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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: nntthani

thank you for the pm

so ram has started to feel for priya but i am happy priya hasnt come out of her fences
may be she is confused to accept ram's feelings. but ram deserves this.
i think there will be any twists with rishi in between
but anyway i love the way story proceeds and will be awaiting for the next




thanks for commenting😊, pleasure is all mine, Priya can't let her hurt again, this time has to prove himself, thanks for liking the story, keep reading
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: devmohan

Dear I have read the latest part when still some last parts are left for reading...😆😳 actually curiosity ho rahi thi issi liye 😳 but will finish reading previous parts soon😊
Thanks for such beautiful write up...🤗
Thanks for PMs.😃




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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: hafizsumon

awesome update...

please continue soon...
thanks




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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Mini1991

Lovely update...
continue soon !!!!




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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: youandme272000

Wow very good update...lovd it !!
Waiting for d nxt 😊




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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: joemahika

wow awesome update thanks for pm waiting for next update



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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: bpatil3

Thx for the pm.

What a marvelous description of the characters and their thoughts and actions, I m amazed by ur writing, fabulous. One hand priya had become a robot, jitne armaan the saare behgaye kahi, jitni himmat thi apne aapko sambhaal ne Ka, usne karliya, dusri baar uss himmat ka juta paana bahot mushkil hai, hasti bhi hai toh apne gam ko chupane ke liye, apne aap se bhag ti hai, kahi ram kiss yaad aur kami mehsoos na ho, uski khalipan ko mitane k liye apne aap ko busy rakhti hai, issme bhi kahi priya kho gayi hai. Ram k family k saath bhi hasti hai to unki khushi k liye, meethi k saath shayad wo priya jaag jaati hai. Newton's third law failing here for every action of ram , there is no opposite reaction from priya. Apne feelings ko iss tarah apne dil mein band karke rakhdiya hai, maano khud bhi uska taala dhoondne se bhi darr lagne laga hai, ye sochke kahi fir wo gum na ho jaaye. I m loving it so much.

Ram ko kahi iss shaadin k bandhan ko, dil se samjhliya hai aur usse nibhsne ki sachhi chah bhi dikh Rhine hai the way he rejected the girl, the way he started feeling bad for priya not talking to him , not paying attention, its hurting him do much. Loved it so much.
I loved the phone convo so much how beautifully it is written, I salute.
One word very short answer from priya had made ram disappoint more, there is nothing wrong one is trying bind the relation another one thinks her ppresence shouldn't lead him any compromise or create problems also she do not want yo get attached n hurt.
Superb Bbb




thanks for commenting😊, pleasure is all mine, am overwhelmed for such awesome comment, I seriously have no words to thank you, maine jitna nahi likha tha aapne usse zyada khoobsurat alfaazon me iska comment kiya hain, thank you so very much, am happy that you liked the part, will continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: luvsakshi

One word just fabulous dear ..

loved both Raya's turmoil ..
one is far away to understand what is love
the other one is struggiling to keep her love with in limits..
well expressed ...great going






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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: luvsakshi

Thank you so much for the PM




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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Sharmirayanz

Aaahhaaa awsome update..atlast ram ne kuch toh feel kia..kuch toh bola..now eagerly waitting 4 next :*




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