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Advitha

@Sakshiram

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#191

Lovely raya moments their bonding with shree s awesome and priya's ths motherly nature superb..neha never leaves to tease her...and the aloo parata dialogue superb tha...the house s filled with happiness with two love birds discovering their love..and the way u r writing s superb..finally last scene really nice...and everyone started teasing thm aur priya kitna blush karthi hai.. .overall superb update...thanks for the pm

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lalmadhu

@lalmadhu

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#192

Lovely update dear. Beautifully written. Loved the romantic moments of Raya and the family ones too.

Please continue soon.

Thanks for the pm.

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aanchal

@LovingRaYa

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#193

raya can't get enough of each other they always got the opportunity of romance

everyone is telling raya to start their family now they should seriously think about this

the update was fab as usual continue soon thanx for the pm

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lpsakshi

@lpsakshi

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#194

very touchy nd realstic loved it every word

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.sangs123.

@.sangs123.

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#195

so interesting updt
the family interactions and bonding btw them is so nicely written
shree bonding with priya is good
raya planning for family
good idea
waiting for next
cont asap