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gupta90

@gupta90

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Posted: 12 years ago

#231

its your story, we trust you, you can proceed it anyway you like 😊

will be very happy to read the update today itself

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itsmeg3

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Posted: 12 years ago

#232

Originally posted by: veena23
ok...i change my mind...soch rhi hu aaj hi update de du...but update karne se pehle kuchh btana chahti hu...is SS k sath thoda locha ho ja rha h...to m ram sakshi dono k fans ko bolna chahti hu ki bhai jb bhi meri stories padha karo to pls ye deemag me mt rakha karo ki m kiski fan hu...mera aur rambau ka jo bhi relation h wo bht prsnl h...kahaniyo se uska koi mtlb nhi h...m aisa isliye kh rhi hu ki shayad aage rambabu aur rude ho jaye shayad priya aur gltiya kare to hv petience...main hu na...trust me

Abb suspense jayada ho gaya...update de do jaldi

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veena singh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#233

Originally posted by: luvbalh
haha. didi .. aapki note padli..
can only ask y this now.? i will be happy if u update hehehe

hahaha...are agli update padh k public galiyan na de isiliye ye sab scene bna rhi hu...lol😉

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veena singh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#234

Originally posted by: shamavi

maate i trust u completely u have ability to portray each and every character properly with proper view i trust u 😳 update soon

hahaha...ye mujhe pta h...😛

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veena singh

@veena23

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Posted: 12 years ago

#235

ok...here i go...with in few min...

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veena singh

@veena23

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Posted: 12 years ago

#236

part 8

Ram mudhta h to dekhta hai priya bathroom se nikal kar aa rhi h...wo bhi sirf petikot blouse me...ram to use muh aur ankhe phad k dekh rha tha par jb tak priya ki nazar padhti h wo kafi nazdik aa chuki thi...ram ko dekhte hi dar k mare uski cheekh nikal jati h aur carpet pr uska pair fisal jata aur seedha rambabu ki baho me...aur kamal ki bat ye hoti h ki jb priya baho me aati h to rambabu ki nazar kahi aur hi chali jati h jiski wajah se priya ki to solid lagti h wo turant sambhal kar bister ka chadr khinch k odh leti h...

Ram...are ye kya kar rhi ho..chadr kyun khrab ki

priya embarrs hoke bolti h to kya karu???

Ram...kapde nhi pehn sakti ho

priya...kapde hain kahan???

Ram...mtlb???

Priya...mtlb maine yha bister pr rakhe the...h nhi

ram...wo mne cupboard me rakh diye..bister pe kapde rakhne ki kaun si tameez h changing room kisliye h..??...wha nhi rakh sakti thi...

Priya...sorry

ram...aur...aur tum yha kar kya rhi hu...

Priya...mtlb???...naha rhi thi abhi naha k aayi hu

ram...aaahh...mera mtlb h tum to apni ma k wha jane wali thi...

Priya...ha nhi gyi

ram...kyun???

Priya...apse puchha to tha...apne kuchh kaha hi nhi to kaise jati

ram...oh har kam mujhse puchh k karti ho???..aur agr nhi jana tha to bta to dena chahiye tha...darwaza to band rakhna chahiye tha...

Priya...darwaza to band hi tha..aap hi pta nhi kaise khol k aa gye...

Ram...han to theek h mujhe kya pta andr se band h ki bahar se band h..mne lock dekha to khol k aa gya...

Priya...aap itna chilla k kyun bat karte hain...mujhe sunayi to deta h..

Dono thodi der chup ho jate hain..priya waise hi chadr lapete khadi h...thodi der bad

ram...khadi kyun ho ja ke kapde kyun nhi pehn rhi ho...

Priya...kaise pehnu???

Ram...kyun tumhe ye bhi nhi ata h??

Priya...wo bat nhi h...mere kapde...wha cupboard me h na...

Ram...ha to...

Priya...aap...aap hatenge uske samne se tabhi to nikalungi

ram...are itni jagah to h wha se nhi nikal sakti ho (mtlb apni glti kabhi nhi deni h...jagah to h pr apna size bhi to dekhiye..aap cupboard k samne khade ho jayenge to dusra kidhr se usme adjust hoga...ufff...hadh hoti h jid ki bhi..rambabu wha se jate nhi h bas thoda hat k khade ho jate hain...qki unhe abhi tak file jo nhi mili thi...) khair priya dheere se aati h...aur almari me saadi dhundhne lagti h...saadi se jyada uska dhyan is bat par rahta h ki ram uske kitna nazdik khada h...pehli bar wo itne nazdik se itni der tak ram ka sath mehsus kar pa rhi h...mare ghabrahat aur darr k use saadi mil hi nhi rhi h actully use yad hi nhi aa rha h ki usne nikali kaun si thi...upr se ram..khada hoke faltu k expression de rha h to priya aur bhi gltiya kar rhi h...5min ho jate hain usne saman bikherne k alawa kuch nhi kiya...ram ko gussa aa jata h

ram...kya kar rhi ho...???...

