'kitne ajeeb rishte hai yha'LAST UPDT part 30on121

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

veena singh

@veena23

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#451

Part 13

khair...baat aage badhi...present time se 2 week pehle...neha vikram ki annivrsry...ram priya bhi aate hain asusual priya in red green combi saari & ram in his vry authentic black suit with red tie.. Bas problm ye thi ki neha vikram ne itna natak karne k bad party apne ghar pe rakh li...

Ram...(to vik..)..ghar pe party kyun rakhi??

Vikram...mtlb???

Ram...are neha ki wish

vikram...wish???..kaisi wish???

Ram...aahh jiske liye us rat tune utne chakkr lagwaye the...

Neha...wooo..wo mne cancle kar diya...hotel nhi mila na..

Priya...to us din tumlog 1 ghante tak hotel m kar kya rhe the???

Vikram...are chhodo na ab party ho rhi hai na...bas bht hai..chalo andr...neha priya ko leke chali jati h aur ram vikram k sath rhta h...pr priya ki nazar to bas ram pr hi rhti h...aur ram to bhai bisnss tycoon h to unse milne walo ki kahan kami h...tabhi ek ladki aati h aur ram se milti h...ram bht hi gnuinly milta h usse...dono bate karne lagte hain...phir vikram bhi bate krne lagta h phir kya...neha to neha h...priya ko lekar aa jati h dono k pas pehle to ajeeb harkte kar k us ladki ko bhagati h...aur phir tut padhti h vikram pe...bechara maafi mangta rhta h pr wo sune tab na...priya bht hasti rhti h ram use dekhta rhta h...use lagta h ki neha itna ovr react kar rhi h...dekha to priya ne bhi tha pr use to kuchh fark hi nhi pad rha h...ram ko na ajeeb problm h..wo khud nhi samjh pata h ki use chahiye kya...ye priya bhi ek no ki bewkuf h jaha react karna chahiye wha react nhi karegi...faltu jagah krti rhegi...ram ko phir se gussa aa jata h aur wo drink karne lagta h priya use dekhti rhti h...phir neha se kehti h

priya...nehaaa..mr.kapoor itna kyun pee rhe hain..agr unhone koi tamasha kar diya to

neha...kuchh nhi karega usko adat h

priya...pr mne to kabhi nhi dekha itna peete hue

neha...achha ??..tum use dekhti bhi ho kya???

Priya...please yar...

Neha..tum bas react mat karna kuchh nhi hoga

neha darling aaj tumhari salah kam nhi aayegi qki halat badal gye hain ab react karne se kuchh nhi hoga balki react nhi karne se hoga..are kuchh kuchh ho gya h na...khair..aise sab chal rha hota h...finally party khtm ho jati h...rambabu kam bigadne bhar ko pee chuke hain...to boss..ab to ram hi jan bachaye...anyways...ram aur priya ko vikram ghar chhodta h waise ram car chala sakta tha pr vikram risk nhi lena chahta tha...isiliye dono ko ghr bhi chhoda aur ram ko kamre me bhi..phir vikram chala jata h...thodi der bad priya aati h kamre me..dekhti h ram shoes pehne hi bistr pr ludhka hua tha..waise to jaga hi tha..pr thoda hosh me nhi tha...priya ake uske shoes nikalne lagti h

ram...kya kar rhi ho???

Priya kuchh nhi bolti h bas karti rhti h

ram...tumse bola nhi jata h puchh rha hu kya kar rhi ho???

Priya phir bhi nhi bolti h...phir uska pair uth k upar kar deti h...uski tie nikalti h

priya...baithiye uth k

ram...kyun ??nhi baithunga...pehle batao kya karogi???

Priya kuchh bolti nhi h bas ghurti rhti h..ram uth jata h priya uski coat nikalti h phir shirt nikalne lagti h...ram apni shirt pakad leta h

ram...aree ye kya kar rhi ho tum???

Priya shirt chhuda k jbrdsti nikal deti h aur jane lagti h tabhi ram uska pallu pakad k khinch deta h chunki saadi pinup thi isliye phat jati h thodi si...priya use gusse se dekhti h phir jane lagti hai

Ram...tum apne apko samjhti kya ho puchh rha hu tumse kuchh jawab nhi de skti ho...

Lo hua bawal...ufff jab bolenge ye dono ulta hi bolenge...priya anchal chhuda k jane lagti h to ram use pakad k deewar pe atka deta h...(are rambabu..wo kurta lane ja rhi thi yar hadh karte hain aap bhi...ab bina shirt k chadte jayenge uske upar...ufff...koi remote control h ki nhi aapka)

Ram...kyun aise kar rhi ho tum...??

Priya...mujhe apse koi bat nhi karni h

ram...kyun???

Priya...qki karungi to apko achhi to lagegi nhi to bolne ki jarurat hi kya h

ram...tumhe ye kisne kaha???

Priya...apki harkto se pta chalta h..

Ram...meri harkate???...fark padhta h tumhe koi meri harkato se????

Priya...han

ram...lagta to nhi h

priya...ye aap kaise keh sakte hain???

Ram...kyun nhi keh sakta hu...agr tumhe fark padta to mere chhune se bhi tumhe fark padhta...to tum react karti jarur...lekin tumne aisa nhi kiya...kyun nhi kiya???

Priya jane lagti h ram use phir se pakad leta h aaj to boss aar ya par...bina sune rambabu chhodne wale nhi hain...khair...

