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Posted: 12 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: chillpc

Its truly awesome...
Liked priya's wish...
Ramji ke liye ab new day aagaya...
Contn soon pls...

thanks for liking, wil contn soon😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: Mini1991

Awesome update...
bechare ram ji...
priya ji kya punishment diya hai😉
oye kha laakr end kr diiya..😭
pls continue soon!!!!

thanks for such nice comment , will continue soon😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: Ramdeewani

Gosh it was so romantic !!! plz update soon the way u write is very beautiful

thanks so much for such a nice comment...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: lpsakshi

hahahahaha sweet update continue 😳

thank you so much...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: devmohan

thanks for liking, wil contn soon😊


wen is the next part dear??????????
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: 123fiza1

it too good..poor ram controled his romance :P ...cont soon

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: jineejiggs

read the two parts at one go, lovely one, liked the way Ram carried her to th bed and take the piece of ghungroo and examined it in front of his eyes, liked Priya's get up, plz continue, try to PM me next time when u update the next part

thank you so much for the appreciation dear...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#38

Hey guys this is fourth and the last part of this OS, Hope you all like this OS... Please do read and comment...and now enjoy the last part😊


OS: Dinner: Part : Four-Last Part


Priya: You are crazy Mr.Kapoor...

Ram: For you Mrs.Kapoor...

Taking her in his embrace she cuddles to him, staring deeply in her eyes Ram smiles wickedly to her as she goes rosiness with his expressions; not giving way to her ideas of dodging, he quickly starts his uncompleted task, enveloping her petite frame within his heavy, strong, masculine 72 inches body as he becomes handsome comforter on her, He slips his hands on her thin arabesque golden waist chain, unclipping it he brings his lips to her forehead to give romantic peck on it , She smiles shyly and closed her eyes as he begin the exaction of his payment for hellish punishment from his last night fully solvent debtor.

A few minutes later, as Ram laid spent, snoring in deep sleep with slight mouth open, while Priya watched him with the eyes sparkling full of love and respect for him, resulting, a smile creeps her lips, she lay on his chest listening her lover cum husband's heartbeats until she fell for a quick nap.

Long moments later,

Priya comes freshly loved and freshly bathed embellishing in apricot color sari with printed red patterns on it, water dripping from her wet hair as she adorns the sindoor and mangalsutra with finely kohled eyes, her lips kissing the light pink color lip gloss of fruity flavor, she looks divine beauty.

Approaching her husband, she draws her face near to her husband's laying her fingers on his chin as she moves it upwards to adjoin his both lips, as a corollary his lips rifts again while her lips denies to leave blissful smile...

Priya: Nearing his ears she whispers softly " Good Morning Mr. Kapoor"

Ram: (snoring in deep sleep)ammm...turns to other side...

She raises her both hands to dance her red glass bangles on his ears playing a "khannkhann" melody to wake him up...

Ram: Stirring in sleep, he grabs the pillow, settling it on his ears.

Priya: Resting her left hand on her waist and biting the index finger of her right hand between her teeth while thinking with playful expressions '' aisse nahi maanege'' she approaches to his face, shifting her hair to right shoulder and clenching them in her fingers she sprinkle water on his face.

Ram: (As his sleep is disturbed by his darling wife) wiping the water from his face, still keeping his eyes close, he miserably said "Sone do na yaar, puri raat so nahi paya"

Priya: Mr. Kapoor uthiye... Naue bajjgaye hain...please uthiye naa...

Ram: Mujhe aur sona hai... tumne puri raat sone nahi diya...(still in dozy state)

Priya: App puri raat soye nahi to kar kya rahe the??(she asked curiously pouting her lips to one side)

Ram: ammm...(still in his sleep)

Priya: Kya ammm... bataaiye naa... (now she joggles him)

Ram: Tumhe dekh raha tha... (still in his sleep and speaking in his dreamy status)

Priya: (stunned from his reply she scarlets) What... oh god...You are impossible Mr. Kapoor...fine... aap sote rahiye mein neeche ja rahi hoon

As she gets up to move he instantaneously wakes up, clasps her right hand, pulls her near him and she tumble on his lap, colliding with his chest she makes firm grip on him to gain balance, mesmerized by her mystical beauty, tugging her hair strands behind her ears, with mischievous grin, he whisper to her "Meri neend uda ke app kahaan chaldii Mrs. Kapoor".

Priya: (goes reddening) chodiye...koi aa jayega...

Ram: he laughs and embracing her, he took turn and seizes her under him...

Priya: (full tomato red) she pleads to him "chodiye naa...please..."

Ram: Admiring her while lost in her aroma and trailing his fingers on her cheeks, he ask teasingly" why you have became so red"

Priya: She lowers her eyes...bits her lower lip... whoo...whoo...

Ram: he laughs and draws a kiss on her forehead... Looking deeply into her eyes

"I love you, Priya," he whispered.

"I love you too...Ram," she replied.

He closed the distance between them and placed a gentle kiss on her lips.


The End😊

Edited by devmohan - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#39
last part!!!!will miss it...nicely written..finally ram priya forget everything n enterd to d love land..lovely end...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#40

Originally posted by: 123fiza1

last part!!!!will miss it...nicely written..finally ram priya forget everything n enterd to d love land..lovely end...

Thank You so much dear for your appriciation...😊

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