad my lyf wil b back 2 normal..us khadoos se door shanti se apni lyf jeeungi

n-u'l leave ram

p-hum sath hi kb h neha its forced willingly kuch b nai h n sath rehne ka sawal hi nai uth ta h us pathar dil insaan k sath ek din bhi jeena ek sazaa h

n-ram aisa nai h priya mai use bachpan se janti hu
p-ho sakta h wo bachpan me aise na ho bt tym has changed him 2 worse

n-uski lyf ne use bhot chot pahuchai h priya
p-to ab wo logo ko chot pahuchate fir rae h

n-plz use thoda waqt to wo badal jayega

p-i dont care ye koi normal shadi nai h neha its just a deal

n-use ek chance to do

p-mere mom dad mere liye mera sb kuch h jo insaan unki respect nai kr skta wo mere liye koi nai h pyar to door ki baat h

n-i wont say furthr tym k sath i hope tumhe ram ka past b pta chal jaye

p-maine kaha na i dont care tum vikram se cctv footage ki baat zarur krna

n-ya sure
p-i think i shud leave now

n-hmm
p-bye
n-bye priya

neha thinks-ram aisa nai tha priya na kabhi aisa banana chahta tha..bt destiny made him a stone...tum hi badal sakti ho use...sirf tum...


Part 7

Ram returned 4m work
his eyes wer searching 4 priya all over d house bt she was nower

ram went disheartend 2 his room
he had a few drinks he felt exhausted

@8pm
ram was standing at d window wid d glass in his hand

r thinks-wo aai kyu nai h ab tk..kaha ho tum..hope u'r f9

he was v upset closed his eyes in wry

r-use kis haq se fone krke puchu..kya haq h mera us pr..nafrat krti h wo mujse

n he lowrd his head in vain

Bansi entrd d room
b-saab khana lga du apke liye
r-nai muje bhook nai h

@9pm
ram heard d twinkling sound of priya's anklets
he turned around
he saw her..his eyes sparkled

priya din even luk at him..kept her hand bag on d table n movd 2wrds d washroom

ram watchd evry actn of hers bt din uter a single wrd

priya stopd..n lukd @him

p-i gues ab ap puchenge k mai kaha gyi thi kyu gai thi bla bla rite

ram lukd at her blankly

p-neha se milne gyi thi den ma papa k ghr..kyu..wo main btana zaruri nai samjti

n she went 2 washroom...
ram breathd a sigh of relief dat she's f9

shergil house
n-aj priya ai thi
v-kyu
n-she wants k tum uske dad k matr me help kro use cctv footage chiye ofce ki 2 prove her dad inocent

v-dats a nice plan i kno mr sharma since a v long tym wo bhot loyal h

n-i kno wo inocent h bt uske bad priya is gonna leave ram
v-yup neha isi baat ki chinta muje b h
n-i want dem 2 b 2gthr
v-ram bht akela h neha use koi samajna hi nai chahta
n-priya 2 doesnt want 2 giv der marriage a chance
v-i wish mai undono k liye kuch kr pata
n-idea..hum abi b bhot kuch kr sakte h vik
v-wo kaise
n-unki dooriya mita k..lets call dem ovr diner 2mrw
v-gud idea yr
n-i kno

nxt morning
priya had hr bf n left 4 skol

ram was geting ready 4 ofice n brushing his hair in front of d mirror

ram kept on staring at himself

r thinks-wo dekhti b nai h meri taraf..baat karna b pasand nai h mujse..bhot bura hu main..tum har pal ehsaas dilati ho priya..

n he too left 4 d office...
priya had missed her skol bus...
she was luking 4 taxi

ram noticed her n stopd his car

r-cum inside priya i'l drop u
p-no thx i'l manage
r-plz i insist
priya din argue n sat in d car
he drove off

der was complete silence in d car
dey din luk @each othr

ram stopd @d main gate of her skol

p-tx 4 d help
n moved outta car

ram kept on luking @her retreating figure

he noticed dat priya 4got 2 take her buk n was kept on her seat
r-ye buk..use de aata hu

n he went inside 2 give her d buk

ram shouted her name but she cudnt hear due 2 kid's noise

ram tuk fast steps n tapped her sholder
she turnd around
p-ap yaha
r-u 4got ur buk

priya lukd @d buk n tuk it 4m his hand
p-tq
ram noded his head

a small kid who was playing wid his frnz fell down n his knees wer bleedig..d boy was crying badly

p-varun..n ran 2 him

ram 2 ran 2 d kid
r-dont cry baby..ur strong na..gud boy

n he pickd a boy in his arms n rushd 2 d first aid room

priya was confused wid ram's behaviour
she went behind ram...
ram 2 a teachr
r-plz mam c dis kid is hurt
t-tx 4 bringing him here
n d mam applied dettol on his knee
it creatd sm sensations
d boy clutchd ram's coat

r-hey champ..itne se dar gya tu..tu to supr man h dost..n supr man ko pain nai hota
boy smiled

b-muje b nai hota
ram movd his hand on d boy's head

mam-i'v done d dressing he's well nw
r-tx i shud also leave nw

he stood 2 leave
priya was watching him standing at d door
he lowerd his eyes n went away

priya thinks-ye h kya cheez...kitna ajeeb behave karte h...sari dunia se nafrat karte n ek bache ki chot dekh kr panic bhi karte hai...kyu apne apko itna confine kiya hua h apne..b d one u are...ye hypocracy kyu???

she went 2 her classroom wid many confusions in her head!!!!!

