RaYa - OS - it happened.......by chance, updated on pg 10

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jineejiggs

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Posted: 11 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: peeyara
best things: Esha n Ram and Priya n siddhant are siblings 😆 👏 👏
Ram has abducted Priya to teach a lesson to her Father n brothers😕
sudhir sharma is a politician and wat problem they hv in accepting sid-Esha marriage😕
bechari ko wajah bhi bata dete sahi se, shayad wo khud samne se help karti, but no worries
story is brialliantly written..loved it
and pls dont ask whether u should continue or not, infact update it soon😊
thanks for the pm 😛

thanks for commenting😊, iss baar socha kuch different likhu so here it goes, am glad that u all liked it, Priya help nahi kar pati kyunki she was not there when the incident took place, yeh next part me aayega and then u will get to know the exact thing, thanks for liking, pleasure is all mine

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jineejiggs

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Posted: 11 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: lalmadhu
Woww...Very nice and interesting. Ram has abducted Priya and I find this Priya cute and childish. She gelled well with his sisters. Lets see what happens.

Please continue soon. Thanks for the pm.

thanks for commenting😊, yes Priya is very cute and childish actually she is just 22 so bachpana abhi bhi hain, pleasure is all mine

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jineejiggs

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Posted: 11 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: devmohan
Beautiful story...
Ram ne jo kiya sahi nahi kiya though his intentions are not bad but love birds ko milane ke liye koi tho bahana chahiye na...
Good iss story mein ek saath do do love birds milenge.😊

Thanks for PM😊

thanks for commenting😊, intentions kuch bhi ho par yeh koi tareeka nahi hain par Ram toh Ram hain, behen ke aage kuch nahi dikhta, dekhte hain aage kya hota hain, pleasure is all mine

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Posted: 11 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: sampa123
good one..ofcourse next uodt do

thanks for commenting😊, will do that soon

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Posted: 11 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: Mini1991
Nice start...
continue soon !!!

thanks for commenting😊

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jineejiggs

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Posted: 11 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: krunalidivecha
very nice start
continue soon😊

thanks for commenting😊, will continue soon

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jineejiggs

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Posted: 11 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: bpatil3
Thx for the PM.
beautiful beginning..
Oyye rambabu priyaji ke apharan kar liye 😆 alah angle hai, ghee agar seedhi ungli se nahi nikle toh tedhi karni chahiye, issiliye rambabu ne pehle siddhant n family ko samjhaya, jab baat na banni toh useeki behn ko utha laaye. ab dekhte hai how raya fell for each other.

Nuts seems to be very bubly n cute , innocent girl.

Nice write up.looking forward.

thanks for commenting😊, pleasure is all mine...thanks for liking the concept, iss baar apne pyaar ko kuch zyada hi lag raha hain feel kar rahe hain Ram😆, isi liye uthake hi le aaye😛, ab dekhna yeh hain ke madam kya feel karti hain

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jineejiggs

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Posted: 11 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: chillpc
Superb start...!!!

Contn soon...

thanks for commenting😊, will update soon

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jineejiggs

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Posted: 11 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: jmehta1957
very nice update...its different..pls continue.

thanks for commenting😊, am happy that u liked it

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Malati

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Posted: 11 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: jineejiggs

thanks for commenting😊, pleasure is all mine...thanks for liking the concept, iss baar apne pyaar ko kuch zyada hi lag raha hain feel kar rahe hain Ram😆, isi liye uthake hi le aaye😛, ab dekhna yeh hain ke madam kya feel karti hain

hona kya hai , pehle to h priya will fall for him , ram ka apni behn ke taraf pyar dekh kar aur usko kidnap karne ke baawajood apne ghar mein poora sammaan ke saath rakh liya hai toh obviously priya ko hi pehl karni hai😛

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