Ram...bolo kyun nhi react kiya tumne us din jb mne tumhe chhua...

Priya...kyun react karna chahiye tha mujhe???

Ram...qki mne bina tumhe puchhe bina bataye tumhe chuua tha...

Priya...mujhe nhi pta...

Ram...kyun nhi pta h

priya...please mr.kapoor...mujhe nhi pta ki kyun nhi kiya ...m karna chahti thi react ...bht sara gussa tha jid thi mere andr apke liye m wo sb nikalna chahti thi lekin pta nhi kyun nhi nikal payi...jb apne mujhe chhua aur maine apki ankho me dekha aur kuchh nhi kar payi...mera sara gussa sari jid kahin chali gyi...m nhi janti kyun hua...(they talking about mouthwarm)

Ram priya ko dekhta rhta h priya ki ankho me ansu rhte hain...wo priya k gale lag jata h...uske hontho ka ehsas priya apne shouldr pr feel karti h aur ankhe band kar leti h...kuchh der dono waise hi rhte hain...pr ram disbalance hone lagta h...actully uski drink thoda asr karti h...wo ladhkhada jata h to priya use bistr pr lita deti h aur jane lagti h..ram uska hath pakad leta h...

Priya...i am sorry mr.kapoor...but i think i really love u aur m apke bina nhi jee sakti ...chahe aap mujhe pyar kare ya na kare koi bat nhi...bas ek bar mujhe maaf kar dijiye...fir aap jaise chahenge waise hoga...please mr.kapoor...

Lekin ram so chuka tha...priya ram ko dekhti h aur sochti h kash ye mr.kapoor ne sun liya hota...khair us din ka last touchup wala kiss priya pr udhar tha jo aaj usne bhi utar diya...she kiss on his lips...par wo nhi chahti thi ki unke beech ek aur guilt ya galtfahmi aaye isliye wo apna hath chhuda kar chali jati h...shayad ram ne uski bat suni thi ya nhi...pta nhi...par ek bat to thi ki ram me bhi bht kuchh badal gya tha...bas ye kisi ko pta nhi tha...(actully ye main nhi chahti ki wo sune is baar m rambabu ka izhar sunna chahti hu...main dekhna chahti hu ki ek gusse aur zid se bhara hua insan pyar kaise karta h...isliye ye kissa yhi khtm kiya...nayi kahai ko janm dene k liye)

Flashback end

@present...wahi ram h whi priya h wahi holi ka din h...bas aaj ram ka gussa jid sab us thappad k sath bahar aa gya...lekin aaj halat pehle se alag h...1 sal pehle jo jid aur gussa badla lene k liye tha aaj wo jid aur gussa apni bat na keh pane k liye hai...ram bht kuchh kehna chahta tha priya se...priya bhi aaj soch k hi aayi thi ki mr.kapoor se kuchh to karwa k rhegi..aaj ya to sab theek ho jayega ya hamesha k liye barbad ho jayega...

Ram...tum hamesha galti karke jeet nhi sakti priya

priya...mne kab kaha m jitna chahti hu ye to aap hi apneap ko takleef dete hain

ram...ha qki m janta hu ki m khud ko takleef dunga tabhi tumhe takleef hogi aur mujhe sukun milega...

Priya...theek h to ho gya na...ab to khtm kariye ye sab

ram...nhi abhi baki h

priya...ab to sirf jan jani baki h mr.kapoor...

Ram ...jan to chali gyi priya...

Tabhi achanak ram ka phone bajne lagta h...sudhirji ka phone rhta h...

Sudhirji...ram beta m kab se priya ka phone laga rha hu wo phone nhi utha rhi h sab theek to h

ram...main apse milna chahta hu...abhii

sudhirji...kya hua???..priya theek to h

ram...ha...bas mujhe milna h apse...

Sudhirji...theek h tum yha aaoge ya m wha aau???

Ram...nahi mere office me milte hain...

Itna keh k ram phone rakh deta h aur wha se chala jata h priya ko nhi pta tha ki wo kisse bat kar rha tha...

To b continue...

Edited by veena23 - 12 years ago

Quote

sushfiza

@sushfiza

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#452

Res me first ... it was superb...i raya part was too emotional...loved it verymuch...well described...u r such a amazing writter...n now the call...what would be the reason...why ram wants to meet sudhir ji...increasing curiosity...ha ha...update soon...

Edited by 123fiza1 - 12 years ago

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

shavii

@shavii

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#453

comment evening yaar veena maate tum aage kab badogi is ff ka storyline😆
so priya fell in love and ram would have heard it i think he wanted to break her heart and he did it 😭
ab ye kya kichoo kichoo sari ko kicho hua shirt ko kichoo😆

continue soon ..😳

Edited by shamavi - 12 years ago

Quote

Malati

@bpatil3

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#454

Thx for the pm

Priya priya pyar hogaya..❤️
I can make out her expressions, looks so easily u write it so well 🤗
rambabu, priya react n karein to problem, karien to problem.. hadh hai veena kaha phasa diya aoni priya ko?😔😭 remote to aap ke haath mein hai...

Kissie udhar chukavu zid pura kardiya dhanywad😃

Rambabu beti wapas karnewale hai kya sudhirji ko?
hamesha kahi atka deti ho hume yaar veena ...Waiting

Edited by bpatil3 - 12 years ago