Part 8

@KI
vikram entered Ram's cabin

v-hello
r-hi
v-aj sham ko free h na tu
r-hm kyu
v-nai neha wants u n priya 2 join us for dinner

ram went silent for some tym
v-kya hua
r-wo nai ayegi mere saath
v-tu ek baar baat to kar usse just ask her once

r-she hates me so much yar
v-give her some tym m sure this equation will change

ram nods a yes
v-tu call kar n ask her
r-hm

vikram left
ram picks her phone n dials priya's number

priya didnt look at the screen n picked the call

r-priya
p-kaun
r-priya main ram...

p-oh kya hua
r-wo..
p-kya wo..listen i dont have much tym so jo bolna hai jaldi bolo

r-neha wants us to join dem for dinner

p-but
r-priya plz dey'll feel happy
p-ok main pahuch jaungi
r-nai i'll pick u up
p-thik hai

@ 7pm
priya was getting ready
she wore an aqua saree with black blouse luking very elegant n pretty

ram entered d room..didnt find priya
so he slowly moved 2 the changing room
he luked at priya n thought

r-she luks so pretty...
priya was struggling with her blouse's dori
ram walked in hesitation
r-may i help u
p-no thanks

ram walkd upto her n touched her fingers
priya lookd up n through the mirror she cud see ram standing behind her

she removed her hands n lowered her gaze..ram felt lost in her fragrance

ram tied the dori..he touched her bare back..her skin was so soft n gentle..she was so sacred

Ram controlled his flowing emotions n said
r-chale
p-hm

@Shergil House
n-oh finally u ppl are here
p-hi neha kaisi ho tum
n-m gud plz cum inside

dey went inside n made themselves comfortable
v-we'r very hapy to c u both here
priya lukd down
ram knew she wasn't happy to b with him

dey talked of climate movies food..priya neglected ram as if he wasn't evn present der

dis hurted ram the most

Ram gets a call
r-xcuse me guys
n went upto the balony
after talking for 3-4 mins
he ends the call n turns back

he saw priya's pretty face..she was laughing
r thinks-hasti hui kitni achi lagti ho priya..
Ram came back..neha got upto bring drinks for the men n orange juice for priya n herself

They had dinner..priya interacted more with neha n so did ram with vikram

priya helped neha to keep the dishes..

vikram to ram
v-dont worry ram all will b fine
r-kuch nai badlega vikram naa meri kismat na uski nafrat

neha to priya in the kitchen
n-plz priya ram ko ek chance to do khud ko badalne ka
p-meri feelings us insaan k liye kabi nai badlengi neha..unka ego bhot bada h

Nevik wer helpless..
Raya tuk leave from shergil house

in the car
silence prevailed
Ram gets a call from one of his employee
r-kya hua maanav
m-sir i wont b able 2 attend 2mrw's meeting..

r-wat kal ki meeting bhot imp h
m-i know sir but meri maa ka kal operation h
r-i dont care agar tumhari maa ka operation hai..u'r not the only one to luk after her

priya lukd at ram
p thinks-kitne pathar dil insaan h ye

m-but sir i want to b with her on such a crucial day
r-ok den do one thing..unhi k pas raho..u'r fired.
m-plz sir ye job bhot imp h mere liye dont do this
r-job imp h ya mom ye tumhe decide krna h..n ram cuts d call

priya was frustrated wid ram's behaviour
p-muje apke matters pr bolne ka koi haq nai h but

ram lukd at her
r-kya hua
p-ap kisi ki situation nai samajh sakte na..oh sry kisi ki baat samajhne k liye dil chaiye wo to apke pas hai hi nai

ram was hurt by priya's words
p-uski ma ka operatn h n u ask him to choose b/w job n mom..aur kitna neeche girenge aap

ram lukd away n din utter a single word

p-apke isi nature ki wajah se koi apke pas nai h isliye ap itne akele hai

ram stoppd the car
r-meri gaadi se utro
p-wat
r-i sai get out of my car
priya was not interestd to sit in his car
she stepped out
r-sahi kaha tumne mai hu hi aisa ab jaise ghar aana h tum aao i dont care

saying dis ram drove off..

priya kept on luking at the car getting disappeared in the dark night...

Ram had tears in his eyes..he was broken n shattered...yes i m alone..all he cud say!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#30
Nice Update
Continue soon
Thanks for the PM

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