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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sinalbest

Hi Neel Di & Writer...

Its not at only for Raya..
Happpiness & Sadness are two phases of a same coin..
And watz shown is somewat the bitter truth... Bt wat i feel is that in r stories we always want happy scenes..
I used to come here & read updates fir my entertaiment...
And sry to say this type of update makes us sad..

Its ur courage di tht u wrote this part... I appteciate this... Bt still unable to bear so much sadness in this part...
Its like all negativity.. Shruti suffered so much & Priya too suffering..
In reality life has some bitter truth bt we all always tries to avoid them.. R i can say dont want to face these issues..

So sry for my wrds...
And reg updates.. I will always comment.. 😊

Sagar




Hi brother ..
Yah in stories why we should see only happiness .. as you said happiness and sadness are two phases of the coin ..
as they are rich people they ,may get this type of troubles ... I mean hardles .. Asthe story was going smmothly till now this is the hard phase ..
i know readers also felt sad ,, even we too eqaully felt bad ..
but this story should something special to the writer soo when everyones pov is different she wanted to tell her POV ..
and I know many ppl avoid them but in this just want to show some bitter truths of life and some strong relation ship .. up and downs everything ..
We just thought kik readers may not like it furthur sooo we asked the opinion ..

Thank you for support ..
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Posted: 11 years ago
Am sorry for being rude but NEEL just stop bothering about likes atleast for this update...
Why you made her post a note..??Did anyone say we dont want updates anymore?No na they told how they felt and said it was painful part..So they told their feeling..Why cant you give the writer her freedom of expression.If truth hurts it hurts..no need to give it in sugar coated way.But when you give bitter truths even in the form of a story obviously readers will feel bad but for that you should not change your story format..
Thats what we do with Balh CVs..do they budge?Max times they wont..why???coz the writer has a story in mind means they should have faith in themselves and should go ahead.Thats it..
Here it was daring attempt to show the most loved character's plight in the form of some grievous act..obviously I felt bad but that doesnt mean I didnt like it.
Idantha enduku kani let her continue in her own way.Love u kada..dont worry..I am with you.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: iLuvRamKapoor

part-63 omg that creep aswine is back eww why is he behing priya again? idiot i hope he doesnt torture her that too in pregnancy

Here the ACP is working effeciently i liked that acp name
but i hope nothing hpns to priya n baby



Thank you so much choti ..
he is really a JERK
his chapter will end soon .. he is always behind priya ..
ACP wll soon sort out the issue .. ACPgood name na .. Thanks for it ..
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sss283

res

😲😲😲
am at a loss of words 😭
uhu uhu uhu
arghhh that ashwin...will kill him
how dare he 😡
pheww that was a huge ride
😭
chalo lets all go to kill that creep

update next part soonish pls
will need a little boost

request - please dont end it... ❤️



Thank you for the feed back ..
will try to continue soon
will clear your confusions ..


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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sss283

😲😲 huh i am reading this before the update
sighh
di we love the way you write... if it was tough for readers .. it would have been the same for you too
will read it and appreciate the effort .. we still cant ignore the face that such things happen ...kudos to you for attempting to write it
will read update and be back 🤗
smile pleaseee ❤️



Thank you for the support subbu
i know so many likes this ff
just couldnt able to understand wether should continue with or not
Thank you for your support ..
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: aanchaltulshan

i really liked this part but was not able to read further as ashwin was torturing priya and ram was also not there to protect her but i know he will reach there soon to safeguard her
pls Neel and Girja continue with the story



Thank you anchal for your feedback
Its s o sad but the next update will give all conclusions ..
Ram will reach soon ..
thank you for the support .
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Posted: 11 years ago


Thank you for the support ..
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: dhristikpd

Hi sorry for late reply just loved the update n pls continue soon n thank for pm 😊 😛 😆



Thank you so much
will try cont soon
than k you for support .
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: luvsakshi



Thank you for the support subbu
i know so many likes this ff
just couldnt able to understand wether should continue with or not
Thank you for your support ..
Count no -8

di it is because of the writers that readers exist
pls never think of stopping 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: armanz

What Shall I say..It was horrifying..heartwrenching..terrifying..gruesome to read the torment of two women..and Ram.

👏 to writer for attempting such a realistic tale.

Thank you so much ..some bitter truths na ..

we love to read/see happiness and love and I personally prefer happy and relaxing tales but this one is like reading the plight of many women on earth..So many Manimals all over the world who can be a father,brother,husband,friend and may be a stranger give pain and agony to womanhood..Its most disapproving act but helpless to stop such things..
Its a NO NO act...Its your braveness that you attempted that thing.



Thank you fr taking it as a positive note and Yah some where in the world in every corner They are giving pain to the womens .. Just wanna show the plight here .. well we will see how it turns ..






Asshwin is a moron..he should rot..Ram you just punish him and show him hell and then kill him..I wanna butcher him,.

Butcher na .. Ram will show his path soon ..

Such devilish act....Rabid dog.. ..

I know ..

Read the story with so much pain but the line "Did you get hurt Ram" brought tears in my eyes.. after that I couldnt stop them as they ran down continuously..

Yah even in that state also priya worried about him ..

Asshwin kissing Priya.....Urggg NOOO

Kiss matlab .. he kissed but she was unconciouced by that time .. 😕

One sincere request to writer yaha thak bahuth mushkil tha lekin I read it but please dont write any assault on Priya..already the situation, Shruthi's rape, her injuries would have caused so much agony to her..For God's sake she is pregnant and all this is soo much stressful to her which may lead to unwanted circumstances and nothing else on Priya PLEASE..I beg You

I know how it feels ..
will see whats gonna happen in future ..

Update was not a pleasure one as it brings out uncomfortable truths of real life..But I salute you for taking up the complex point.it touched me very deeply..but I think the reality check will be over in next part.

Wonderful Job..Keep it up dear.
Continue soon.
Thanks for PM.



I know its not plesured one but some truths should be vaklid out
this was such an ateempt
i know many scared for this update ..

anyway Thank you will try to update soon ..


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