Priya...(thodi nerous thodi dari hui aur bht hi jyada uncomfrtable..uski ankho me ansu aa jate hain ram k chillane se)..saadi nhi mil rhi h

ram...kaise milegi???..tameez se rakhi hui h to kaise milegi yha wha fenki hoti mil jati...par samne rakhi h to nhi milegi..ram saadi dene k liye aage badhta h to jo saman priya ne gira rakha tha usme uljh k ladhkhada jata h aur priya pr bend ho jata h..priya cupboard k door pr ludhak jati h...are rambabu ka wajan h..kahin tut na jaye bechara...

Ram...ufff ek kam tameez se nhi hota h tumse..mne sab sahi kiya tha phir se bikher k rakh diya...

Priya...mr.kapoor hat to jaiye cupboard ka door tut jayega aur mujhe chubh bhi rha h...

Ram hut jata h aur priya ki saadi uske hath me pakda deta h..priya bhag k changing room me chali jati h aur jitni bhi sanse rambabu k kareeb aane se ruki hui thi wo jaldi jaldi lene lagti h...lol..udhr rambabu bhi...cheezo ko shi kark aur apni file leke jaldi se bahar chala jata h...

Ufff..khair is incident k bad dono ki jhijhak aur badh jati h ram ka gussa aur jid bhi badh jati h qki usko lagta h ki wo shayad har rha h...priya to kuchh samjh hi nhi pa rhi h...khair pta h wo itni normal kyun behv karti h...isliye nhi ki ram se darti h ya apni glti se guilty h...ye to h hi wajah pr ek khas wajah aur h...wo h hmari gyan guru neha jo priya ko ram gyan deti rhti h samay samay pr deti rhti h,...unhone ne hi sikha rakha h priya madm ko ki ram ki bato ya gusse pr bht rudly na react kare wrna wo ovr react karne lagega...to aur jid karega...bs yhi ek problm h ram babu ki agr unko chupchap sunte rho to sab sahi h aur react kar do to bas puchho mt...to bhai priya neha k ramgyan k hisab se kam pe lagi hui h...dekhte hain pehle kiske bardasht karne ki himmat khatm hoti h...do pathhar takraye hain dekhte hain pehle kaun tut jata h...

Lagbhag 6 mahine bad...

Zindgi waisi hi h...quality whi h sirf quantity badhi h...pehle se jyada gussa pehle se jyada jid aur pehle se jyada baten...qki ab amna samna jyada hota h to baten bhi jyada hongi hi...aaj kapoor mention me pooja h..actully ab gharwale bhi kya kare aise logo ki apas me shaadi kara di h jinhe bhagwan hi sambhal sakte hain to lo bhai...ab bhagwan ko to yad karna bnta hi h...khair sharma house bhi yha pahoncha h...neha vikram bhi h aur kapoor family to h hi..kapoor family ki pooja h to awaiye to hogi nhi...bade bade log badi badi baten to hongi hi...aur jb badi badi baten hongi to bade bade bawal bhi honge...to here is a new one bawal...pr kamal ki bat ye h ki bawal ka anjam bada dhamal hota h...lol...ab pooja wgrh me bawal krane k liye bhi spcl type k log bulaye jate hain na...to yha bhi aaye h aise hi kuchh log jo pooja ko bhi apni gossip ki chatni laga hi dete hain...khair...do admi khade hoke bate kar rhe the...

First prson...are yar is ladki aur iske gharwalo ki bhi kismat hi khul gyi ram kapoor se shaadi kark..

2nd prson...uski ma ko dekh rha h kitna itra rhi h

1rst p...are ye middle class wale hote hi h aise apni betiyo ka jal bichha kr amir ladko ko phasate hain...

2nd..aur nhi to kya wrna inki aukat to yha pair rakhne ki bhi nhi h...

Priya sab sun rhi hoti h wo ram ki trf dekh rhi hoti h ki shayad wo kuchh react karenge...aur mr.kapoor karte bhi hain react..wo undono k pas jate hain aur kehte hain..

Ram...han yar sahi keh rhe ho...gareebo ko dan de do to wo khud ko bhagwan samjhne lagte hain ki unhe chadhawa chadhaya gya h...ye nhi sochte ki unhe bheekh di gyi h

itna keh k ram hasne lagta h aur priya ki trf dekhta h...priya ko gussa aa jata h pr phir neha ki bat yad kark...wo khud ko rok leti h aur wha se andr chali jati h apne kamre me...lekin...gussa to tha hi uske andr...jo rambabu ka intezar kar rha tha...wo baith k ro rhi hoti h..phir neha aati h use bulane

neha...priya tum yha kyun aa gyi...chalo bahar

priya...nhi mera sir dard kar rha h tumlog jao...

Neha...are kya ho gya r u ok

priya...yes i am...please tum jao yha se...please

neha...ok ok..calm down ja rhi hu...

Neha chali jati h priya kamre me rhti h..pooja khtm ho jati h sabhi apne apne kamre me chale jate h...ma ram k kamre me jati h...

Ma...kya h ram ye sab kyun itna gussa karta h tu...kabhi to usko hurt karta h kabhi uske liye..

Ram...ma please...mne uske liye kuchh nhi kiya..

Ma...tu keh dega aur m man jaungi...chal chhod jane de jo hua so hua...khana to kha le

ram...ma please mere sar me dard ho rha h..aap bansi kaka ko bol dijiye ek cup chai de de..adrakwali..

Ram...ajkl bht adrak wali chai peene laga hain..achha theek h...

Ma bansi kaka ki bjay priya se keh deti hain..priya ka deemag to waise hi khrab h leke jati h chai ram k room me...

Ram...tum???..tum kyun aayi ho yha

ma...mne hi bheja h...tujhe chai chahiye thi na

ram...nahi chahiye mujhe chai...

Ma...rammm...kya jid h beta..le lo

priya...rhne dijiye ma ..chai peeyenge to uspe bhi tana marna padega aur aaj ka to kota pura kar chuke hain mere ma papa ki beizzati kar k...

Ma...priyaaa

ram...nhi ma bolne dijiye...mujhe samjha rhi thi na aap...dekh lijiye...kaisi soch h apki bahu ki

priya...oh...meri soch...???..meri soch ki bat kahan se aa gyi baten aap ghatiya karte hain aur meri soch ko glt keh rhe hain...aur apki soch kaisi h...??..meri glti ki saza dene k liye aap mere ma papa ki insult karenge...??...yhi apke sanskar h...mujhe tameez seekhate hain apko kitni tameez h...aap mere sath kuchh bhi kariye m wo deserv karti hu lekin mere ma papa ye sb deserv nhi karte hain mr.kapoor...aur nahi mne kisi ko bhi ye haq de rakha h ki wo mere ma papa ko achhe bure hone ka certificate de...chahe wo aap hi kyun na ho...honge aap koi the ram kapoor...mere liye aap insan hi h bhagwan nhi to m apse insaniyat ki ummeed karti thi pr aapne to...sshhhee..mr.kapoor

ma...priya chup ho ja ye kya tareeka h baat karne ka bado ka bhi lihaj nhi kar sakti h...

Priya rone lagti h...i am sorry ma...pr inhone mere ma papa k bare me...i am sorry ma..i am vry sorry...

Priya rote huye kamre se chali jati h...ma ram ki trf dekhti h wo bht disturb ho jata h...

Ma...ram..wo priya...beti h na...isiliye...waise bhi use...

Ram...rhne dijiye ma ye hamesha se hi aisi h

ma wha se priya k kamre me aati h priya bht ro rhi hoti h...ma aram se priya k pas aake baithti h..uske sr pe hath pherti h to priya unse lipat k aur rone lagti h...

Priya...i am sorry ma m aise bat nhi karna chahti thi pr m nhi bardasht kar sakti ki koi mere ma papa ko aise kahe...hamesha unlogo ne meri wajah se saha h...ma please mujhe maf kar dijiye...please ma i am sorry...

Ma...priyaaa...priya...chup ho jao aur pehle meri bat suno...priyaaa...look at me...tumhe sorry bolna h to mujhe nhi ram ko bolo...

Priya...ma...aap bhi??...

To b continue...

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shavii

@shavii

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Posted: 12 years ago

#237

omg goddd veeena maaate aab raaaz ko raaaz hi chod deti hoo😆oh god even ram mom ask priya to say sorry? oye kuch to hain which is not nice? not happy yaar maate kyun kyun kyun?

chalo jaldi update karo

Edited by shamavi - 12 years ago